Realistic Fiction
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had 板栗 hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are 你 looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 分钟 for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I 爱情 Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip
Anne's point of view
I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.
He had 板栗 hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are 你 looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.
It takes about 5 分钟 for the whole group to arrive.
"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"
"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.
It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.
Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.
I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I 爱情 Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.
I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.
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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
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Oh yes we do.
They are the treasures of the world
That we use.
It's not gold,
Zinc, copper, 或者 silver.
Oil, not even close.
They are
Courage, determination
How women could have their rights
Today
The treasures of the world
The one and only place
Where 你 can find people
Of different color and sex
Where 你 can find blacks,
Asian, Syrian, and Australian
Oh the people of the world
The treasures of the world
The treasures of the world
Use them wisely
Do not leave them in chains
For the people 你 break
They will break 你 back.
Oh the treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
Power
你 are possessed
由 this world
This so called better future
Is destroying you
At what cost
The fame 或者 the fortune
It isn't worth it
Haven't 你 seen
The corruption
Power brings
Too much of a good thing
Becomes worthless in the end
Don't be like that
Help yourself
Save yourself from this
This unplanned future
Power brings one thing
Death
There is no way around it
It will soon take over
It will become your life
This power that 你 long for
Shall be a death sentence for you
I wish 你 luck
I hope 你 see the way
The way I speak of
How power isn't healthy
And not apart of your diet
Turn away
From the temptation
That power can bring
Forget it
Forget everything
The money
The fame
The power
Don't look back
Behind 你 is the head
The head of evil
The head of power
你 are possessed
由 this world
This so called better future
Is destroying you
At what cost
The fame 或者 the fortune
It isn't worth it
Haven't 你 seen
The corruption
Power brings
Too much of a good thing
Becomes worthless in the end
Don't be like that
Help yourself
Save yourself from this
This unplanned future
Power brings one thing
Death
There is no way around it
It will soon take over
It will become your life
This power that 你 long for
Shall be a death sentence for you
I wish 你 luck
I hope 你 see the way
The way I speak of
How power isn't healthy
And not apart of your diet
Turn away
From the temptation
That power can bring
Forget it
Forget everything
The money
The fame
The power
Don't look back
Behind 你 is the head
The head of evil
The head of power