This is about my Original Character, Lorrettai Hunalo.
Wondering how to pernounce that? Lor-et-tie, Who-n-all-oh. :)
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Intro:
Anakin was running. Not for his life 或者 anything big like that, just for some peace and quiet, away from Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. He turned a corner and pressed up against the wall.
“Uh, sir, what are 你 doing?” Rex had been walking 由 when Anakin made his appearance.
“Uh… nothing, nothing at all, why, what are 你 doing?” Anakin replied quickly, walking away. Rex stared after him, completely bewildered.
As soon as Anakin knew that Rex wasn’t looking, he hid in a closet down the hall. He sighed, thinking no one would look here. Oh how wrong he was. Outside the door, he heard footsteps, then,
“Hey, Rex, wait up! Have 你 seen SkyGuy around here?” it was Ahsoka. ‘Oh Force’ Anakin thought.
“Uh, yeah, in fact he just went down this hall, the direction 你 came, why?” Rex answered.
“ I don’t even know why, but he’s been gone all 日 and Master Obi-Wan 说 that Master Windu wanted him." ‘… Wow… I’m stupid.’ Anakin slapped his palm against his forehead.
Apparently he did so very loudly. There was silence for a second, then Ahsoka said, a bit louder than usual, “oh, okay, I guess I’ll go look over in the cafeteria for him,” as she walked away. Anakin waited a few seconds, and then began to slowly open the door, peering around. When he decided that it was safe, he stepped out.
“Gotcha master! Come on, 你 have to talk to Master Windu!” Ahsoka said, grabbing him 由 the arm and dragging him off.
“But I don’t wanna!” Anakin whined, 表演 like a little kid, as he was dragged along 由 a fourteen 年 old girl.
“Too bad! Now get in here!” she said, trying to drag him in the Council Room, but Anakin grabbed the door handle after it closed behind them. Ahsoka tried to pry him from it, but he wouldn’t budge. Just as Anakin was about to open the door and leave, Obi-Wan came in, and looked at him funny.
“Where on Coruscant do 你 think your going?” Obi-Wan asked with his usual polite, slightly outraged and tired, and accented voice.
“Uh… to my seat, of course, psh, where else?” Anakin scoffed and hurried to sit down.
“Okay, now that everyone is here,” Master Windu eyed Anakin, “we may begin. This morning, we received a distress call from a city on Tatooine; we believe it was Mos Espa; anyway, it was from a member of the Hutt Clan, Gardulla. Some men have been wrecking havoc, and Gardulla wants it to stop immediately. Any volunteers?”
Anakin was about to say something when Windu added, “besides Skywalker.” Anakin slumped down, disappointed.
Obi-Wan sighed and raised his hand. “Ah, good, we’ll dispatch 你 immediately.” “Oh joy.” Kenobi 说 unenthusiastically.
The 下一个 morning Anakin was awakened very early; he had had a dream. It was about Obi-Wan, and it wasn’t pretty. He was in a dark alleyway, being shot at from every direction. Suddenly a hooded figure had appeared, and then he woke up.
“Blast it. I 迷失 him.” Windu cursed as Kenobi’s signal broke up, though all he could really see were lasers flying everywhere. “We’ll have to send someone after him, someone who knows the area, like maybe…” Ki-Adi Mundi suggested. “No, absolutely not. I refuse to… (A little while later) Remember, be careful! Good luck Skywalker.” Master Windu 说 with a regretful tone. And with that, Anakin was gone.
“Okay, Ahsoka we have to be careful, I wasn’t supposed to bring 你 on this mission, but I did anyway, so 你 have to make me proud. Nothing foolish! That goes for 你 two also!
Anakin 说 as he turned to Rex and Cody. “Roger that General!” they 说 in unison, saluting the Jedi Knight.
“Okay, here we are.” Anakin 说 as they landed on his 首页 planet.
As they walked into Mos Espa, all Ahsoka was thinking was ‘GET ME OUT OF HERE!’ it was too hot and too dry for her, and apparently even Anakin wasn't used it anymore. When Anakin pulled off his 最佳, 返回页首 cloak, someone saw his lightsaber. Apparently they don’t take kindly to Jedi, and so they started shooting. Ahsoka reached for her lightsaber to defend her self, but even with Rex and Cody shooting back at their assailants, they were backed up into a dark alleyway, just like in Anakin’s dreams. Then, the shooting stopped, Anakin and Ahsoka looked at each other, as Cad Bane stepped out of the group of shooters.
Should I continue? Let me know, please.
Wondering how to pernounce that? Lor-et-tie, Who-n-all-oh. :)
Okay, please read.
COMMENT!
I <3 feedback!
Intro:
Anakin was running. Not for his life 或者 anything big like that, just for some peace and quiet, away from Ahsoka and Obi-Wan. He turned a corner and pressed up against the wall.
“Uh, sir, what are 你 doing?” Rex had been walking 由 when Anakin made his appearance.
“Uh… nothing, nothing at all, why, what are 你 doing?” Anakin replied quickly, walking away. Rex stared after him, completely bewildered.
As soon as Anakin knew that Rex wasn’t looking, he hid in a closet down the hall. He sighed, thinking no one would look here. Oh how wrong he was. Outside the door, he heard footsteps, then,
“Hey, Rex, wait up! Have 你 seen SkyGuy around here?” it was Ahsoka. ‘Oh Force’ Anakin thought.
“Uh, yeah, in fact he just went down this hall, the direction 你 came, why?” Rex answered.
“ I don’t even know why, but he’s been gone all 日 and Master Obi-Wan 说 that Master Windu wanted him." ‘… Wow… I’m stupid.’ Anakin slapped his palm against his forehead.
Apparently he did so very loudly. There was silence for a second, then Ahsoka said, a bit louder than usual, “oh, okay, I guess I’ll go look over in the cafeteria for him,” as she walked away. Anakin waited a few seconds, and then began to slowly open the door, peering around. When he decided that it was safe, he stepped out.
“Gotcha master! Come on, 你 have to talk to Master Windu!” Ahsoka said, grabbing him 由 the arm and dragging him off.
“But I don’t wanna!” Anakin whined, 表演 like a little kid, as he was dragged along 由 a fourteen 年 old girl.
“Too bad! Now get in here!” she said, trying to drag him in the Council Room, but Anakin grabbed the door handle after it closed behind them. Ahsoka tried to pry him from it, but he wouldn’t budge. Just as Anakin was about to open the door and leave, Obi-Wan came in, and looked at him funny.
“Where on Coruscant do 你 think your going?” Obi-Wan asked with his usual polite, slightly outraged and tired, and accented voice.
“Uh… to my seat, of course, psh, where else?” Anakin scoffed and hurried to sit down.
“Okay, now that everyone is here,” Master Windu eyed Anakin, “we may begin. This morning, we received a distress call from a city on Tatooine; we believe it was Mos Espa; anyway, it was from a member of the Hutt Clan, Gardulla. Some men have been wrecking havoc, and Gardulla wants it to stop immediately. Any volunteers?”
Anakin was about to say something when Windu added, “besides Skywalker.” Anakin slumped down, disappointed.
Obi-Wan sighed and raised his hand. “Ah, good, we’ll dispatch 你 immediately.” “Oh joy.” Kenobi 说 unenthusiastically.
The 下一个 morning Anakin was awakened very early; he had had a dream. It was about Obi-Wan, and it wasn’t pretty. He was in a dark alleyway, being shot at from every direction. Suddenly a hooded figure had appeared, and then he woke up.
“Blast it. I 迷失 him.” Windu cursed as Kenobi’s signal broke up, though all he could really see were lasers flying everywhere. “We’ll have to send someone after him, someone who knows the area, like maybe…” Ki-Adi Mundi suggested. “No, absolutely not. I refuse to… (A little while later) Remember, be careful! Good luck Skywalker.” Master Windu 说 with a regretful tone. And with that, Anakin was gone.
“Okay, Ahsoka we have to be careful, I wasn’t supposed to bring 你 on this mission, but I did anyway, so 你 have to make me proud. Nothing foolish! That goes for 你 two also!
Anakin 说 as he turned to Rex and Cody. “Roger that General!” they 说 in unison, saluting the Jedi Knight.
“Okay, here we are.” Anakin 说 as they landed on his 首页 planet.
As they walked into Mos Espa, all Ahsoka was thinking was ‘GET ME OUT OF HERE!’ it was too hot and too dry for her, and apparently even Anakin wasn't used it anymore. When Anakin pulled off his 最佳, 返回页首 cloak, someone saw his lightsaber. Apparently they don’t take kindly to Jedi, and so they started shooting. Ahsoka reached for her lightsaber to defend her self, but even with Rex and Cody shooting back at their assailants, they were backed up into a dark alleyway, just like in Anakin’s dreams. Then, the shooting stopped, Anakin and Ahsoka looked at each other, as Cad Bane stepped out of the group of shooters.
Should I continue? Let me know, please.