True Writers Article: How It Should Have Happened

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posted by psychmacgyver

The 音乐 blared loudly, and I could still hear it with my hands covering my ears. The other high school students skipped and ran through the dark woods at midnight on their way to a deserted log 舱, 小木屋 in the middle of nowhere. I rolled my eyes (like all high schoolers do,) at the others, drunk and incoherent.
I could barely see two feet in front of me, when I banged into a firm wooden door. I stumbled backwards as I cursed under my breath and rubbed my forehead. I then succeeded in opening the door and getting in the cabin. It was warm and cozy, with no party energy whatsoever...yet. I regretted coming to this party in the first place. I then disappeared into the 图书馆 and heard the rest of the gang laugh their way drunkly in. I was shocked to see one of the most 流行的 girls in our school walk in, actually sober. Gretchen Baxter. My eyes opened wide in pure shock, as my jaw literally dropped. I quickly shut it. She grinned and then giggled to herself and looked at the ground.
"Gavin...Wiles, is it???" she questioned me.
"Umm...Yeah. You...Read?" Greatest conversation starter ever, I told myself sarcastically.
"Yeah, science fiction. You?"
"Fantasy."
"Soooo...Good party I guess, huh?"
"Yeah, maybe. So...what are 你 looking for?"
"I'm thinking of switching it up, and 阅读 Romeo and Juliet. In history class, we're learning about Shakespeare, so I figured I'd read on of his works while I'm at it. Why not, right?"
"Yeah, sure. Want me to help 你 find it? I can if 你 want."
"Yeah, that'd be awesome! Let's go!"
A couple of 分钟 later, I discovered the dusty thing. I brushed it clean, and we opened it and gasped as lights flashed and wind blew violently. Moments later, we were sucked into a different dimension.

SweetHoneyBunny, sadiebugz00 and 2 others like this

alicia386 This seems more like a short story. No offense. Um, am I next or is dragonsmemory?

Dhampires Yea it was short you should have made the middle a little longer if you ask me. You know spicy it up a little more next time okay? :-) But you did good, if I may ask was it suppose to be a short story?

psychmacgyver Eh, not really. Sorry, I will do better next time. Dragonsmemory is up next!!!

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Remember me Ch.1

posted by Problematic129

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Chapter 1
    Three years later
    Beep! Beep! Beep!
    I moved my hand and turned off my alarm clock, wow, it’s six o` clock already. I groan as I rub my eyes and slowly get our of bed. I took a shower, the warm water wakes me up a bit. After I finish drying off, I put some clothes on.
    As I walk to the mirror, I feel compelled to look at myself again, I’ve felt compelled too ever since Dorothy died. We’ve always had this connection,...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel 爬坡道, 小山 Chapter 12

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" 说 Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" 说 Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted 你 like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...

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The Dying Leader

posted by alicia386

This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a 秒 father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to 移动 from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...

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Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl: Prologue

posted by hgfan5602

Saukerl

"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from 下一个 door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing 你 can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the 星, 星级 of David. He was a Jew.

Star of David

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.6

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and 你 found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...

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Hourglass - Chapter Three

posted by alicia386

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Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy 或者 sadness? He couldn't tell. When 你 think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came 由 this morning. She asked him out on a 日期 and he 说 sure. He couldn't believe he 说 that.

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's

posted by Problematic129

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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. 你 see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother 移动 back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...

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The Boy Who Cried 狼蜘蛛 Prologue.

posted by sawfan13

Prologue

Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital 床, 床上 were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.

It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, 你 may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...

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Troy, The Almighty Fatty

posted by alicia386

Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a 年 and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, 西亚拉 wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a 月 before we started packing. 西亚拉 is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane 食物 is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...

Confessions of Laurie B. Ch.13

posted by alicia386

Wednesday

First 日 of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer 或者 Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read 图书 and she thought that maybe I could meet some new 老友记 that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is 由 tomorrow.

An Introduction to my mystery novel

posted by adamk

After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at 写作 a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm 写作 is in the in the section below. If 你 like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen 年 old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.

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the keeper of the forbidden light chapter 7

posted by Annabeth788594

I got dressed and slipped my 夹克 with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. 嘿 watch where you’re going! “Sorry 你 Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle 说 for 你 to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right 你 will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...

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圣女魔咒 and Dangerous Ch. 12

posted by alicia386

Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

Their headquarters was nothing 更多 then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger 太空 and tons 更多 gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different 查看 of the outside building. One monitor was 展示 a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me.
Darrell stayed 由 my side...

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Change 或者 Be Changed. Chapter 6

posted by IlovePatch97

Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to 评论 :D

Chapter 6

“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are 你 bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris 或者 Patricia...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy 或者 anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...

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The Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 4

posted by 1999jacko

Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he 说 hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his 圈, 圈子 and drew his...

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Beautiy is the Beast Prologue

posted by Dhampires

The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's 心 whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.9

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Zaria
    We came to an agreement, if anything…unusual happened, we’ll check it out. If it happens to be another thing then we’ll comw to the conclusion that we and the book caused this. So on the 下一个 day, sadly where school wasn’t cancelled, I’d kept an open eye for anything weird.
    “Status report?” Stilere asks as she walks with me around school.
    “Nothing,” I sigh. “You?”
    “Same.” Stilere shakes her head....

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圣女魔咒 and Dangerous Ch. 3

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

"You're lying," I 说 but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
"That maybe, but would he really want 你 to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add 更多 to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
"You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most 最佳, 返回页首 notch...

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Smith, Ron Smith. Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a 枕头 case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back 座位 of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...