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posted by sadiebugz00
Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip


Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had 板栗 hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are 你 looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place in front of the Old Navy.

It takes about 5 分钟 for the whole group to arrive.

"So," Catie said, "What do y'all wanna do first?"

"Oh! I know just the place," Sammy said, taking the lead, with everyone trailing behind her.

It turns out Sammy was taking us to the Target.

Kelli starts to kind of glare at her and say, "Really?" but, I interrupt her and say,"Let's go in!" Before a fight could erupt.

I turns out that it was a really nice Target. The had a bunch of cool-looking clothes, they had some that only people on TV could pull off without being teased, plus some that only a humongous dork would wear. We each only had $30, though, so we had to spend wisely. I decide not to buy anything, since I 爱情 Old Navy. So after that trip, Sammy only had $5 left. We had a good laugh over it, and headed over to Old Navy.

I sure hope we stay together, as friends. We seem to really get each other. I thought. Maybe this friendship WILL last.



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Thanks for reading! Please put your critique below!! - Sadie
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Well, this is a song I wrote.

I've heard it wrong
There's been a mistake
There was a time when I won and I knew it

We will go on and on and on and on
There will be no 更多 mistakes
For the future
We will fight through it all without complaint

We are the winners, my friend
And we'll fight through it all in the end
There's no time to lose it
Cuz we are the winners

Well, I know that it's been a great day
We've done it all
We've been the best we can be and 你 know it
We are the winners, my friend.
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Chapter Eight: Hello, Stranger Please Don't Betray Me

      The guy stood in front of us. We needed to give him answer and fast. He was a spy and he probably knew 更多 then he was letting on. This make sit hard to trust him. Courtney immediately 说 yes. I gave her a glare and shrugged. Raven was nodding her head as while. It made me think. Were they up to something? Did they know the guy? They could have known him because he goes here for school. Actually, he seemed much older then the rest of us. He had boyish features but he certainly was someone who looks much older then 18.
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posted by BlondLionEzel
Chapter 2

Everyday, Prince 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · would go to the Kitsune's cage and gave her 食物 and Comfort for when she was sad. After a few days, Jays brother, Cole, Started to worry and went to their father, King George.

"I am worried about Jay" Cole told their Father, "He is always giving 食物 to that filthy Kitsune!"

"Let him do what he wants" King George told Cole, "He probably doesn't have real feelings for her, i think". Then he thought of an idea and told him his evil plan.

The 下一个 day, 松鸦, 杰伊, 杰伊 · heard crying. He ran down the stairs and saw Cole whipping the Kitsune while the Guards were laughing at her pain....
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This a short poem I came up with. I'm not a descriptive person. I prefer just simple words in poems. This deals with the term, "Looking behind the smile." This is inspired 由 a friend and mine's life experiences. Enjoy :)

Gone: a poem

She sat alone
in the corner of the room.
She didn't speak
she would merely loom.
Like she was a shadow
an invisible ghost.
No one gave
a damn at the most.

She would sit there
and simply stare
looking at those
who ignored her.
No one looked
at her twice
no one bothered
when she was nice.

She was a nobody,
forgotten 由 all.
Her ever-blank stares
directed at the bare, empty wall....
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