Well... This is my firsts 粉丝 fiction so hope 你 like it!

I wrote a poem about Nate's feeling for Serena when she was with Dan.

He could see her long beautiful golden hair which she always flicked as the wind moved it.
He could see her deep blue eyes just as deep and blue as the sea.
He could see her pretty 粉, 粉色 lips which he wanted to 吻乐队（Kiss） so badly.
He could see her, who he desperately wanted.

Her eye caught his, she was came slowly towards him.
She was there, right in front of him.
He closed his eyes and held his breath as she touched his golden brown hair, slowly coming towards his lips.

A big blow of wind came towards him.
His hair moved as the wind danced around it.
As he opened his eyes, he saw her.
He saw her hand in hand with him.
And he wished one 日 she'd be his.

Well what did 你 think please 评论 或者 tell me how I can improve.