Yeah there was a problem and the real one was perfect so this one might not be as good:
NO POV:
It was time for them to go to the club, and naturally, Duncan was late. After 20 分钟 he knocked on her door.
"Ready?"
"For 20 Minutes."
"That's great, come on."
"I still don't know why I accepted to do this."
"Because 你 have feelings for me you’re trying to cover up, I've seen it in my ex-girlfriends, before they were my girlfriends."
"Okay, let's just go, whatever 你 think."
"Man, 你 really are a Princess."
"Stop calling me that!"
"No, Princess."
"Ugh, fine, I can deal."
"Sure, Princess." He emphasizes 'Princess'.
"SHUT UP AND LET'S GO!"
"Fine, uptight Princess."
"My God, Duncan."
They went to his car; it looked like Bumble-Bee from Transformers. Courtney shrugged thinking whether he 偷了 the car 或者 not and just got in.
Within two 分钟 they were there. Courtney saw her friend's car, Jordan. Jordan was her BEST friend, they had known each other for only a few years, since 7th grade, but they were still so close.
"Ladies first, 或者 shall I say Princesses first?" He opened the door.
"Lady, not Princess."
"Fine, I'm going to talk to my buds, which include your boyfriend, so see ya, PRINCESS!"
"Duncan!" Jordan came rushing over to her friend. "Oh hey, Jordan."
"OMG COURTNEY WHY ARE 你 HERE!?" She had a country accent, hey; she grew up in Mississippi and Georgia! 2 of the most southern states! She can, and she can never get rid of it.
"Duncan dragged me here."
"Why?"
"He's a retard that like loves me 或者 something!"
"Wow, that's SO harsh, a hott bad-boy wanting you, SOOOO BAD!"
"He's not hott; he's a poser bad-boy, so he's been to Juvie IT'S NOT HOTT!"
"Sure, Courtney, you'll get with him, I guarantee!"
The DJ yells in his mic, "IIGHT THE LIGHT TIME!!! WHOEVER THE LIGHT LIKES, 你 GOTTA SING THREE SONGS! WELL LET'S SEE, WHO DA LIGHT LIKE!?" The light roamed around until it landed on someone, Jordan.
"IIGHT THE LIGHT HAS CHOSEN!! COME ON UP HERE GIRL! AND PICK YOUR SETLIST!"
Jordan ran up there and the DJ asked her, "WASS YOUR NAME GIRL!? AND WHATS YOUR PLAYLIST!?"
"THE NAMES JORDAN, MY PLAYLIST IS: SO HAPPY I COULD DIE, SPEECHLESS, AND LAST TELEPHONE, ALL 由 LADY GAGA!"
"WELL, COUNTRY GIRL JORDAN, 或者 SHALL I SAY WORMDIRT*?"
"HOW'D 你 KNOW BOUT WORMDIRT?"
"I CAN SEE THINGS COUNTRY GIRL JORDAN, NOT COME ON AND LET'S SEE IF 你 CAN SAAAANG!"
"IIGHT." She got a mic and the 音乐 started playing.
I 爱情 that lavender blonde
The way she moves
The way she walks
I touch myself can’t get enough
And in the silence of the night
Through all the tears
And all the lies
I touch myself and it’s alright**
"Hey, Courtney what are 你 doing here!?"
"Jessie?"
"Yeah!"
"Hey girl how ya doing?"
"Good, 你 come here with someone?"
"Uh, yes I did."
"WHO?!"
Just give in
Don’t give up baby
Open up your 心 and your mind to me
Just know when
That glass is empty
That the world is gonna bend
"Duncan!"
"You came here with bad-boy-fake-british-to-impress-you-boy?"
"Yeah."
"Instead of your boyfriend?"
"Yeah."
"WHY!?"
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
"He's a briber, he bribed me."
"What's your story?"
"Okay, he was playing Dance In The Dark, reallllly loud this morning so I went over there to complain after the song was over, and he 说 that if I came here with him tonight that he would turn his 音乐 off."
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
"That's your reason?"
"Yeah!"
I am as vain as I allow
I do my hair
I gloss my eyes
I touch myself all through the night
And when something fall out of place
I take my time
I put it back
I touch myself
Till I’m on track
"Well, that's a stupid reason, 你 should've gone because 你 like him!"
"I don't like Duncan, he's a poser bad boy."
"A hott one at that."
Just give in
Don’t give up baby
Open up your 心 and your mind to me
Just know when
That glass is empty
That the world is gonna bend
"OMG, if 你 and Jordan think that SO much why don't ya'll just 日期 him!?"
"That is a good idea!"
"Okay, I know this is 随意 but when Duncan 说 he was going to talk to James, why would James be here?"
"He 说 that? Well," She looked around for James, then found him and decided to lie for her and James' sake, "I can't find him but I saw him earlier."
"ReallY? 你 have any idea where he could be?"
(also the whole convo they are dancing club dancing stuff)
"No!"
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
The 音乐 ended, "Hey, I wasn't accusing 你 of anything."
"Well, 你 should! James is over there, Duncan is talking to him, he made me do it!"
"Which he?"
Jessie spilled all, and Jordan got off stage.
"What's goin on?" Jordan asked as Courtney ran off to one of the guys, Jordan shook her head then got back on stage.
She rushed to one of the guys.
"WHAT DO 你 THINK YOU’RE DOING!?" She yells.
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*Wormdirt is real, my friend's name is Jordan- aka awesomechick13- and if she is 阅读 this, LYLAS, but that is her nickname is Mississippi.
**All lyric credit to www.elyricsworld.com from this part on for the rest of my stories that I use lyrics.
Okay if this one goes wrong, I am going to kill someone JK JK, well in story not JK but yeah
NO POV:
It was time for them to go to the club, and naturally, Duncan was late. After 20 分钟 he knocked on her door.
"Ready?"
"For 20 Minutes."
"That's great, come on."
"I still don't know why I accepted to do this."
"Because 你 have feelings for me you’re trying to cover up, I've seen it in my ex-girlfriends, before they were my girlfriends."
"Okay, let's just go, whatever 你 think."
"Man, 你 really are a Princess."
"Stop calling me that!"
"No, Princess."
"Ugh, fine, I can deal."
"Sure, Princess." He emphasizes 'Princess'.
"SHUT UP AND LET'S GO!"
"Fine, uptight Princess."
"My God, Duncan."
They went to his car; it looked like Bumble-Bee from Transformers. Courtney shrugged thinking whether he 偷了 the car 或者 not and just got in.
Within two 分钟 they were there. Courtney saw her friend's car, Jordan. Jordan was her BEST friend, they had known each other for only a few years, since 7th grade, but they were still so close.
"Ladies first, 或者 shall I say Princesses first?" He opened the door.
"Lady, not Princess."
"Fine, I'm going to talk to my buds, which include your boyfriend, so see ya, PRINCESS!"
"Duncan!" Jordan came rushing over to her friend. "Oh hey, Jordan."
"OMG COURTNEY WHY ARE 你 HERE!?" She had a country accent, hey; she grew up in Mississippi and Georgia! 2 of the most southern states! She can, and she can never get rid of it.
"Duncan dragged me here."
"Why?"
"He's a retard that like loves me 或者 something!"
"Wow, that's SO harsh, a hott bad-boy wanting you, SOOOO BAD!"
"He's not hott; he's a poser bad-boy, so he's been to Juvie IT'S NOT HOTT!"
"Sure, Courtney, you'll get with him, I guarantee!"
The DJ yells in his mic, "IIGHT THE LIGHT TIME!!! WHOEVER THE LIGHT LIKES, 你 GOTTA SING THREE SONGS! WELL LET'S SEE, WHO DA LIGHT LIKE!?" The light roamed around until it landed on someone, Jordan.
"IIGHT THE LIGHT HAS CHOSEN!! COME ON UP HERE GIRL! AND PICK YOUR SETLIST!"
Jordan ran up there and the DJ asked her, "WASS YOUR NAME GIRL!? AND WHATS YOUR PLAYLIST!?"
"THE NAMES JORDAN, MY PLAYLIST IS: SO HAPPY I COULD DIE, SPEECHLESS, AND LAST TELEPHONE, ALL 由 LADY GAGA!"
"WELL, COUNTRY GIRL JORDAN, 或者 SHALL I SAY WORMDIRT*?"
"HOW'D 你 KNOW BOUT WORMDIRT?"
"I CAN SEE THINGS COUNTRY GIRL JORDAN, NOT COME ON AND LET'S SEE IF 你 CAN SAAAANG!"
"IIGHT." She got a mic and the 音乐 started playing.
I 爱情 that lavender blonde
The way she moves
The way she walks
I touch myself can’t get enough
And in the silence of the night
Through all the tears
And all the lies
I touch myself and it’s alright**
"Hey, Courtney what are 你 doing here!?"
"Jessie?"
"Yeah!"
"Hey girl how ya doing?"
"Good, 你 come here with someone?"
"Uh, yes I did."
"WHO?!"
Just give in
Don’t give up baby
Open up your 心 and your mind to me
Just know when
That glass is empty
That the world is gonna bend
"Duncan!"
"You came here with bad-boy-fake-british-to-impress-you-boy?"
"Yeah."
"Instead of your boyfriend?"
"Yeah."
"WHY!?"
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
"He's a briber, he bribed me."
"What's your story?"
"Okay, he was playing Dance In The Dark, reallllly loud this morning so I went over there to complain after the song was over, and he 说 that if I came here with him tonight that he would turn his 音乐 off."
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
"That's your reason?"
"Yeah!"
I am as vain as I allow
I do my hair
I gloss my eyes
I touch myself all through the night
And when something fall out of place
I take my time
I put it back
I touch myself
Till I’m on track
"Well, that's a stupid reason, 你 should've gone because 你 like him!"
"I don't like Duncan, he's a poser bad boy."
"A hott one at that."
Just give in
Don’t give up baby
Open up your 心 and your mind to me
Just know when
That glass is empty
That the world is gonna bend
"OMG, if 你 and Jordan think that SO much why don't ya'll just 日期 him!?"
"That is a good idea!"
"Okay, I know this is 随意 but when Duncan 说 he was going to talk to James, why would James be here?"
"He 说 that? Well," She looked around for James, then found him and decided to lie for her and James' sake, "I can't find him but I saw him earlier."
"ReallY? 你 have any idea where he could be?"
(also the whole convo they are dancing club dancing stuff)
"No!"
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
Happy in the club with a bottle of red wine
Stars in our eyes ‘cuz we’re having a good time
So happy I could die
Be your best friend
Yeah I’ll 爱情 你 forever
Up in the clouds
We’ll be higher than ever
So happy I could die
And it’s alright
The 音乐 ended, "Hey, I wasn't accusing 你 of anything."
"Well, 你 should! James is over there, Duncan is talking to him, he made me do it!"
"Which he?"
Jessie spilled all, and Jordan got off stage.
"What's goin on?" Jordan asked as Courtney ran off to one of the guys, Jordan shook her head then got back on stage.
She rushed to one of the guys.
"WHAT DO 你 THINK YOU’RE DOING!?" She yells.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
*Wormdirt is real, my friend's name is Jordan- aka awesomechick13- and if she is 阅读 this, LYLAS, but that is her nickname is Mississippi.
**All lyric credit to www.elyricsworld.com from this part on for the rest of my stories that I use lyrics.
Okay if this one goes wrong, I am going to kill someone JK JK, well in story not JK but yeah
DUNCAN'S POV: "Because then..." i didnt know y i was tellin her all this, but "well, i have a pretty good damn reason 2 actually go 2 skool now and not skip lyk i usually do". "You...skip...school?" courtney asked, shell-shocked, mouth agape. "Well, yh, i did, but not anymore now that i know I'll b goin 2 skool wiv u" i said. "And what makes u think that I'll EVER hang around with you?" she erupted, damn, she's hot! "NEVER!" she 说 b4 giving me a time 2 reply. That fury! I did NOT see that coming!!
TBC...
TBC...
its so pretty-bridgete
i absolutly 爱情 it-katie
oh my gosh me too-sadie
yeeeey ye ye ye-katie and sadie
(back at courtney's house)
hi honey-courtney
干草 babe-duncan
juvie-courtney
goody goody-duncan
badboy-courtney
princess-duncan
babyface-courtney
ok 你 win-duncan
*they kiss*
i missed you-duncan
i was gone for an hour-courtney
really?-duncan
yes really-courtney
*gwen runs into courtney's room*
OMG NATHAN IS TALKING-gwen
OMG WHAT WERE HIS FIRST WORDS-courtney
well i was geting him ready for a nap and he 说 i wov wu moma
awwwwwwwwwww-courtney
ok well are 你 two finished with your baby fest-duncan
yes-courtney
ok well bye-gwen
wanna rent a movie-duncan
yeah-courtney
(they go to blockbuster)
how about this-courtney
*shows duncan the movie*
yeah lets get that-duncan
(they rent "coroline")
TO BE CONTINUDE
I marked that spot with a marker.I moved the stethscope up to see if there were more.
Another heartbeat.
"Baby three."
I 说 as everyone gasped again.
Another heartbeat?!
"BABY FOUR!"
I yelled.
"No...."
I heard Courtney mumble in fear.
There was ANOTHER heartbeat.
"Five."
There were no more.
"I have to naturally give birth to all of them?!"
Courtney asked with a scream.
I KNOW THAT WAS TINY,BUT I JUST WANTED TO PROVE THAT THERE WERE 更多 THAN TWO!
(Sorry 你 thought I copied your story Courtney.)
Another heartbeat.
"Baby three."
I 说 as everyone gasped again.
Another heartbeat?!
"BABY FOUR!"
I yelled.
"No...."
I heard Courtney mumble in fear.
There was ANOTHER heartbeat.
"Five."
There were no more.
"I have to naturally give birth to all of them?!"
Courtney asked with a scream.
I KNOW THAT WAS TINY,BUT I JUST WANTED TO PROVE THAT THERE WERE 更多 THAN TWO!
(Sorry 你 thought I copied your story Courtney.)
DUNCAN'S POV: "Oh, im Courtney btw" she mumbled & shivered, "Are 你 cold?" i asked, concerned, y? IDK, i just was... "Yeh, i'd better get changed" court replied, and she walked into her room. God, she was SEXY! *5 mins l8r* Courtney came out of her room in a 云, 云计算 of perfume. Woah, i couldn't help drooling! She's wearing a strappy vest-top, which showed a bit of her cleavage, and short-shorts, REALLY short shorts. My mum says to me 'First Impressions Always Count' I guess first impressions DO count!
TBC...
TBC...