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posted by DeadlyDarkness
Chapter 2

"No one wants her here, Jenibel." He hissed at her. "But she's your daughter!" She exclaimed.
"And? That doesnt mean Im supposed to 爱情 her!" He raised his voice at her.
This was unusual he never did that. She flinched at his words tears welling up in her eyes. "Dont say that." She 说 softly.
He laughed at her, a scary sound. She had heard him, so she whipped back her hand and punched him in the face. "Your NOT the man I had married, Jonathan."
He glared at her. Tears streaming down his cheek. It hurt. Badly. Then his body started trembling. And..and then he disapeared leaving a big, furry, black 狼 behind. And my mother on the ground..Bleeding and possibly unconscious. But, I couldnt handle it. The sight of my mother && father like this. They had NEVER fought in front of me. but then I guess I was crying because I 狼 was staring straight at me. I screamed and fainted. Possibly from me being scared to death.


I woke up crying and sweating cold sweats. There was a 枕头 下一个 to me so I rolled over and cried. Cried hard.

All, that was going through my head was that I Alexandra Marie was the cause of all the sadness in my life. All the agony. EVERYTHING. Was MY Fault. I needed a friend. I needed just someone! Someone to care for me! I needed my mom, Jenibel. But she's dead..That thought made me cry even harder than I thought possible. I didnt care who heard me. I didnt care about anything. All I knew was that I need to let out all the sadness. I knew I wouldnt get out of here if I just kept it all in. Then, something distracted my thoughts. A tap. A tap on the door. I just stared at it. Not able to find my voice. "Darling. May I come in?" The voice said. It sounded sweet and gentle. But I couldnt trust it. No matter who it was.

"Im going to open the door now." And before I could respond the door opened. And a long, tall, and dark figure came through. Scared, I climbed under the covers of the 床, 床上 I was in and whimpered.

"Sh, darling. Its okay. Im not going to hurt you. I was just..worried. 你 wouldnt stop crying." I still hadnt gotten from under the covers. I guess the figure had gotten impatient thinking that I was going to come out. Dumb Fool. I thought.

It suddenly pulled on the covers revealing my face. I, scared, just stared at..him. Trying to focus on who he was. Then I swallowed hard. "Cauis." I whispered.

"Yes?" He smiled. At me. I wanted to scratch his eyes out. But I smiled back, not wanting to ruin the precious moments I had to uncover some of the secrets.

Tears started streaming down my face. He was going to hurt me I knew it. He was lying when he 说 he was worried.

He frowned. And reached his hand out to wipe the tears but I screamed and jumped back so far that I fell off the bed. I just laid there as he quickly came over to my side and quietly said, "Sorry." I instinctivly reached my foot out and kicked him in his private area. Suprisingly he didnt flinch 或者 wince 或者 anything. Instead, I heard my leg crunch and bloodcurdling screams escape my mouth.

He gasped figuring out what I was trying to do. But instead of being mad he took me in his arms and walked me to a room full of 吸血鬼 with..needles. Lots of needles && medicines. I thought to myself medicine? needles? What the hell? Was this all here because I was? 'Cause I dont remember seeing this room.. Before I even got to look at the people surrounding me I feel two sharp objects dig into my injured leg and my vision begin to fade.
As 你 know I 说 I did two other versions of Chapter 10. Foreveryours asked if I could post them on and I thought 'Why not?' so here it is. 你 will see some similaraties between them and Chapter 10 but 你 know I kinda merged them together to make Chapter 10. These versions will not be accounted for in the continuation of the Kayla series. They are 发布 on here entirely for your interest as to how things could have turned out. They both start out the same way as Chapter 10. So here it goes!

[Note: I didn't call Edward 'The Lion' until the final Chapter 10. In the vampire version he is...
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posted by twilight-7
Edward's thoughts - bold
Kayla's thoughts - italics



I had managed to make it through a whole 月 of school without anything unusual happening. The murders had seemed to stop. No one in 或者 around Forks had been killed so maybe the newborn had learned not to kill so often 或者 someone had dealt with it. I felt kind of disappointed that I hadn’t been able to go after it and teach it a thing 或者 two. I think it would be quite fun battling a newborn but since it decided to stop I guess I’ll just have to wait. Edward and I continued to have our silent conversations. It was weird, him being inside...
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter 11.. Sorry teh others have been short!!!! Hope 你 like it. Please read, rate, 评论 and Enjoy!!!!

CHAPTER 11

Edward’s POV

I don’t know why I ran, but I did. And now that I think about it, it was one of the stupidest things I did.
I was nearly half way 首页 when I heard someone following me, so I went even faster.
“Edward, I 爱情 you” She screamed. I stopped abruptly. Then I thought about it.
“Bella?” I 说 in my head, confused.
“I 爱情 you” I felt the force that she put into it. She was struggling 更多 than me.
I ran back and stopped about a hundred ft away from...
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posted by twilight-7
here it is!

Edward's thoughts are in bold and Kayla's in italics.



I looked at Dr Cullen, worried I had put him a difficult situation. I wanted to explain to him that he didn’t need to leave, that I wasn’t going to blab to the whole town about what he and his family were. But how could I tell him?
I looked down at the dead man on the floor. I knew that this wasn’t an animal attack. The Azdi part of me was telling me this, 展示 me the difference between an animal attack and a vampire attack. I also knew that this was no ordinary vampire attack. It was too messy.
“Dad, I’m going outside.”...
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posted by twilight-7
So here it is, Chapter 4.



I opened my eyes and the first thing I noticed was that the pain in my head had gone. I sighed with relief and the 秒 thing I noticed was that I could count all the cracks on the ceiling. I smiled. I sat up and realised that I was on my bed. I looked at the clock and saw it was eight in the morning. I groaned and jumped out of bed. I landed lightly on my feet. I quickly threw on a clean pair of jeans and a tee shirt. I brushed my hair as fast as I could and shoved on the first pair of socks I could find. I ran downstairs and into the 厨房 and found Charlie eating...
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READ BEFORE GOING ON TO CHAPTER 4!!

Ok so some of 你 were confused 由 Kayla’s purpose. Do not fret. An explanation of what her purpose, why she has to protect people, and basically everything Charlie 说 to her is coming up now.

Kayla is an Azdi. These are a race of people that protect humans. That is there sole purpose. They protect humans from any attack 由 a 邪恶力量 being. For example, if a Nahadriah was on the loose running around like a mad man killing innocent humans, the nearest Azdi to the place where the killings were taking place would deal with the creature 由 either destroying...
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As 你 can tell 由 the 标题 I don't care who people prefer, to me they are completly different 图书 in completly different genres- I mean would 你 ever see Ron fighting a grizzly bear. Okay so it is possible, but he isn't going to get golden eyes when he drinks it's blood, seriously?

So I decided to end this fight once and for all- although I didn't intentially come across this, I just found it on: link ,so that shows how bored 你 get to go to this extent when there's hardly any new Twilight news-right? It's a slow 日 today.

Okay so I clicked on a thing called 谷歌 Fight, and it asked...
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter eight. Hope 你 like it please read, rate, 评论 and enjoy!!

CHAPTER 8


Bella’s POV

I cannot believe I have left him. But its for the best. He KILLED my parents. 或者 if 你 want to put it specifically, he killed my mum and his brother (Emmett) killed my dad. And he expects me to stay with him after that. Uh-huh, right.
    I don’t know what I would have done without Sara. She really is nice, once 你 get to know her. She has taught me the ways of living as a nomadic vampire. Without her I would have been crying at the Cullens’ doorstep 由 now. I don’t...
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posted by Twilight_F
Here is chapter seven. I hope 你 like it!! i got my ideas from the Twilight 图书 so there are connections, but the story has got different points in it! Please read, rate and comment. Enjoy!!

CHAPTER 7

Edward’s POV

She left me. I can’t say I blame her really. I murdered her parents. But I am hurting and I didn’t think she would leave with Sara. Of all people, Sara.
    There is a huge hole in my heart, and I am struggling to keep it together. Emmett’s trying to help. But I know he feels guilty, he killed her father. I’ve heard him blaming himself. ‘Damn, why didn’t...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
hey, for those who did my question, this is the draft of my story, of edward and jacob for bella's protection, and when they come back, she is in fact, a vampire slayer/witch (havent decided which yet!!!)
let me know if 你 like it!

Prologue

I never thought it would happen like this. The Quileute’s on my left, and the Cullen’s on my right. Both people I thought I could 爱情 and trust. Both ready to kill me. I waited in weary anticipation as Edward and Jacob took two steps towards me, both looking upset yet focused at the same time. I felt my new family stir uneasily behind me, bound 由 the...
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Okay guys, so I had a great idea, I'm still gonna continue 写作 this story, but I always seem to never be able to make up my mind on whats going to happen..

So, what I want to do, is ask 你 guys, I 发布 a 问题 under "Picks" about who is behind Bella.

You guys are going to help me continue my story, and have some imput in how the story works, I'm really excited for this and think its gonna be fun!

If you're just 阅读 anything from me for the first time, I would suggest going back to read all three chapters and then going under picks and selecting an option...

I think i'm gonna resort...
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posted by doyouknow
This is my first fanfiction so I need 你 to be honest and tell me what 你 think!

I dont own Twilight 或者 any of it's characters.


My mother kissed my forehead softly, “You know sweetie, 你 don’t have to do this if 你 don’t want to.” Her eyes bored into mine and for a 秒 I actually considered staying in Phoenix. But I knew Phil would be going on the road soon, and I also knew how hard it was for Renee to be away from her new husband. I didn’t want that.
“Mom for the last time I want to!” I replied, putting on the best 《勇敢传说》 smile I could manage, smiling was just so much effort...
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posted by dinosteph
Chapter two guys.


I opened my eyes slowly, noticing the time was 5:34. Early. I closed my eyes again rolling over to my other side. I could sleep for another 小时 before I had to get up and start my morning routine for school. I could hear Charlie moving around the house downstairs, probably making himself breakfast, and then I smelled burnt toast. Yup. Definitely making himself breakfast. I turned a few times trying to get comfortable when I heard the rocking chair in the corner creak. I peeked through my eyelashes holding my hand over my eyes, shielding the daylight coming in through the window....
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posted by team_edward_
Chapter One-Hunting

I pulled into the school parking lot. Most of the cars were old so my old truck didn`t stand out to much. “Oh my gosh 你 must be Isabella 天鹅 right? I`m like Jessica and this is Angela, Mike, Eric, and Tyler. I`m so glad you’re coming here what’s your first class?” A girl about 5 foot 5 has wild, curly, dark brown hair and blue eyes was introducing me to her friends. “Hey please call me Bella not Isabella. Nice to meet yous. I have English first. What do 你 guys have?” The guys just stared at me. Jessica 说 she and Mike had English too. The other three had...
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posted by twerdx24x1
Edward comes into the house and says” What the hell is all my stuff doing in the garage?” Then i stood and looked Edward in the face and 说 “we have company who is living with us now. Don’t be rude come 加入 us.” In my head i was thinking to him. ‘They just showed up and knew our names and everything about us. It was awkward at first and then i gave them a tour and Alice saw your room and wanted it. So I helped her with your stuff. Paybacks a pain in the butt, 你 shouldn’t have of been mean to me while i was being transformed. Oh yeah, I heard every word 你 说 about me.’...
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"Alice,what did 你 see?" I asked her in a soft tone.
"I saw us fighting newborns," she started, "there was only 25 of them and we finished them off in an instance." Alice started to sob again. "After we killed all of them, we started a bonfire and burned all their bodies." She paused. "We 分裂, 拆分 up into groups. Well, actually couples- 你 and Edward, me and Jasper, 你 and Emmett, and 你 and Carlisle." Me, Rosalie, and Esme immediately knew who was with who. In her premonition, I was paired up with Edward, Alice was with Jasper, Rose was with Emmett, and Esme was with Carlisle. Alice went...
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 Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Ugh...I can't even LOOK at this!!
Okay so I saw the movie and Taylor was PERFECT!!! I was a little iffy at first about him being my 最喜爱的 character, but he really surprised me! He's SUCH a good actor it nearly made me fall out of my seat. He didn't have a big role, of course, but I'm looking 前锋, 期待 to him in New Moon. He's just so GREAT!!! I mean, he has the smile, the voice, the body, the eyes, the hair, the height...why does Summit want to replace him so badly??? Yes, I understand that in New Moon he grows a lot and gets 更多 muscle, but who cares? Taylor can work out and he'll grow, too. And if it's not enough, I say...
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posted by mrsblack_1089
Here it is: The long awaited, demanded Chapter 10!! Chapter 11 will follow shortly.


Jacob and I kept planning for hours in the cottage.
I decided that Mom, Aunt Rosalie, Aunt Alice, Grandma, Leah, and Emily would be my bridesmaids, and Jacob wanted Billy as a best man, and Dad, Uncle Emmett, Sam, Quil, Embry, and Seth as groomsmen. Uncle Jasper would read the vows. We wanted a house in Forks, in the woods, like Mom's and Dad's, but with a different design. Our interrests differed from theirs. We went to go see Grandma to tell her our plans for a house.
She and Aunt Alice were upstairs in Aunt...
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"You know, I am going to miss this place," I noted as Jacob took my packed suitcase.
"You'd rather stay here than be with me?" he pouted.
"Of course not! I'm just saying..." Oh. He was teasing. He grinned at me and I laced my fingers through his.
I was leaving Brenton. Today was the last 日 of my first semester. It had been a great experiance, but Jacob was 更多 important than anything in my life right now. On the night of the dance, we had fallen asleep in the silvery moonlight, curled up 由 each other, under the tree. The 下一个 morning he was going to catch a flight back to Washington; he...
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it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie 你 know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... 或者 with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e 钢琴 for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)

but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !