蕾妮斯梅·卡里卡伦

Chapter 10: Imprint.
There was no sound around her, except for quiet breathing. Renesmee felt groggy and disoriented, and she wasn’t sure where she was. Her arm seared with pain.
“She’s awake,” Someone murmured. Renesmee recognized the voice of her father. So she was home. Slowly Renesmee opened her eyes, letting them adjust quickly to the bright white light. The first face she saw was her mother’s, her golden eyes filled with concern.
“Renesmee, baby, are 你 ok?” she whispered, her beautiful voice breaking the tense silence in the room. Renesmee was laying on one of the white...

Chapter 8: Difficulties.
Renesmee looked over to see Emma hand in hand with Seth. He was smiling brightly at her as she leaned into his side. The last guest dwindled out and Alice shut the door, bouncing up and down. Renesmee leaned into Jacob, exhausted. She put her hand on his cheek.
“Me too Ness. I’m tired just like 你 but I don’t think there through with 你 yet” he murmured. Renesmee stretched up on her toes and wrapped her arms around him. He kissed her quietly for a moment, the heat of his lips penetrating her skin.
“Will 你 two cut it out?” Her dad snapped irritably from...

this is chapter three. like it says in the title. Im re editing my entire story and this is the edited version, Hope 你 like it. Send me a prop. tell me if 你 like it and how i could change it.

“Renesmee what’s wrong?” Samantha asked.
“Jacob.” I 说 with a hiss.
“Who is Jacob?” Chris asked with a smirk.
“Not who 你 think he is Chris.” I 说 annoyed.
“He has been a friend of my mo… aunt for years he is closer to my age though. My boyfriend goes to school on the reservation.”
“Then why do 你 look so distressed Renesmee?” Samantha asked worriedly.
“he never finished...