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CHAPTER TWO: IN THE PARK

Marlene and Mort were sitting on a wooden park bench, with their faces turned towards the sun.
"Feeling better, Mort?" asked Marlene, stealing a glance at little Lemur.
Mort nodded his head with alacrity. He was busy watching a colorful 蝴蝶 flying hereabouts in the park.
There was another wave of rancour that overtook her mind. She felt a nasty emptiness in the pit of her stomach. Something was bothering her. But she didn't have a clue what it really was. She let out a deep sigh and clutched her paws tightly.
Suddenly she heard someone coming by. She turned her head back and froze. It was Skipper. He was waddling up towards their direction, his arms folded back. She could hear him muttering to himself:
"Cherry one for Rico, rawspberry one for Kowalski, 草莓 one for Private.. 樱桃 one for Rico.. rawspberry one for Kowalski, 草莓 one for Private... 樱桃 one... oh hey, Marlene! How is it going?" he asked, faint smile brightening his face.
"We're just having a nice sunbath on the bench" replied Marlene, grinning back at him.
"Is Mort feeling any better?"
"Yeah, I guess he is" she said. "At least much better than he did an 小时 ago.. but what's up with the rest of the team? What's with Rico and Private? Are they okay?"
"Well right now they are" answered Skipper, fixing his eyes on the ground. "But there has been a small sickness emergency due to that crisps trash, 你 know, the one I caught them stuffing themselves with. Kowalski is taking care of them. I'm out to buy some snowcones for them, 你 know.. just to make them regain good frame of mind. It always helps." he winked at her.
Marlene blushed slightly.
"How is it going, little fella?" asked Skipper, leaning over Mort who was now sitting on the ground and drawing some 企鹅 figures with his blue chalk. "This one looks like Kowalski!" he laughed, pointing at one of the portraits with his flipper. "Surely, Mort has got a talent."
"Yeah I've noticed that too. He's always been 展示 great interest in drawing." nodded Marlene.
There was a short pause.
"He wanted to play in a sandbox but there are lots of kids over there right now" she pointed with her head at the nearest playground, full of toddlers.
"It may take a while until they're done" admitted Skipper. Then his walkie talkie rang.
"How is it going, Kowalski?" he asked. "Feeling any better? Well, that's good.. yeah, okay.. well I'm in the park right now.. I'm sitting on a bench with Mort and Marlene" which he just did, 由 hopping up on the bench and placing himself right 下一个 to the otter, his left back scuffing slightly against Marlene's fur. Marlene shivered a little bit. "Alright, soldier. Take good care." He switched off and turned his attention to Marlene.
"Rico and Private are back on their feet again, thankfully. Rico is watching TV and Private is cleaning his bunk." he reported, and hid his walkie talkie in his pocket. "Seems like there is no need for me to hurry." he stated, gazing somewhere out in the space.
Marlene smothered the grin twisting her lips and choked quietly. She didn't say anything but... if Skipper could only see that invisible, white comic 云, 云计算 of: "Yaynesssss!!!!" forming above her head.
"The sandbox is all clear now" informed Skipper and patted Mort on the head. "you can go and enjoy yourself, Sad Eyes."
"Yaaay!" tweeted Mort, dropped his blue chalk and ran towards the playground. He threw himself on the sand and started rolling over to and fro, clouds of dust floating up in the air.
"So good to see him feel better" confessed Marlene with Mort's joyfull, childish laugh in the background.
Then she noticed a small, puffy squirrel, peeking at Mort from behind the tree. He was holding a big hazel nut in his paw and biting it nervously with his teeth. Marlene realized he must had been around Mort's age.
"See that little guy other there?" she asked Skipper and pointed her paw at the opposite tree.
"Seems like he is looking 前锋, 期待 to playing with Mort."
"Hey, Sad Eyes! You've got company!" cried Skipper.
Mort froze for a while and glanced at Skipper with his eyes wide open. Then he turned his head around and spotted the squirrel.
"Hii!" chirped the 松鼠 and waved to Mort with his paw. He sneaked out of the 衬套, 布什 and leaped up towards the sandbox, pressing a couple of hazel nuts to his fury chest. "Wanna try some nuts?" he offered.
"Yey, suuuure!" answered Mort somewhat confused and astonished.
"My name is Albie!" 说 the squirrel. "I live in that tree, other there. My Mum is preparing 晚餐 right now but she 说 I could play in the park for a while." He stretched his hand with a hazel nut and offered it Mort. Mort accepted the gift, rejoiced and started consuming.
"Let' make a sandcastle!" proposed Albie, grabbing one of the plastic buckets. "I 爱情 making sandcastles!"
"Aawwww... just look at them, isn't that cute?" 说 Marlene, clasping her paws together.
Skipper nodded his head thoughtfully, and smiled gently.
"Have 你 been to this park before?" asked Albie, filling the bucket with sand.
"M-mm!" mumbledd Mort, evidently upset.
Skipper and Marlene exchanged mouthfull looks.
"Because I come and play here almost every day!" continued Albie. "But only after kids are gone. One of them tried to chase me all over the park. He almost got me!.. and oh! Have 你 seen my brand new bicycle?" he pointed at the small yellow bike lying under the tree.
Mort widened his eyes in astonishment.
"My Mom bought it for me two days ago. It's fantastic!" he 说 proudly. "Wanna try?"
Mort curled up and covered himself with his tail which he always did whenever he felt embarrassed 或者 stressed.
"Don't tell me 你 never rode I bicycle before?" 说 Albie, squinting his eye in astonishment.
"Poor Mort" mumbled Marlene to herself on hearing this conversation.
Mort shivered.
"Oh come on, now, it's easy, I'll 显示 you!" 说 Albie. He hopped on the saddle, grabbed both handlebars in his paws and started making slow circles around the sandbox.
"See? It's not that tough!" he cried cheerfuly.
"Albie dear, 晚餐 is ready!" 说 Mother Squirrel.
Albie pressed the break cable and stopped his bike.
"My Mom's calling me, I gotta go. But 你 can borrow my bike and practice a little bit. 你 can leave it under my hollow 由 the time you're done. T'was really nice to meet 你 Mort! I hope we'll see each other soon!" he waved to him and leaped back to his hollow.
"Never rode a bike before, eh?" remarked Skipper, waddling up towards Mort.
Mort dropped his head.
"Why won't 你 just try? There is nothing to be afraid of!"
"Do 你 want Skipper to teach you?" asked Marlene, smiling. "Come on, Mort, it will be fun!"
Mort peeked at Skipper from behind his bushy til, fear and anxiety written all over his face.
"Nothing bad is going to happen to 你 as long as we're 由 your side" assumed Skipper.
Marlene's 心 throbbed. She got that strange feeling, that she'd already heard that line before. Wasn't that two weeks ago, when the penguins wanted to sneak out of the zoo to buy some snowcones and invited her to 加入 in?
Skipper lifted Mort from the ground and placed him on the saddle. "I'll secure 你 from the back" he said. "All 你 have to do is to keep the balance when riding. Try not do make any violent moves, otherwise you'll fall over. Now grab the handlebars tightly and put your feet on the pedals. That's it.."
"You can make it Mort!" chirped Marlene, putting her thumbs up.
"See, everything is fine!" 说 Skipper, stamping carefully after. He was holding his left flipper on the back of the saddle, keeping an eye on Mort's each move. "Just calm down" he added, when Mort started to shake. "Keep the balance, soldier! Remember! Fear is your worst enemy!"
Two 分钟 later Mort started to make evident progress.
"Now try a little faster!" 说 Skipper.
"But don't let me go!" asked Mort, clutching the handbars in his paws.
"Nah, of course I won't!" replied Skipper, menacing smile twisting his beak. Mort nodded his head and increased the speed.
"Nice and easy, Mort, nice and easy!" repeated Skipper. He winked to Marlene, and carefully removed his flipper from the saddle.
"Make sure 你 don't let go!" cried Mort, pedaling jauntily along.
"Congratulations, soldier, 你 did it!" cried Skipper, Marlene laughing heartedly.
"Well done!"
"Yaaaay!" tweeted Mort, against Skipper's and Marlene's clapping.
"You really ARE a good teacher, Skipper!" 说 Marlene.
"Guilty and charge!" replied Skipper blushing slightly and giggled.


After two hours of joyfull ride, Skipper, Mort and Marlene gave the bicycle back to squirrels house. Mort ran back towards the playground and hopped on a swing.
"You're hungry, Mort?" asked Skipper, waddling up to him. "Look what I've found. One of those kids has left a 香蕉 on the grass. I guess this is your favourite!"
"Yay!" Mort stretched his hand out to grab the banana.
"But only after you're done with the swing, soldier!" stated Skipper. "Otherwise you're gonna have a nasty stomach ache."

Five 分钟 later, when Mort was wolfing down his favourite banana, Marlene spotted something round and red, shining between the leaves.
"Look Skipper, there is a balloon 魔发奇缘 up between the 树 branches." she said, pointing at the nearest tree. "Some kid must have left it there. Mort, do 你 want me to pull it down for you?"
"Yay!" answered Mort, jumping in joy.
"All right, so 你 wait here guys and keep an eye, and I will go and climb up" commanded Marlene and sneaked up to the 树 trunk. She hopped on the branch, reached her left paw and grabbed the string of the balloon, then hopped smoothly down. But she found herself light enough for baloon to lift her up two feet above the ground.
"Hold on, sister, I will pull 你 down!" 说 Skipper. He waddled up to Marlene, with Mort hurrying after.
"Geese, at least something good has come out of my newest diet!" 评论 Marlene. "Seems like I've 迷失 another two kilos! That's great!"
"To be honest with you, Marlene, 你 and Mort are the last 动物 in the zoo which should go on a diet." remarked Skipper.
Marlene shivered when she felt Skipper wrapping his strong flippers around her waist.
"There 你 go" he said, when she had finally found herself on the ground. "Now we should think about something which would make this balloon heavier".
"Yeah, I guess we should" 说 Marlene unvoluntairly, still reliving the complement she had just heard from her colleauge. "That was really nice indeed" she thought, 粉, 粉色 blush covering her cheeks.
Then she heard a toddler sobbing somewhere in the distance.
"My balloon!" they heard him crying out desperately.
"Oh God.. seems like someone IS looking for it" she stated.
They both looked at Mort, pain and dissapointment written all over his face.
"You know what is going on, don't you, little fella?" asked Skipper delicately. "That little guy has 迷失 his balloon and is now searching through the whole park, looking for it."
"You surely don't want him to cry, do you, Mort?" asked Marlene gently, leaning over the 狐猴 and stroking his hair. "Seems like he's really looking 前锋, 期待 to finding it. How about we give it back to him, ha? That will be a good deed!" she stated, nodding her heard with alacrity.
Mort lips trembled. She glanced at his balloon, swinging happily in the air, and let out a painful sigh.
"All right" he 说 languidly, dropping his head.
"No need to worry, Mort" 说 Skipper. "I'm gonna ask Rico to regurgirate 你 one, once we get back to our HQ".
"There 你 see?" asked Marlene. "All right, guy's, I'm gonna tangle this balloon somewhere in the bushes so the kids can notice."


"Okay, guys, how about getting some snowcones?" proposed Skipper when Marlene rejoined them five 分钟 later (the boy with the baloon was now withdrawing towards the central park gate, carrying his bane along and jumpying joyfully across the path).
"I have to get a rawspberry one for Rico, 草莓 one for Private.. no! Rawspberry one for Kowalski, 樱桃 one for Private... Damnit, I've forgot!" he snapped, clasping his flipper against his forehead."I'd better call them" he stated and pulled out his walkie talkie from the pocket. "Excellante! The battery is off!" he mumbled.
"You can always get them a multiflavoured one!" proposed Marlene.
"That's the idea!" laughed Skipper. "You're going to get some as well, Sad Eys, not to worry" he added up quickly and patted Mort on the head.
"Tell me Mort, what is your favourite flav... ah yes, all right, silly me, I guess it will be banana!" she chirped.
"With coconut!" added Skipper. "Would 你 like some coconut - 香蕉 snowcone, Mort?"
"Yaaay!" jumped Mort.

"You see, don't need that much to make him happy again!" smiled Skipper. "All right then, let's go. It's getting late."

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"Uh- oh.. looks like someone's feeling sleepy" 评论 Marlene, seeing Mort's eyelids falling down languidly. They had just finished eating their snowcones. Mort was clutching a bag of delicacies they had bought for him. Skipper was carrying three multiflavoured snowcones for Kowalski, Rico and Private in his both flippers.
"No wonder, he had a really busy day" he stated.
"What shall we do with him. He is on the verge of falling asleep" 说 Marlene with Mort's loud yawning in the backround.
"Okay then, 你 take care of the snowcones and I will carry Sad Eyes" decided Skipper, handing her the ice-creams. "We should also cover him with somehting just to keep him warm" he spotted a 迷失 green towel hanging over the fence.
"This one will do" he stated. He wrapped Mort in the towel and lifted him up. "Of we go, soldier!" he commanded and they headed off towards the penguin's HQ.
posted by Tressa-pom
A sunny 日 without training... We don’t know why Skipper let us do anything we want on this day. After our hard secret missions, we really need a holiday.
Scene 1 –HQ
Kowalski is in his lab, he trying to invent new inventions. Rico is watching TV. Private is 阅读 lunacorns magazine.
Skipper: Boys, come here. We are going to get some snow cones. (Looking around) Where is Kowalski?
Private: He is in lab.
Me (Tressa): He invents new inventions that something turns into robot.
Rico: Uhh?
Me (Tressa): It’s not dangerous.
Skipper: Really?
Tressa: And… I must do something. Can I stay at HQ?...
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added by MsKowalski99
Source: Me!
posted by thespikedturtle
    "Nice shot Rico!" Private was skating around, watching Rico's target practice on the ninja pins. Rico beamed, and fired another shot, knocking the head clean off the pin. When Private applauded again, Rico smiled, but then frowned and held a flipper to his lips.
    "What is it, Rico? Do 你 hear something?" Private whispered. Rico started nodding, and looked around, as to see where the noise was coming from. They started following it, but their 搜索 was immediately interrupted 由 a shout. CRASH!!
    "Rico, what do 你 think that...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    Rico and Private had been following the chrome 龙虾 for 6 hours now, it was getting fairly boring. Private was trying new tricks on his skates, while Rico was exploding 随意 trees.
    Rico accidentally hit a gas tank, and made an explosion so loud, the aftershock blew them down. "Woah!" Private exclaimed, "That was awesome! Do it again!" So Rico looked around for another gas tank, found one, and made another giant explosion. They cheered and yelled, then Rico put the 导弹 launcher back down his throat, thinking he had done enough damage for...
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CHAPTER THREE: In Penguin's HQ


It was about 9 pm when Skipper and Marlene had finally returned to penguins HQ. Mort was curled up in Skipper's arms and was sleeping like a baby.
"SNOWCOOOOOONES!" cried the rest of the penguins, goggling their eyes at multiflavoured ice creams Marlene was carrying.
Mort wriggled uncomfortably and opened his eyes. There was a loud yawn.
"Oh, he's already waking up" noticed Marlene.
Mort rubbed his eyes with his fists and took a languid look around.
"Recognise this place, soldier?" asked Skipper warlmly, putting Mort down on the floor.
Rico winked at Mort, grabbed his...
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To start this off, let me note that I'm one of the rare skilene-haters on fanpop. I have my reasons for why I don't like it though.
One, Marlene's always annoyed me. She disagrees with almost everything Skipper says, thinks, does.
She's a skeptic of his almost always accurate paranoia.
She always complains about the penguins never knocking. When did she ever knock before coming into their HQ?
Her attitude is almost always sarcastic. Sarcastic people, I'm sorry, I don't hang around them too long.

Their differences: There are many.
Please, please, PLEASE don't leave a 评论 telling me that two ppl...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    Private and Rico arrive at the door to the hq, and tentatively open it up. When they do, they find a gaping hole in the ceiling, and Skipper and Kowalski gone.
    When Private sees this, his mind goes crazy with thoughts. "H- how- how did this happen? Where are Kowalski and Skipper? Why would they come here? Could the badgers have done this? Wha-" He turns around to talk to Rico, and finds him watching tv, the dumb animal channel. "RICO!! How could 你 be watching the telly at a time like this?!"
    "Huh?" Rico 说 stupidly. He...
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posted by thespikedturtle
Okay, this is my first ever attempt at a fanfic, so don't hate me if it's horrible!

    "What's the hold up Kowalski?" whined Skipper
    "Calm down Skipper, I'm just about done," Kowalski explained, "Once I turn this knob and twist this bolt... There, all finished!"
    "Aces! Now I can finally get that knot out of my back..." Skipper sighed. "These constant battles with Blowhole aren't good on the nerves."
    Blowhole had attempted to capture them the 日 before, like he had every 日 for a week, and the continual...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    "Skipper, haven't we heard this code before? 'Take me out to the ball game?'"
    "I believe you're right, Kowalski. A couple months ago, when Marlene had that roommate, I think I remember hearing that exact phrase."
    "So 你 think Rhonda's returned?"
    "I'm afraid so. And if Rhonda's returned, that must mean that Blowhole is after us again. That Blowhole never rests, does he?"
    "Shouldn't we go inform Private and Rico?"
    "I don't think we have time for that!"
    "What do 你 mean we-"
    "DUCK!" Skipper yelled as a giant chrome 龙虾 crashed through the roof. They slide out of the way, and escape through the back door into the sewer. Then they climb up to the ladder and go out into the park, 安全 from the danger, for now.
    "Skipper..." Started Kowalski.
    "Yes?"
    "WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?!?"
    "I believe Blowhole has made a bit of an advancement on chrome claw. A deadly one, I might add."
So here's the last part, hope you'll enjoy it!:D

Chapter Four: Between the words

Marlene woke up at 7:33. She was quite suprised to find herself in the Penguins habitat but she soon realized why was she here: Mort. He was sleeping on the other side of the room, curled up in two, covered with a yellow blanket, sucking his thumb dreamily.
Skipper was already on his feet, walking up and around in the HQ and preparing breakfast. He spotted Marlene observing him and sent her a warm smile.
"How was your sleep, sista?" he talked her down and winked to her.
Marlene blushed slighlty and straightened herself...
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posted by Tripenguinman
Though I 爱情 and respect his character, Kowalski is not hard for me to figure out. I know what he'll do when 给 the scenario at hand in the episode and how he'll react. Though he does deliever the occasional surprise, he isn't complexed in the sense of being complicated. His scientific mind is definately unfathomable, when it comes to thinking about how rational he is and yet how silly he acts sometimes. It's a good combination and carries Kowalski's personality. I would like a few 更多 twist though. It would pack 更多 of a 冲床 with Kowalski and give 更多 FanFiction material for him....
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posted by Tripenguinman
Skipper is my 最喜爱的 character and the one many people say I'm like. I like being compared to Skipper, but I've found that his character is pretty easy to figure out as well. It makes a large variety of possiblities when he's the leader but his reactions are a bit alike at times. Skipper is not very complexed-which is okay- but it will 'cause a lot of writer's block when it comes to his starring role in an episode. He has a lot of potential now, but what of his future in the show? I hope that they've planned Skipper out, at least for awhile, so that they won't find themselves in a rut. Skipper...
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