Here is chapter two, 评论 please

(Still Jason's point of view)

Jason watched as the ship came to shore, the figure jumped from his spot and landed cleanly on his feet. Jason asked "who are you?" The man replied "name's Sinbad, yours?" Piper took over and 说 "I'm Piper, that's Jason, and that's Leo." Sinbad looked at them, and he asked "your demigods right?" Jason nodded and 说 "I'm the son of Zeus, and Piper is the daughter of Aphrodite, and Leo is the son of Hephaestus." Sinbad replied "pleased to meet you." It was quit for a moment an then Jason asked "would 你 like a tour of the camp...

嘿 guys!! I'll be uh posting a 预览 of the fanfiction I'm gonna post. Basically a crossover. Just tell me what 你 think of it, and I'll post the rest as soon as I'm done. [Hi book-worm!! *waves] So yeah. There. After this. Hah. Okay.



1. SADIE: Camp...Strawberry Services?!

Hey – okay, wait a second…[taps on microphone] 嘿 Carter! Is this thing working? What – of course I’m asking you! You’re the nerd here! [silence] Oh, ah, I see the tiny red light. Never mind, it’s working!
 

Okay, let me start that introduction in a better way. Ahem. Long time no see, mates! Sadie Kane is back,...

Annabeth

I was walking through the 王座, 宝座 room, talking to my mother, Athena. Yes, the goddess of wisdom and war strategy. We were admiring my work.

"Very good Annabeth. I'm glad to say my own daughter is-- A SPIDER!!!!"
I looked at Athena, confused. I'm not a spider! That's when she pointed to her statue and screamed.

I cringed, then looked at the statue. How bad could it be? The worst thing that could happen is it could be a- "SPIDER!!" I screamed.

I looked at my mother, terrified. Her grey eyes were wide, full of fear.
"DON'T LOOK AT ME!! GO GET SOMETHING SO WE CAN KILL THIS DESPICABLE THING!"...

嘿 guys, i was just wondering, judging 由 this prologue, would read my fanfic if i wrote one? now, im not saying that i'll actually be 写作 one, cuz i have a really busy summer, but i just want your opinion of it. like, is it any good? I would HIGHLY appreciate constructive critiscim. i want 你 to nit-pick. Spelling mistakes, grammar, choppy 或者 awkward sentences, run-on sentences, being too descriptive, out-of-character thoughts 或者 actions, stupid/weak ideas, anything! just be polite about it :)
PS: i know, its a bit long for a prologue, but i couldnt help myself!

And voila! Here it is:

The...

Alternative Endings of Percy Jackson (Part 1).
So, this is how I entertain myself, ticking people off, especially PJ’s fans!
R U READY TO BE TICKED OFF?    
I heard IT’S A YES!

1/The X-files ending: Since he killed a minor god, Percy is taken to the court of Olympia. He claims to have been controlled by…aliens. The gods don’t believe him. But Annabeth and Grover believe that the gods are hiding aliens to fullfill their dark conspiracy of making a god-alien…hybrid race that could become slaves for the aliens when the colonization begins. In the ending, all the gods...

So hi, well I've been thinkin' about my chapter story The Somewhat Less Important Chronicles of Elle Trick, and how there's just soo much stuff that 你 guys should know to really get her. So here it is,

December 21, 1993- Elle and her twin Missy are born, although both have different mothers. Missy and Elle are twins entirely on accident. They never meet until they are seventeen.

January 4, 1994- Elle has her first vision, this is of fire, later that 日 her brother burned is hand on the stove.


May 19, 1999- It is revealed to Elle and Garcon that they are demigods.


January 1, 2007- Jumelle and...

i see the hottest girl at camp.
first things first,your not a demigod until 你 meet Lupa so dont get your hopes up to be a demigod.Im Jason Grace son of jupiter and well extremely good at sword fighting and lupa says i'll be special someday.
Lupa is a she 狼 yes i 说 a she 狼 dont let her see 你 laugh cause she'll rip to shreds.
She meets demigods and lead them to the 狼 house and choose if your weak 或者 not.So sad for gary truckner.
Anyway as i'm introducing people i should tell 你 my life is weird.I was taken away 由 juno and my sis 坦莉雅 (probally not a demigod but i have a strange...

ANYONE MAY READ THIS AS LONG AS THEY DON'T MIND SPOILERS FROM HOH!

HERE IS MY POINT-I THINK LEO IS GOING TO DIE! THERE! I 说 IT( I just killed my self doing so but) I 说 IT!

sorry for making this so short but this all i could think of so far..

here is my proof-

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Gaia 说 that she would get her revenge-
i know this doesn't count as much as she 说 that to everyone but she thinks that he is the one to die first. She has been plotting his death for much longer. what if this is because she knows that he is also the one to stop HER?! That...

Okay, so I've decided to do a review for each of the five books, starting with of course, The 迷失 Hero. These are my opinions so please respect them, thank you:)

Character/Narrator Review



Jason: I didn't quite like him, but I didn't hate him either. I guess I'm 更多 neutral to him than anything? When I rank the seven from best to worst, he'd probably be number 6, but before I read The Mark of Athena he would be number 7.

Anyway, onto reviewing his actual character. I don't know, I kind of found him to be the most boring character in this book, and I wasn't quite as hyped 阅读 Jason...