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I need some help. If 你 are a writer, then please do help (:

So I have a MAJOR writers block. I've taken a WHOLE 月 break and I think it's time to start again. The story that I want to update NOW is 'The Past Will Never Change'. It was very unique but I'm having a little trouble. I discussed with one of my 老友记 that I wanted to make the 下一个 chapter Edward's POV, with an explanation of why he left Bella in NM. So if 你 could read the story and maybe give me tips on how to write that? I'm not really good with sticking to the plot line.

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So I will credit 你 when I post it up here and on FF.net. I'll 支持 你 and if 你 could even write a tiny chunk for me, I'll REALLY appreciate it. Thanks (:
 lollipopszx3 posted 一年多以前
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akashaapril said:
I really think 你 should some from edward's pov. then kind of write from both throughout the story, eventually having them meet again. I think that would be pretty good. ummmmm...maybe have jacob and the pack in a little chapter telling what happened to them.
as for 写作 a little chunk, I won't do, for the fact that I don't really know whats going on and what 你 have planed, if anything.
but anyways, those are just a few things i would do.
and i know how 你 feel, i get writers block all the time, when i'm writing. so i was glad to help. :)
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posted 一年多以前 
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:D thanks! But I know what I'm doing and I want to get an inside of when Edward left Bella. Then the rest will be in Bella's POV.:D
lollipopszx3 posted 一年多以前
rubytuesday101 said:
你 have a good story,for the 下一个 chapter explain about how edward feels and how he has to go to school and do normal things.Then he should meet bella and her son.Thats just idea but i think 你 should keep 写作 it's a good story.
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posted 一年多以前 
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Thanks! I might do that for later chapters because I want to 显示 how Bella feels!
lollipopszx3 posted 一年多以前
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