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posted by Will_NolanLover
All copie rights go to Stephine M. about some parts. The Walterman's and Maggie are my 老友记 name's! so please put positive comment's not negitive! OK!!! Here it is!

Ch.1
The Lunch
Once upon a time, there once was a girl named Maggie. Maggie was a princess in the kingdom of Atlantis, not the underwater one. Well Maggie has a little anger issue, so when she gets angry, she goes for a walk in the garden. When Princess Maggie goes for her walk she always sees the man she loves, Prince Edward. Prince Edward, to her, is a loving, kind, gentle, handsome man. He is ever so kind to the animals; and the 动物 are kind to him. Secretly he wanted her as well.
When Princess Maggie was sad, she would stay in her room; if Maggie would not come to the garden, he would know what was going on, she was tired, depressed, 或者 sad.
One 日 there was a knock on her door; it was her father, King Steven. When the King came in Maggie 说 “What are 你 doing here?”
He replied “We have new neighbors. They are the Walterman’s.”
“Oh, Yipey!” Maggie 说 sarcastically.
“Hey, they’re royalty; just like us,” 说 the King. “We’ll be having lunch with them, tomorrow at Noon. 你 have to be there; wear your best cloths,” 说 the King. When the King left, Maggie lay on her 床, 床上 and her mood was annoyed. In her mind she thought “I don’t wanna go. But I have to. Dad is counting on me. But I won’t be able to see Prince Edward. Uhhhhhhhhh! Why do I have to make so many choices!?”
Then the Princess got up to get her cloak; she went outside to the garden, she saw Edward, he was picking a flower. Princess Maggie went over to him and said, “Hey Edward, what are 你 doing?”
Then Prince Edward gave her a 花 and said, “This is for you.”
Princess Maggie took it, “Thank you, thank 你 very much,” she 说 and blushed.
“So, when will 你 come out tomorrow?” 说 Edward.
“Oh, I have to meet with this new royal family tomorrow for lunch,” 说 Princess Maggie. “I’m sorry.”
“That’s ok, I’ll go with you.”
“Are 你 sure 你 want to go? It’s only just for lunch, it won’t be any fun. I’d rather be her in my 花 garden.”
“I’m sure. It’ll be fun. Trust me.”
“Ok,” 说 Maggie. “The lunch is at high Noon.”
“Ok I’ll see 你 there. Is it that new 城堡 across from the bog?”
“Why, yes, yes it is. 你 are very clever Edward.”
“No, not really. I’m failing manners right now,” Edward replied.
“How can 你 fail manners? All 你 do is this ‘Please sir, pass 果酱 and crumpets,’ fairly easy.”
“It’s not when your me. I have a lot of “adrenalin rushes” these days.”
“Why’d 你 put 语录 around adrenalin rushes?”
“Air 语录 are cool.”
“Ya, they are cool, aren’t they.”
“What time is it?” asked Edward.
“It’s Three thirty. Why?”
“I need to be 首页 at four o’clock, ‘or else something bad will happen to your room’”
“LOL! 或者 something bad will happen to your room.”
“Ya, mom’s these days. Why can’t they be like ‘Here’s your chores for the day, go do them now!’ That kind of mom.”
“Ya, I wish so too. What do 你 think will happen to your room?”
“Oh I think she’ll turn into a spa 或者 something girly like that.”
“My thoughts exactly. So what 你 wanna talk ‘bout?”
“Hmmm. What 你 think the lunch is about.”
“Sure,” 说 Princess Maggie.
Before Edward could speak they heard someone saying, “Hello! Anyone out here!” The voice was unfamiliar. The person came closer they saw a young boy about 4’ 7”. Light brown skin and glasses. He came closer and said, “Hey guys! My name is Prince Kyle Walterman! My twin brother, Prince Bret Walterman, ditched me. He’s failing manners 由 the way.”
Edward looked over at Maggie with a smirk on his face. “Oh shut up!” she said. “By the way my name is Princess Maggie. We were going to meet tomorrow but here we are!” And they shock hands.
“Pleasure to meet you,” 说 Kyle.
“And I am Prince Edward. We were going to meet 你 tomorrow too.”
“Excellent! We will meet again, and if 你 see a person that looks like me but no glasses that’s my twin brother,” 说 Kyle. “Well I better get back ‘or else something bad might happen to your room!’”
Another smirk from Edward. “SHUT UP!” 说 Maggie. “We’ll see 你 tomorrow.”
“Bye,” 说 Edward, and Kyle left. “I wonder what’s going to happen at the lunch tomorrow. Oh well I have to get going. Bye Maggie!” Then Edward left.
“Bye!” 说 Maggie waving after him. Then Maggie went back to her room and lay down on her bed. She decided to get out 任天堂 DS. She played it until her mom called down for dinner.



Ch. 2
The note on the chair
When Princess Maggie woke up, she looked at the clock and said, “Oh, it’s only Ten thirty. TEN THIRTY! She ran to take a shower. After her 淋浴 she looked at the clock fifteen 分钟 to eleven. “Ahhh!” She ran to get dressed and brushed her hair, and she ran down stairs in the nick of time.
“Ok, good. You’re ready. Let us go!” 说 the king. So they left.

Once they got to the royal palace of the Walterman’s, Maggie saw Edward and she walked over to him and said, “Did 你 see Kyle 或者 his brother?”
“No, I haven’t. But I did see their littlest brother Ryan and his littlest sister Jamie.”
“Ok, I’m going to find my chair and have something to eat.”
“Ok I’ll see 你 later,” 说 Edward.
When Maggie found her chair she saw a note on it. “Huh, what’s this?” she asked herself. She opened it up and read-
Dear Princess Maggie,
It was a pleasure seeing you. I hope I will see 你 once 更多 before this night end. 你 are very beautiful; your hair as red as the 火, 消防 that burns of my 爱情 for you. Your blue eyes sparkle like the ocean when sun set comes round. Your freckles on your face remind me of cinnamon sprinkled on cinnamon toast, my fave.
爱情 forever,
Your Secret Admirer.
“Hmmm. Wonder who this is from. I’ll ask Edward.” She set of to find Edward. She looked everywhere to find him and found him in the least expected place his seat.
posted by TDIlover226
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posted by spikes_girl
There are things in your every 日 life that 你 never take a 秒 glance at. They're just there, noting to ponder over 或者 to think about. Here are two short tribute poems to some overlooked objects in life.

Fountain

The 群青 colored water
Dances down through a maze of marble obstacles
Creating clear rainbows across the sheer water's surface.

A carpet of copper and silver glints at the bottom
Coins
Lost with memory of young children
Wishing for new puppies
Ice cream cones
Hot 狗 for dinner
For bedtime stories to become flesh
A cat in a hat to come skipping off the pages.

Everything is in this...
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posted by dragonrider
"Oh my god Starr! Oh I didn't mean to surprise you! Well I did but I didn't know 你 would faint! Oh wake up Starr!" Elliot's voice rang out
I feel him shaking me. I can't bring myself to open my eyes to see him.
"Well I guess I have to be like that prince in sleeping beauty and 吻乐队(Kiss) 你 awake," his voice rang out again. I feel pressure on my body
My eyes shoot open just in time before Elliot kisses me. I push him off.
"Get the hell of off me 你 idiot!" I yell standing up. I brush myself. I rub the back of my head that is stinging in pain. I feel wet stuff come off my head. I look at it...
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posted by Buggie111
I wrote this yesterday when me and my boyfriend had a big fight and it's a fight that may go on for a long time. I know I am young to write something like this but, I guess it helps. Plus If 你 don't like it just tell me, ok?

The Power of Words
你 and I had this big long fight,
It felt like the storm during the night.
It was verry sad and cold,

My 老友记 had to like 你 a lot
and 你 felt like I forgot,
forgot about you.
But I had a prodject due.

你 think you're mr. I'm so cool
but 你 used to act like a ghool.
Not to the people 你 love,
to the sensetive people like a dove.

How we spoke with eachother,
made 你 feel much better.
But the fight we had,
你 说 was nothing but it was bad.

See ya pal we're ova,
take the cell 你 gave me and do me a fava.
Just don't ever,
Never...
Talk to me again!
posted by Dearheart
A/N: I finished 写作 this about five 分钟 ago, lol. It's actually a song, but I figured it would fit as a poem as well.

This poem/song was inspired 由 two things: 1) A few of my 最喜爱的 日本动漫 couples, namely Ed x Winry from Fullmetal Alchemist and Hoshino x Tanabe from Planetes (AWESOME series). And 2) while my dad was in Iraq, he heard "My Immortal" for the first time and 说 he loved the idea behind it...but it was too sad/depressing because "the chorus was in past tense instead of present tense." So he asked me if maybe I could take the same concept and do my own thing with it. I...
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I never realized how much it hurt to be shot. Who would believe that that was the least of my worries? I certainly didn’t, so as I was screaming my head off, all people from around the school came into the band hall to see who was screaming. I suppose they would be a bit disappointed that someone was just shot and no one had gone crazy, which would have been equally entertaining, but there was tension in the room. Kids stood awkwardly around, not knowing what to do. People that had crowded around me earlier...
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posted by iluvtheshow
Prologue:
"Harper! Aren't 你 happy she's eating with us?" Gwen asked happily. Harper shot her sister a glare. "It shouldn't be a big deal that your step-mother decides to eat with you." Harper spit out, looking back at the book she was reading. Gwen's face fell. She didn't care what Harper thought, she was going to make the best of this. Their step-mother, Lyn, hadn't eaten with them in 2 months. Gwen walked down the hall toward the kitchen, her sister's words echoing in her head.

Chapter 1 *Gwen*

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posted by Katiegirl
Nightfall was rising rapidly on this wondrous night.
    I found myself dozing into a heavenly sleep. My dreams
    began to indulge my inner thoughts seductively I could
    Feel myself falling into an internal state of mind. A place
    where only my dreams had a recollection of my desires
    of this world. In the outermost parts of my dream I
    could faintly hear the loud thunderous storm
    lurking outside my window. Slightly beyond
    the...
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added by whitelion
posted by mrs-mindfreak
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    Meredith crept down the hall and into the 厨房 for a little snack. Maybe some warm 牛奶 would put her to sleep. She reached...
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    Ouch! I open my eyes, gazing up at the bumpy, white ceiling. Oh so all of that was just a dream. I sigh with relief but feeling disappointed at the same time. Awwww and here I thought someone finally confessed...
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posted by Cinders
It has been 说 that those with no words often have the most to say.


New York City, circa 1992.

He was quiet, a secret sort of troubled, his hands buried deep into his pockets as he wandered the slums of a black city, a heavy shadow cast over the sky that was too dark for the stars to penetrate.

She was a bloodnut and she watched him from the shadows, her dead 心 rattling inside of her empty chest. She launched herself at him and latched onto his arm like a leech, beginning to beg, offering services in exchange for the substance she craved so much. Just a taste, she said, she promised that...
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 Courtesy of the cartoonist, Clangnuts
Courtesy of the cartoonist, Clangnuts
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All authors want to be original. If someone even mentions that a writer's work reminds them of someone else's, the writer tenses up. "No, no, no, I'm nothing like him," he says swiftly. "I've never even read him."

"Yeah, but it's kinda like him," the reader persists, believing she is giving a compliment rather than an insult. "He's incredible, 你 should read him!"

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posted by mars15
I hate when 你 walk away from me
because I'm always scared that 你 won't be come back
I hate every time i see you
because i always melt like ice scream on sun
I hate every time when I'm not seeing you
because i always think where are you
I hate that you're always in my head
because i can't think about anything else but you
I hate when 你 don't talk with me
because i always think that i did something wrong
I hate that i always try to impress you
but it's like 你 don't see that
I hate every time 你 touch me instinctively
because 你 always make me want to hold you,to 吻乐队(Kiss) you
I hate every time 你 talk...
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posted by thirteen_times
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posted by Cutebutcrazy--
My name is Gennive Mason.
I am 13 years old.
And oh yeah. I'm the last vampirehunter alive.
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posted by thirteen_times
There he is just standing there, starring at 你 with 小狗 dog eyes. He smiles briefly at 你 breaking your heart. It’s all too much so 你 so 你 slam the door. Before the door shuts he sticks his foot in the door way stopping it.
“I just want to talk.”
“There’s nothing to talk about.” 你 lie. 你 don’t want to hear him apologize 或者 even see him. What he did hurt 你 like nothing else could, still 你 knew that 你 loved him and 你 心 ached for him. 你 wish 你 could turn back time to when 你 both were happy but 你 know that what’s done is done.
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