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你 may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?

Well my follow 粉丝 popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written 或者 drawn mistake, lie 或者 fake.

Why are they supposedly a lie 或者 a fraud?

Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't 或者 can't naturally have.

Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols. Her talents, her beauty, her smarts, her body, her everything is better than yours and everyone agrees and loves her. Anything she does 'wrong' is a misunderstanding and in the end she's still the lovely and good Mary!

Gary Stu-Is a male who's sexy, handsome, smooth,smart, sentimental, tough, bad boy,edgy,romantic, muscular, strong,has lots of money, and smooth with the ladies again because this is kinda a huge point to them. Basically he's everything a Mary Sue is but is a male. He makes your man like a dumb ugly dog. ( 狗 are cute 由 the way. Not cuter than 猫 though) He has no real flaws. Bad boy, no because every girl 或者 guy ( there's no discrimination in this 文章 except against Mary Sues and Gary Stus) has a bit of a soft side for the dark side. ;)

These 'people' aren't real because of these facts they have no flaws 或者 problems. Especially no challenging problems that has to take a whole series 或者 book.

Harry Potter,however, is faced with challenge after challenge that the main challenge, Voldemort brings upon him with his followers to help him. Also Harry deals with personally problems and feelings that we all had, can relate too, and are very much human. Harry's challenges last each book and the main challenge lasts through the whole series and with these challenges he grows, develops, understand things, and find ways to stop the badies and all that good stuff.

Anyway, how do they become to exist?!

That's what everyone asks! Why? Because Mary Sues and Gary Stus are common in literature, television,plays, and movies. Even in popular,well written and applauded works of art.
They exist because some authors,artists, directors, writers and all them wanted to have a character who resembles themselves but are the better versions. 或者 they are what everyone should strive to be but are impossible to reach 由 all humans because the standards are impossible to reach.But remember not every character standard can be considered impossible especially if they are a real character not a Sue 或者 Stu.

In My Little Pony Twilight Sparkle became a princess in "Magical Mystery Cure" because she understood and knew the power of friendship. She of course was then bashed for becoming a Sue. But can 你 call her that? No because she had fears and problems. But she overcame them through out the series with the help of 老友记 and her own courage and bravery. This also gives her character development but we will go over that later. Her standards weren't too high and impossible. 你 have to overcome something life changing 或者 different than anything 你 ever experienced. No 你 won't become a princess 或者 a prince, 你 will however feel some accomplishment and arise up from your old way(s) and become a better you.

Are all characters we look up to and want to be like Mary Sues and Gary Stus?

Hell No!Well defined characters are 更多 human like. They have flaws and strengths that sometimes out weigh the other 或者 are equal.You can relate to them because of this.
Flaws if 你 most know are faults,weakness, and imperfections within 或者 outside a person,idea,thought, 或者 thing. They can be small 或者 big depending on the way it is used and looked at. Strength however, are good 或者 beneficial qualities 或者 attributes of a person,idea,thought, 或者 thing.

How do I avoid making this character!?

Wise one!! 你 don't what a lifeless, boring drone. So here are some steps:

First the basics:
The character name, looks, and personality.
These can change depending on the setting the character is in. It's been proven 由 many other people that Mary Sues and Gary Stus usually have names that have a super specially meaning. But there are acceptations if 你 ask me. For example, a baby is born during a war and the parents decide to call the baby Victory 或者 Hope, Victory to remind them of what they strive for. Hope is as basic as it can get.

Appearance can change variously depending on age,era, style and person. Now here is some limitations, she 或者 he can't possible look better than everyone in the whole room unless the story is told 由 the person who loves our heroine 或者 hero. Why because they're opinion is going to be bias because they are in love. 或者 it could be bias if the narrator is our main heroine and she/he believes she/he's 更多 gorgeous/handsome than everyone else but this could be written as either a flaw 或者 a strength because she/he is either arrogant 或者 confident.

Here are some body limitations if she is bone thin don't say she has curves in all the right ways, if she's chubby don't say she's fitter than every girl in school because it's kinda unrealistic for both lines. If he is bone thin don't say he's the best football player because of his natural physical strength alone. Natural strength as in no powers, no magic, no drugs, no bribes, no video games, and no dreams. But again if it's from a bias persons point of view it can be put off as an acceptation. It could be written off as being a Mary 或者 Gary when the story is told basically 由 an unbiased 或者 outside character.

First off the character can be attractive,friendly and smart. Why? Because both woman and men can be this way without being perfect.The reason why a person could have these strengths without being a Mary 或者 a Gary is because the strengths most likely will be balanced with flaws 或者 occasionally topping over each other.There are 更多 strengths too 由 the way. Such as talented, generous, open minded,creative,exciting, lovely, elegant, popular,independent,strong,healthy,athletic, brave,witty,cunning,etc.There are many flaws that are out there and could be a trait for a human as well as a character ,such as being ignorant, close minded, lazy, boring, dependent, weak, coward, arrogant, naive, bossy,ugly,mean, etc. As 你 can see some 或者 most of the flaws is the opposite of the some 或者 most of the strengths.

Second: Back story and Goals
This is where we know the history of the character and can direct us to the character's possibly future. This is where we learn who's their family and 老友记 are, possibly their enemy, were there some lovers, were there some 心 break, 或者 were there some terrible things that happened to our character. Was it death, rape, molestation, traumatizing experiences, 或者 something? The back story can example many things about the character whether why the appear this way, why do they live here, why do they 爱情 this 或者 hate that, why are this/that way? Back story is basically what were character history,present and future is.Make them at least have one personally fear because everyone has one. Give reasons why they are nervous 或者 afraid of this 或者 this happening.

Goals are basically what the character has accomplished 或者 hasn't accomplished yet and what they want to accomplish. This also help us with the back story of the character 或者 the whole story itself, This can also tell us why the character act this way, like this and dislike this, and are a certain way. Goals, back story, development and personality in my opinion is what makes a deep character. Deep characters have complicated feelings, thoughts, goals, development and personality.

Development is of course how much the character progress, learn, and better themselves and others. 你 also will learn the rawness of the character, what they are and who? Why they do this 或者 do that? 你 understand them and relate to them. They are slowly fixing their flaws and inspiring 你 to do so too.

A Mary Sue and a Gary Stu does none of these things 或者 have these things. They aren't complex, they weren't hard to figure out. 你 what is happening before it is happening and there's no real problem 或者 suspense around them. Why? Because Mary and Gary aren't meant for serious novels and 电视 shows. They're little characters the 作者 或者 whatever put there just because.

Don't make Mary Sues and Gary Stus. Just telling it how it is!
posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were 浓情巧克力 brown color, she pulled herself out of the 床, 床上 and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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posted by animefangirlz
I was 13 when i had my first love.not my first boyfriend but someone i actually loved.
    
My name is Elisabeth Maddison,but everyone calls me "shinigami" it means " god of death",for my 13th birthday my older cousin Geettto took me to his gig.He plays lead 吉他 and vocals for their band. He kept telling me how much they kick butt and all the battle of the bands they won. I just kept walking in the rain as it poured down flooding the sky. We got to the place,it was an old former shed for shipping trucks. The small factory behind it turned into a 音乐 store.They give local...
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Zoeiz took a subtle relaxed deep breathe. And held it just for a moment.

Christ, 由 highest heaven adored…

The cold blistering air nipped at her exposed cheeks and the tip of her petite nose. A perfect atmosphere for the winters most important day, Christmas.

It was only 7:55 in the morning. Children throughout the modest town would be up 由 now, pouncing on their drowsy parents, eagerly anticipating on opening the wrapped gifts and stuffed bags.

She breathed out, the vaporous air revealing her breath.

Christ, the everlasting Lord…

Naturally, fresh flakes of snow began to fall from the...
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posted by coriann
The house lights were on bright. It was a lonely brick house, brownish cream and had a red galvenise roof. there was a square arch around the front door. It was big and had a light and a bench on the side. I walked up the one step to the open door. The boy had already run inside. Contrary to the arch, the inside of the house was black and dim and full of decor and dim lights. I should have noticed from looking at the glass louvers.
I saw a Muslim lady in 橙子, 橙色 on the phone. She was fair (light brown) and thick. The 橙子, 橙色 sari was high up over her knees. "Mam, Mam"
She was laughing, but she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The 下一个 Day-
I peeked from behind the left corner of the school and saw Cameron carrying Mercury's book towards the school entrance. Perfect. I turned to Zoey and Francine, who were right behind me. "I'm ready. How do I look ?" I had on the outfit Francine picked out for me and the makeup Zoey put on me yesterday. My hair was in a french braid, courtesy of Zoey's mom.

"Beautiful", 说 Francine.

"I'm jealous", 说 Zoey.

"Thanks." I turned back to look at Cameron, who had probably forgot something because he was walking back to his car. "Wish me luck." I rushed towards Cameron. "Hey."

"Hey." He...
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posted by GummyBears_11
As screwed up as my life was, I always found joy in singing. I sang everyday, no matter what happened. 唱歌 helped me remember a better time. A time when 'he' wasn't around. A time when my mother WAS around. A time when I wasn't alone.

Chapter 1- Ring Around The Rosies

I jerked awake. I was covered in cold sweat, and I still had flashbacks of the nightmare stuck in my head.

"No! Mother, please, don't go!"

There was no use in falling asleep again. It was already 6:40, and soon enough, my stepfather would barge in my room, yelling at me to get up, calling me names, threatening to beat me....
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posted by Dhampires
Hate.Disappointment.Regret.They all make up some of the worst thing in our lives...then why can't we just give it up?Give it up and just throw all our problems away?The answer is simple because this,this is reality not a fairytale 或者 some fiction story,where the writer can just have their way over their characters like puppets.No.Not at all in reality does one have their way to control their life 或者 the lies that people tell them.There's no stopping your troubles in life 或者 changing the regret you've made in the past ...it's life.
posted by problematic124
****Please don't copy***
Chapter 3
The case of the brownie
That feeling from earlier today hadn't gone away, in fact it intensified. I was still spooked 由 the time I got to school.
"You okay Kyle"Fable asked as I jumped at the slightest sounds.
"Yeah just a little...jumpy"
Before Fable could ask why Mr.Derelo came in and started the class.
"Okay guys pick partners, today were going to undergo the experience of an illusion. Were going to make this classroom look like something out of the 1950's, and it's going to be a house haunted 由 a ghost"
"In your groups your going to write a 报道 about the...
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1) Girls (at the age of 15 或者 so) think about sex just as much as guys do... The only catch is some of us think about it for the emotional parts, and some of us like it for the physical parts. You'd be surprised who is in which group.

2)If 你 like us, tell us. Do not be worried about what we'll think, because we are flattered no matter if we like 你 或者 not.

3) Most of the time girls are 99% sure when a guy likes us. The only way to be 100% sure is if 你 tell us.

4) For some strange reason I've always found myself to become attracted to guys that like me. (Unless they're super creepy and stalk...
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Hi 粉丝 of Writing! I bet we all experienced Writer's Block before, heck, all writers must have. It's frustrating isn't it? So I devised 5 steps to get rid of it and get rid of it fast. If it doesn't work, devise your own plan, but here's mine.
P.S. If 你 don't know what Writer's Block is 或者 if 你 haven't experienced it yet, I'm not giving an explanation so find out what it's like first!

Step 1: Don't Panic
-Panicking 或者 fussing over your running out of inspiration will just make things worse and definitly lead straight to mind blank mode. So just relax and do something else other than writing....
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posted by jaloc
Hi. My name is 茉莉, 茉莉花 and Im 14 and write at 随意 sometimes and this is one time. Ill start 写作 whenever about whatever from some spot;) 评论 if u like it 或者 MSG me:) here it goes;)
The forest was growing dark and visciously cold. The 动物 were going quiet, as if they knew danger was coming. I could barely hear the river flowing in the distance and the lapping of the damt trying to stop its flow. My breathing became ragged; my blood was pounding in my ears. I have to 移动 或者 He would come destroy me. I began to run no matter how much burning pain was in my chest. The crunching of...
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posted by disneyworld007
Swing, Batter, Batter, Swing!
Putting my weight on my right foot, the foot closest to the catcher. Leaning back re-gripping my bat. I watched as that black haired pitcher powered up her pitch, rocking back and forth on her heals, taking in her 手套 now to her side and starting the wind-up. 'This is it,' I thought to myself, now taking the best grip on my bat, 2 balls and 2 strikes have passed 由 this plate and I am not letting this pitcher strike me out, 或者 walk me! I got ready the ball was realeased, and I heard the 'ump' say "Ball Outside".
I stepped out of the batters box, and took a couple...
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posted by Seastar4374
(warning this first part is going to be a little graphic so please do not 报道 this if 你 are going to be a hater just leave this 文章 right now)

"Come on get down on your knees now!" "No!" is all I could scream to him. He has held me here for three months now and I could tell why now. All the molesting, all the nice treatment, lead up to this moment here and now. He was planning rape. He shoved me onto my hands and knees and all I could let out was a cry. "Oh shut up it'll be over before 你 know it" He says as he stands over me his legs holding my hips so I can't try and crawl away....
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- Chapter 1: He's A Stray (Raven's POV) -
For only 20 years, 20 long years sucked for me, when I was only 23 years old, I became a vampire, why? well ask Jacob, my moron and 婊子, 子 of a boyfriend I wish I can strangle, me and Jacob were at a party from his friends, he was being a little prick like always even if people are around he would blame me for it, I was just looking at a couple of beautiful 玫瑰 until Jacob grabbed my arm, "Why 你 always looking like a stupid tramp? at least 显示 some respect for once" he 说 and jerked my arm away, I ran to the bathroom, I just wish I can go but he's...
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posted by ivoryphills
Elliot Rhodes sat in her well-worn 台, 办公桌 chair at her computer, skimming her notepad for the umpteenth time, tapping her pen as her impatience grew. She waited for a story to flow onto her paper, a feat that wasn't foreign to her until last year, when a book she published got her into some scalding water with the nation's minorities and her publisher.

She was lucky that the publisher didn't drop her; she was a Milwaukeean college student, living just below the poverty line, and whatever small sales her 图书 made was added to her meager income. So there Elliot sat, wishing that something would...
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( Hi I am here with another story. In this where ever is ‘I’ please consider yourself there )
Mei was busy with her laptop, Tia and Rocket were sitting in a corner D’jok and Thank were enjoying funny performance of Micro Ice. Ahito was sleeping and I was sitting in one corner waiting for Sinned. There was a loud sound coming from another room. Arch was scolding Sinned for his deeds he did in match. When he came he was a bit angry but when I went there he looked with his caring eyes and 说 “hey l’ll sis I’ll come to take you. Till then live here coz my life is kinda unsettled…”...
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posted by Kimi4312
(This is a 流行的 online novel I had been posting on my 脸谱 account, enjoy! ^_^)

~Chapter 1: How To Save A Life~
Dawn was a beautiful young woman who recently caught her boyfriend cheating on her with another woman, Dawn wrote a suicide note to give to her 老友记 Jessica, Kristina, Alison and Madison, Dawn puts on her black dress and takes a razor blade with her, Dawn walks on her apartment housing roof that is 20 feet below, she sits there watching her boyfriend have sex with another woman, Dawn's dark eyes begins to pour out tears as her 心 begins to break she steps on the edge of...
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These side affects were takeing a toll on the hero gradually wearing him down, the doctor took the hero in as his own careing for him and makeing sure he was brought up well, "Two year's have passed since that night." the hero thought to himself as he got up out of 床, 床上 to start what seemed like a normal summer 日 "Boy where are 你 it's time to start work!" excalimed the old man as he knocked on his door "Eh... I hate mornings." 说 the hero as he got up out of 床, 床上 getting dressed to start another day. With the sun bareing down on them it seemed as if hell had found it's way to Siege "Are...
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posted by Lore_Master
Our hero fell to his knee's "Wha....what....no all my work and research.....gone!" he 说 as he clutched his chest gasping for air, as 日 turned to night he sat there with an empty feeling eating him from the inside, he looked up at the star's "Why me why do.... why the fuck does this happen to me!!!" the hero yelled as he started pounding the ground violently, his whole body filled with rage and sadness knowing all of his work was just wasted he began to shed tear's it seemed the 更多 he hit the ground the further it plunged him into dark thought's soon thinking of resorting to evil necromancy...
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Once upon a time there was a girl named Evangeline Lovesky and all she wanted was to have friends, but no one wanted to be her friend because she was a princess and they thought that if they made her angry she would have them killed. But she was very nice and would not. Evangeline was about 5' tall and was 13 years old and has beautiful golden hair about to her waist. One 日 she was bored an decided to take a walk. She walked all the way from the castle, past the market, and all the way to a small corner of houses surrounded 由 fields. These were the farmers houses, though the farmers were...
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