Hi, this is my first fanfic, so please 评论 (by the way this is a story about Proteus and Kida)Sorry for my spelling.
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man 你 look like your in a coma." 说 Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" 说 Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake 你 up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." 说 Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." 说 Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. 你 know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" 说 Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see 你 up! I need 你 to do something for me." 说 the king. "Anything for 你 father. What do 你 need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to 加入 Syracuse. So, 你 will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do 你 want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect 你 two to be on that 船, 小船 and on your way in an half an hour." 说 the king. So, half an 小时 later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank 你 to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man 你 look like your in a coma." 说 Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" 说 Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake 你 up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." 说 Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." 说 Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. 你 know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" 说 Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see 你 up! I need 你 to do something for me." 说 the king. "Anything for 你 father. What do 你 need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to 加入 Syracuse. So, 你 will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do 你 want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect 你 two to be on that 船, 小船 and on your way in an half an hour." 说 the king. So, half an 小时 later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank 你 to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)