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Chapter 1:The Thing
Personally, Charlie could of had a better time.First, there was her little sister Anne.Anne was five,but acted like she was 25.She would always act like she was the boss of Charlie,even demanding that she wanted the remote when it was clearly Charlie's turn.And to make matters worse,she was incredibly cute,witch made her get what ever she wanted.And don't even get her started on her older twin siblings.First,there was Sally.Sally was a total airhead.Always doing stuff totally insane.And her brother Sam,well,if 你 looked at both at them at the same time,Sally is a genius.Really,it was an embarrassment to be seen with them.And Charlies parents didn't really care about her.Charlie was the only blonde in the family.She had beautiful blue eyes that sparkled in the sun,but she did hated her eyes and hair.The rest of her family was dark haired and brown eyed.And she didn't even look like them.Sometimes she thought she was adopted.''Really?adopted?''She thought to herself.But she always new she wasn't.''Then how do i have the same last name?''She would say to herself.But she would still wonder...almost every day.''Forget it.It's not possible.'' And today she was going to forget...kind of.
Charlie's parents took everyone to the 海滩 one 日 because Charlies mom needed the ocean breeze and just to relax.''relax,i could use some of that.'' she thought to herself.Just as she sat on the 海滩 chair she had brought to the 海滩 her mother called to her.''Charlie come over here and watch your sister.''her mother 说 as Anne stood in front of Charlie's chair.''Will 你 pwease watch me?''Anne 说 with an evil smile on her face.''Fine.'' she finally said.They walked to were the water was,but Anne kept walking.''Where are 你 going Anne?'' Charlie 说 with confusion.
''I'm not going to swim there,i want to go to the end of the beach.
''but''
''either over on the end 或者 i start crying!''
''oh,...fine''Charlie spit out.
As they walked to the end of the 海滩 Anne kept playing with her 海滩 ball,witch was unlike her.''She never plays with balls,it's always been shovels and stuff like that.''She thought to herself.She shook of the idea and kept walking.
''Here,i want to be here.Charlie...''
''ya,what do 你 want?''
''Will 你 please get my 海滩 ball?''
She then threw her 海滩 ball way out into sea.Charlie then realized that it wasn't a 海滩 ball.It was a foot ball.A big one.But Charlie had to admit that Anne had had a good arm.The ball went at lease't 20 feet into the ocean,witch would of beat Charlie's record about...20 feet.Knowing that Anne would cry if she didn't get it Charlie swam into the wide ocean.Halfway in,she noticed that their was a drop off,and it was deep.But Charlie was a very good swimmer.But she never knew why.The whole family couldn't swim,or just barely.When she finally got the ball she began to swim back,but something swam against her leg.she yelped and started to swim faster,then faster,then even 更多 fast.But whatever touched her grabbed her.She was pulled down to the floor of the ocean,trying very hard to get away from this thing that had her.
In the murky waters of the drop off Charlie couldn't see anything.But she was able to get out of the things grabs't and float to the surface for air.''Anne!HELP ME!''But all Anne did was watch Charlie be pulled down into the water again,but when she did,she was able to see the face of the thing,and sure enough,it was a boy.
Chapter 1:The Thing
Personally, Charlie could of had a better time.First, there was her little sister Anne.Anne was five,but acted like she was 25.She would always act like she was the boss of Charlie,even demanding that she wanted the remote when it was clearly Charlie's turn.And to make matters worse,she was incredibly cute,witch made her get what ever she wanted.And don't even get her started on her older twin siblings.First,there was Sally.Sally was a total airhead.Always doing stuff totally insane.And her brother Sam,well,if 你 looked at both at them at the same time,Sally is a genius.Really,it was an embarrassment to be seen with them.And Charlies parents didn't really care about her.Charlie was the only blonde in the family.She had beautiful blue eyes that sparkled in the sun,but she did hated her eyes and hair.The rest of her family was dark haired and brown eyed.And she didn't even look like them.Sometimes she thought she was adopted.''Really?adopted?''She thought to herself.But she always new she wasn't.''Then how do i have the same last name?''She would say to herself.But she would still wonder...almost every day.''Forget it.It's not possible.'' And today she was going to forget...kind of.
Charlie's parents took everyone to the 海滩 one 日 because Charlies mom needed the ocean breeze and just to relax.''relax,i could use some of that.'' she thought to herself.Just as she sat on the 海滩 chair she had brought to the 海滩 her mother called to her.''Charlie come over here and watch your sister.''her mother 说 as Anne stood in front of Charlie's chair.''Will 你 pwease watch me?''Anne 说 with an evil smile on her face.''Fine.'' she finally said.They walked to were the water was,but Anne kept walking.''Where are 你 going Anne?'' Charlie 说 with confusion.
''I'm not going to swim there,i want to go to the end of the beach.
''but''
''either over on the end 或者 i start crying!''
''oh,...fine''Charlie spit out.
As they walked to the end of the 海滩 Anne kept playing with her 海滩 ball,witch was unlike her.''She never plays with balls,it's always been shovels and stuff like that.''She thought to herself.She shook of the idea and kept walking.
''Here,i want to be here.Charlie...''
''ya,what do 你 want?''
''Will 你 please get my 海滩 ball?''
She then threw her 海滩 ball way out into sea.Charlie then realized that it wasn't a 海滩 ball.It was a foot ball.A big one.But Charlie had to admit that Anne had had a good arm.The ball went at lease't 20 feet into the ocean,witch would of beat Charlie's record about...20 feet.Knowing that Anne would cry if she didn't get it Charlie swam into the wide ocean.Halfway in,she noticed that their was a drop off,and it was deep.But Charlie was a very good swimmer.But she never knew why.The whole family couldn't swim,or just barely.When she finally got the ball she began to swim back,but something swam against her leg.she yelped and started to swim faster,then faster,then even 更多 fast.But whatever touched her grabbed her.She was pulled down to the floor of the ocean,trying very hard to get away from this thing that had her.
In the murky waters of the drop off Charlie couldn't see anything.But she was able to get out of the things grabs't and float to the surface for air.''Anne!HELP ME!''But all Anne did was watch Charlie be pulled down into the water again,but when she did,she was able to see the face of the thing,and sure enough,it was a boy.
