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posted by starfire1712
This is our the land where we live
What we have we won’t give
Up to any without a fight
Our ancestors gave us this birth right
We just want to live in peace
But still the battles will not cease
Until we’re driven from our home
Then we would be left to roam
And settle in some other place
或者 wiped out with no trace
Our names they wouldn’t know
So we prepare to meet our foe
The tribal headdress worn with pride
And paint upon our skin to hide
Who they face upon the field
Armed with arrows, spear & shield
Seen as men within a crowd
Surging forth we holler aloud
No fear from us will be shown
As they meet the unknown
Warriors not afraid to die
Fighting for our cause we try
To save our land & family
So our tribe can be free
To live as we choose to do
So let battle now ensue
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The two basic components of a complete sentence are a subject and a verb. Although these two things don't always make a complete sentence, grammatical completeness is a good place to start to avoid incomplete sentences. The verb is the action that takes place, and...
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posted by Me_Iz_Here
Depressing, COMPLETELY FICTIONAL story I wrote.

“My mother ruined my life.” 你 hear girls say that all the time. It’s never true. Unless 你 ask me. My mother truly ruined my life. Not in the way 你 would expect a sixteen 年 old girl to say that. I genuinely meant it.
I remember sobbing that day. When we got back from the doctor, sobbing my eyes out. I hated her. I hated my mother with a passion.
I looked down at my newly flat stomach. I missed the bump there. The bump that I had indicating an unborn child. The child that I loved and vowed to care for. Until my fucking mother made...
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CHAPTER ONE
I’m attacked 由 a demon puppy
I was sitting on the floating dock at 密封 Harbor Beach. I came here to think. This dock usually floated at high tide but it was low tide so the dock was just sitting on the sand. The smells of low tide floated into my nose. I had grown accustom to this smell, seeing as though I came here very often. It was the smell of 鱼 and lobster.

Today, I had come here to wonder what was wrong with my life. My mother had died when I was 2 years old so I was too young to remember, but every night I strained all the energy out of my brain trying to remember her....
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There’s this chick called Princess Alyssia Renesmee III (Alyss). She’s the princess (obviously :). At the start she has a best friend who she’s been 老友记 with since they were 婴儿 called Charlotte. She ended up being her maidservant though coz her parents were killed. Alyss lives in the 城堡 with her parents the king and 皇后乐队 (obviously) and boyfriend/ fiancé, James. He keeps knicken off on ‘business’. Alyss doesn’t actually suspect anything, she’s just sad that she never gets to see him. She’s also known him since they were really little, and she’s supposed to marry...
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posted by London_Victoria
 Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Now i Will Always Remember You<3
Hurtful word's can mean so much but nothing means 更多 than to hear your beautiful word's.
Because when 你 cry i will too because noone
knows how much i 爱情 你 only me and my heart
do,And it tells me that i would die for you.
When 你 say i cant take it anymore it surprises me that 你 mean it because i think it's
beautiful that 你 would give your 心 to me.
People might say i'm wrong for 你 but their words dont matter because me and 你 are different from everyone else.
I know sometimes im not always there for 你 but i will try my best to tell 你 the truth because nothing really matters...
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posted by PFEIFFER11
It was Bri. She backed away slightly looking at them. Her head snapped up as she heard the dogs.

"This way." She went down past a fallen tree. Matthew, Evie, Leven and Cameron looked at each other skeptically but followed. She led them to an old cabin. It had most of the walls in contact but was over grown with plants. To Evie she couldn't of seen it but since Bri had opened the door she did.Bri then opened a hatch from the floor and ushered them. She followed the and closed the hatch. It had a musty smell to it and it was completely dark. They sat in silence for a few moments but they could...
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posted by problematic124
*******Sorry for the wait. Please don't copy******
Chapter 2
Irene
Even though we both screamed loud enough to blow your eardrums the thunder was much 更多 louder than us.
"RUN!"
We don't know where it came from but we obeyed. We ran for our lives out of there and kept on running.We ran into the rest of the guys.
"What was that thing!"Blake yelled
Wilderness shook her head and sat down. I followed suit and then 说 "will 你 at least tell us what happened"
"I left 你 in the classroom and I ended up in the cafeteria 下一个 thing I know something is breathing heavily on me and when I turn I scream at...
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posted by hannah_vampire
thxs for the 评论 plz keep commenting thxs so much :)

I had not been to school which I kinda liked but I had to get out I hated it here and when i know that he likes me it makes it 更多 hard just to even look at sefo it kills me.

I stayed away from him for aleast a week, I had to talk to him but alone and the only time i could talk to him was now, He was standing near the water and it was sunset how perfect is this!
He turned and saw we walk down towards him 'Hey Belle look before 你 say anything your wrong i know that' I stayed at him excuse me did he just say I was wrong 'Look here sefo...
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