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CHAPTER THREE: In Penguin's HQ


It was about 9 pm when Skipper and Marlene had finally returned to penguins HQ. Mort was curled up in Skipper's arms and was sleeping like a baby.
"SNOWCOOOOOONES!" cried the rest of the penguins, goggling their eyes at multiflavoured ice creams Marlene was carrying.
Mort wriggled uncomfortably and opened his eyes. There was a loud yawn.
"Oh, he's already waking up" noticed Marlene.
Mort rubbed his eyes with his fists and took a languid look around.
"Recognise this place, soldier?" asked Skipper warlmly, putting Mort down on the floor.
Rico winked at Mort, grabbed his snowcone and waddled back towards the TV.
"Hey, there, Mort!" chirped Private, peeking down from his bunk and waving his flipper. Mort waved back and smiled shyly.
"Can I see Kowalski's lab?" he asked, turning his 小狗 eyes at Skipper and Marlene. Skipper shot a quick glance at Kowalski, who was standing in front of the table. He was too busy enjoying his snowcone to 心 Mort's question.
"Well.. okay.. but don't touch anything" warned Skipper. "Trust me, Kowalski is calm as a lamb, up until 你 make some damage to his inventions." he whispered back to Marlene.
"Me, I've never seen KOWALSKI throwing a fit!" 说 Marlene.
"I'd rather if 你 didn't get the chance, sister" mumbled Skipper. Meanwhile Mort grabbed his favourite blue chalk and leaped towards Kowalski's open laboratory, 唱歌 with joy.


Ten 分钟 later...


"No, not on my brand new laboratory desk!" gasped Kowalski, clutching his head with his flippers. The whole 台, 办公桌 was covered with Mor'ts blue drawnings. The 狐猴 was sitting in the corner, clutching his bushy tail in his paws, his eyes big and watery. Meanwhile Skipper bursted inside to check out the situation.
"What the heck is going on?" he asked.
"Skipppppppeeeeeeeer!" cried Kowalski, pointig at the 表 with his flipper. There was a dangerous note of hysteria in his voice and Skipper knew perfectly well, what it was about to announce.
"Mort, Mort, why won't 你 come with me, little fella, ey?" he whispered, taking Mort 由 hand. He wanted to drag Mort away from the lab before Kowalski would throw a fit and say something inappropiate.
"I will clean it up for 你 Kowalski! Just stay calm! Don't scold on him, He's just a kid, all right?" he called to his soldier before getting out of the lab.

"Here 你 go, Sad Eyes. " 说 Skipper, offering Mort a pile of white paper sheets. " 你 can draw on it as much as 你 please".
"Where did 你 find those, Skipper?" tweeted Private, goggling at the sheets in astonishment.
"I found it yesterday, wallowing in the TV corner. At least there will be some use of them. Seeing how much is the little guy keen on drawing". he patted Mort on the cheek and headed off towards the table. "You can 加入 him as well, Private" he added. "You're pretty good at drawing little ducks, maybe 你 could 显示 him".
"Aye, Skippa!" tweeted Private and clapped his flippers. "That's a wonderful idea!" he waddled up towards his bunk and pulled out a small box of colorful pencils. Several 秒 later, they both sat on the ground and started drawing. Meanwhile Skipper and Marlene were having another round of chess, sipping catfish coffee, bantering with each other and crying out "Boomshakana!" every once in a while. Kowalski locked himself up in his lab, making a thorough survey on his brand new invention. He popped out for a few 秒 just to ask Rico to regurgirate a rawspberry chewing gum for him.
"Booomshakadink!" cried Skipper, placing his chessman on Marlene's field. He then set his eyes on Rico who was sitting motionless in front of the TV, gazing at the screen, his tounge sticking out from the left side of his beak. "This guy is really something." he mumbled to Marlene. "Staring at the TV screen for three hours?"
"By the way, Skipper, Isn't it just the time they are 展示 those kids programmes on Channel 4?" asked Marlene, turning her head towards the TV. "Maybe Mort would get interested".
"Affirmative, sister" agreed Skipper. "Rico! Why won't 你 give yourself a break and let those kids enjoy the telly instead?"
"Ma aaah!" protested Rico, evidently annoyed and waved his flippers in protest.
"Just look at yourself, boy! Your eyes are bloodshot, and 你 haven't done anything today besides gazing at the screen and wolfing down popcorn!"
Rico gave him a grunt look, got up from the floor and headed towards the fridge, muttering something under his nose. He was half of his way when Mort picked up a paper sheet with Rico's portrait on it and stretched it towards the 秒 tallest penguin.
"Look, this is 你 with your favourite dolly!" he chirped grinning at Rico from the ground.
Rico stopped, astonished and somewhat confused. He took the paper sheet in his flippers and made an oblong:
"Aaaaaaaaaaw!"
"See Rico?" smiled Skipper. "No need to hold grudge against such a cute little fella".
"All right, guys, here is your program!" announced Marlene, pointing at the TV with the remote control.
Mort and Private put their chalks aside and placed themselves in front of the TV. When the programme was over, everybody settled down to 晚餐, 晚饭 (heering, bread, bananas and coconut cream). Private and Mort decided to entertain themselves 由 picking some piece grains in their forks and shooting it at the others, giggling menacingly.
"Abragbha!" protested Rico, when one of it hit him in the left side of his beak.
"Boys, behave yourself" 说 Skipper, trying to hide the grin leaking on his beak. He then turned his attention to Marlene who was enjoying her 沙拉 in silence.
"I think it's raining outside" he said.
Marlene put her fork aside and listened carefully.
"Yep, right 你 are. It is."
"It's raining stronger and stronger" continued Skipper, blushing slightly under his feathers. "Do 你 really think 你 will manage getting back to your habitat in such an awful weather?"
Marlene gripped her paws under the 表 and swallowed.
(Is he.. attempting to.. oh, naaaah.. he wouldn't. What about the others? 或者 maybe he is..)
"Because, 你 know.."
(Say it! Say it!)
".. 你 and Mort could stay here overnight... if 你 want" finished Skipper.
"Well, thank 你 very much, Skipper" started Marlene.
"It's no problem for us, your'e welcome!" chirped Skipper, as if afraid to hear her refusal.
Marlene felt a hot wave of exitement overtaking her body. She was in such a state of joy that she didn't even hear Kowalski asking her for the third time to pass him some salt.
"Thanks, Skipper" she wispered gratefully, her 心 thumping like mad.


***Aaaand, that's it for now, the fourth (and the last) chapter is about to come in few days. :D Cheeers!****
posted by Tressa-pom
A sunny 日 without training... We don’t know why Skipper let us do anything we want on this day. After our hard secret missions, we really need a holiday.
Scene 1 –HQ
Kowalski is in his lab, he trying to invent new inventions. Rico is watching TV. Private is 阅读 lunacorns magazine.
Skipper: Boys, come here. We are going to get some snow cones. (Looking around) Where is Kowalski?
Private: He is in lab.
Me (Tressa): He invents new inventions that something turns into robot.
Rico: Uhh?
Me (Tressa): It’s not dangerous.
Skipper: Really?
Tressa: And… I must do something. Can I stay at HQ?...
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added by MsKowalski99
Source: Me!
posted by thespikedturtle
    "Nice shot Rico!" Private was skating around, watching Rico's target practice on the ninja pins. Rico beamed, and fired another shot, knocking the head clean off the pin. When Private applauded again, Rico smiled, but then frowned and held a flipper to his lips.
    "What is it, Rico? Do 你 hear something?" Private whispered. Rico started nodding, and looked around, as to see where the noise was coming from. They started following it, but their 搜索 was immediately interrupted 由 a shout. CRASH!!
    "Rico, what do 你 think that...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    Rico and Private had been following the chrome 龙虾 for 6 hours now, it was getting fairly boring. Private was trying new tricks on his skates, while Rico was exploding 随意 trees.
    Rico accidentally hit a gas tank, and made an explosion so loud, the aftershock blew them down. "Woah!" Private exclaimed, "That was awesome! Do it again!" So Rico looked around for another gas tank, found one, and made another giant explosion. They cheered and yelled, then Rico put the 导弹 launcher back down his throat, thinking he had done enough damage for...
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To start this off, let me note that I'm one of the rare skilene-haters on fanpop. I have my reasons for why I don't like it though.
One, Marlene's always annoyed me. She disagrees with almost everything Skipper says, thinks, does.
She's a skeptic of his almost always accurate paranoia.
She always complains about the penguins never knocking. When did she ever knock before coming into their HQ?
Her attitude is almost always sarcastic. Sarcastic people, I'm sorry, I don't hang around them too long.

Their differences: There are many.
Please, please, PLEASE don't leave a 评论 telling me that two ppl...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    Private and Rico arrive at the door to the hq, and tentatively open it up. When they do, they find a gaping hole in the ceiling, and Skipper and Kowalski gone.
    When Private sees this, his mind goes crazy with thoughts. "H- how- how did this happen? Where are Kowalski and Skipper? Why would they come here? Could the badgers have done this? Wha-" He turns around to talk to Rico, and finds him watching tv, the dumb animal channel. "RICO!! How could 你 be watching the telly at a time like this?!"
    "Huh?" Rico 说 stupidly. He...
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posted by thespikedturtle
Okay, this is my first ever attempt at a fanfic, so don't hate me if it's horrible!

    "What's the hold up Kowalski?" whined Skipper
    "Calm down Skipper, I'm just about done," Kowalski explained, "Once I turn this knob and twist this bolt... There, all finished!"
    "Aces! Now I can finally get that knot out of my back..." Skipper sighed. "These constant battles with Blowhole aren't good on the nerves."
    Blowhole had attempted to capture them the 日 before, like he had every 日 for a week, and the continual...
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posted by thespikedturtle
    "Skipper, haven't we heard this code before? 'Take me out to the ball game?'"
    "I believe you're right, Kowalski. A couple months ago, when Marlene had that roommate, I think I remember hearing that exact phrase."
    "So 你 think Rhonda's returned?"
    "I'm afraid so. And if Rhonda's returned, that must mean that Blowhole is after us again. That Blowhole never rests, does he?"
    "Shouldn't we go inform Private and Rico?"
    "I don't think we have time for that!"
    "What do 你 mean we-"
    "DUCK!" Skipper yelled as a giant chrome 龙虾 crashed through the roof. They slide out of the way, and escape through the back door into the sewer. Then they climb up to the ladder and go out into the park, 安全 from the danger, for now.
    "Skipper..." Started Kowalski.
    "Yes?"
    "WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT?!?"
    "I believe Blowhole has made a bit of an advancement on chrome claw. A deadly one, I might add."
So here's the last part, hope you'll enjoy it!:D

Chapter Four: Between the words

Marlene woke up at 7:33. She was quite suprised to find herself in the Penguins habitat but she soon realized why was she here: Mort. He was sleeping on the other side of the room, curled up in two, covered with a yellow blanket, sucking his thumb dreamily.
Skipper was already on his feet, walking up and around in the HQ and preparing breakfast. He spotted Marlene observing him and sent her a warm smile.
"How was your sleep, sista?" he talked her down and winked to her.
Marlene blushed slighlty and straightened herself...
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posted by Tripenguinman
Though I 爱情 and respect his character, Kowalski is not hard for me to figure out. I know what he'll do when 给 the scenario at hand in the episode and how he'll react. Though he does deliever the occasional surprise, he isn't complexed in the sense of being complicated. His scientific mind is definately unfathomable, when it comes to thinking about how rational he is and yet how silly he acts sometimes. It's a good combination and carries Kowalski's personality. I would like a few 更多 twist though. It would pack 更多 of a 冲床 with Kowalski and give 更多 FanFiction material for him....
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posted by Tripenguinman
Skipper is my 最喜爱的 character and the one many people say I'm like. I like being compared to Skipper, but I've found that his character is pretty easy to figure out as well. It makes a large variety of possiblities when he's the leader but his reactions are a bit alike at times. Skipper is not very complexed-which is okay- but it will 'cause a lot of writer's block when it comes to his starring role in an episode. He has a lot of potential now, but what of his future in the show? I hope that they've planned Skipper out, at least for awhile, so that they won't find themselves in a rut. Skipper...
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