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波西·杰克逊与奥林匹斯众神 问题

I need help with the prophesy and my story line! Please help!!

Sorry for it being so freaking long and overwhelming!!! There are multiple things I'm asking in this 问题 so be prepared!

Things I'll be asking:
Can 你 help me write/complete a prophecy?
What do 你 think of the crappy version of the story line?
Can 你 help with the title?

Ihave all the main details and story line of the story mapped out, all I need is a prophesy to glue it all together.

The story takes place about 20-50 years after Percy and the gang loved on and died. (The campers in this generation hear tales and stories about them!)

Anyways there are five main characters: a son of Apollo, a son of Athena, a son of Hermes (who dies), a daughter of Demeter, a daughter of Dionysus, and a daughter of Hades (who they don't meet until the end of the quest but is unbelievably important) .

HERES A TEALLY CRAPPY VERSION OF WHAT GOES DOWN: Persephone is kidnapped 由 Hypnos, cause he's a jerk, and nobody knows where she went. So a prophesy strikes up to save her 'n' all and they go on their way(ps they only have 12 days to save her). They follow the prophesy and someone dies and they go to the 黑夜传说 to talk to hades about the napping and they try to get the dead camper back but they bargain (obviously it's hades) and he gives them his daughter instead. (still debating on whether 或者 not it should be Bianca 或者 not). he tells them to go to the river Lethe (for those who don't know it's the river of forgetfulness in the 黑夜传说 where the dead go for reincarnation) for a last goodbye with the hades girl. They say bye but run into a field of poppies (which they were wormed to avoid) and pass out (they cause drowsiness) and wake in the cave of Hypnos and he gives them a concoction a 罂粟 果汁 and 石榴 seed and the tears of his sons(fear) which causes them to go into a sleep that they cannot awake until they defeat their fear. Eventually they wake, obviously, and get Persephone back and that's all 你 need to know and more.

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Sorry about all the grammar mistakes!!
americangods posted 一年多以前
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I think it cut me off but what I have of the prophesy is this: Sevan young bloods of a dangerous race, with five tasks each shall face, the immortal 花 preserved in stone, will only last twelve days on her own, THATS ALL I HAVE SO GAR!!
americangods posted 一年多以前
 americangods posted 一年多以前
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