你 spell it STORIES ... and judging 由 that I had a fair idea what to expect. I read the first one, not impressed. Full of spelling errors, and grammar is poor. Stay at school & study comprehension & creative writing. 你 might learn something ... sorry 你 ask for opinions, 你 get it.
I 爱情 them even though 你 spelt a few things wrong there really gd and i think 你 should keep witing will 你 read some of mine? it's on a club called Jacob and Renessme and the story is called Wedding 日