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posted by CheeryDavis
Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the 干草 i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as 你 pull me up and hold me close
i know that 你 will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is a while
as 你 take my hand when 你 reach the end of the aisle
the preacher announces us as man and wife
and 你 吻乐队(Kiss) me and hold me tight
and for the rest of your life in your arms i will stay
come what may

the sun reveals itself in the most brilliant of ways
but i cant take my eyes off of 你 and the child 你 nestle in your arms for the

first time today
i touch his cheek and 你 touch mine
this must be what heaven feels like
你 reach up and pull be into your warm embrace
and again everything falls into place
your arms around me full of grace
i hold 你 close because in your arms i will gladly stay
come what may

tears fall fresh down your face
i wish i could save 你 from all this pain
i would gladly take your place
the death of your father is something i wish i could erase
but like you've always 说 rainbows only come after the rain
as soon as 你 see me 你 collapse in my arms
and i glady 包, 换行 你 in them keeping 你 安全 from harm
i can feel 你 pull me in close
and i can promise 你 with all my 心 i will never let go
because in your arms i will always stay
come what may

your crying but these are happy tears
the sun is shining down on us as we look on at our son of 25 years
he takes his soon to be wife's hand as she makes it to the end of the aisle
and i grab your hand too and we both can't help but smile
because we know his life will now be complete and started anew
just like my life was turned around the 日 i met you
你 lean your head on my chest as they are announced husband and wife
we both pull him into a hug when he comes to our side
my 心 swells with pride at just the sight of 你 two
the 爱情 i feel for 你 both is the only thing i know to be true
if i could stay like this forever if i could have my way
in the comfort of your arms i would stay
come what may

we look at him our pride and joy
we could not be 更多 proud of our son when he hands us his little boy
blue eyes and a mess of blonde hair
and as 你 hold him i can't help but stare
the 爱情 between a woman and a child is so precious and pure
and i know thats how our son feels when his wife is holding this beautiful boy
he grabs your hand and squeezes it gently
and i know he is thinking the same thing as me
that when he is in your arms there is no other place he'd rather be
he has it all figured out because he knows that in your arms he should stay
come what may

your dark hair has now turned gray
but to me your still as perfect as ever 你 still take my breathe away
as we sit on our fronch porch and watch our grandchildren play
i 吻乐队(Kiss) your wrinkled hand and watch as the dimples spread across your face
i look at 你 and thank God for letting me be the lucky man that get to be with

你 for the rest of my days
we've made so many memories and had such a great life
i couldn't imagine anything 更多 perfect if i tried
but then 你 lean in and pull me into your arms
and the feeling is nothing short of charmed
being in your arms is the best part of my day
and through all the ups and the downs
the rainstorms the sun and the clouds
the true bliss of being here in your arms takes it all away
so if you'll have me this is where i will stay
come what may


THE END! hope 你 liked it please write back and tell me, b/c i just through it together, so i want to know if it even made since lol!
 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture 由 金牌 Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion 图标 of The 年 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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If i get enough 评论 i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as 动物 scurried in the 树 tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in 由 cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, 最佳, 返回页首 bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million 星, 星级 and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around 你 killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the 太空 craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if 你 want to convey your thoughts accurately. 你 also want your 写作 to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is 更多 annoying than 阅读 a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of 写作 sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
1


Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As 你 bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by DxCFan123
Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...
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posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes 前锋, 期待 the mind and body of an individual changes for either good 或者 bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years 以前 由 a wise old man that fortold my future. He 说 "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's 迷失 Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him 更多 shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a 安全 distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be 展示 你 the best techniques for 写作 your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what 你 may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, 你 have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before 你 decide on a plot, 你 should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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posted by PhoenixRoyale
This is another poem that I have written. It was inspired 由 some 评论 about stuffed animals/plushies on youtobe being people's friends. Enjoy.
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The Stuffed Animal.
To some, they are stupid.
They are useless.
They are disgusting little balls of fluff.

Those people think that it's necessary
to pick on the innocence of others
for having a collection of their own.
They poke fun, they tease, they even insult.

They target that person's age.
Sometimes even their gender.
They think they need to grow up.
They think these fluffy plushies are meant for babies.

But to those innocent people,
the ones who are quite...
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posted by shenelopefan
La parte prohibida del parque

"La depresión es la que guía, la alegría es la que llega"

En la ciudad dónde yo vivía de niña, había un parque en dónde siempre pasaba las tardes con mis amigos. Éramos un grupito de niñas y niños que nos juntábamos a jugar en ronda, cantábamos canciones que no tenían sentido (casi nuestro propio idioma, de hecho) y recorríamos todo el parque jugando a las escondidillas.

Bueno, no todo el parque porque había una a la que los adultos no les gustaba que vayamos. Era un sector tan lleno de árboles que, desde afuera parecía una selva en medio de un parque...
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The room is silent, as always. Nothing can be heard, aside from the soft rasp of pencil on paper. Words take form, joining various thoughts into one whole. On the outside, nothing is different from the average writer. To find what sets me apart, we must look deeper than the surface.
Inside my mind, 图片 and ideas race about, sometimes colliding, sometimes not. This whirlwind is composed of everything I know, read, seen, heard, 或者 thought of. It is here that my greatest works begin to form.
To 显示 how thw whiirlwind works, let us have an example. During practice for spring track, I noticed...
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posted by Lord_Anubis
If 你 mates like it, comment, I'll make 更多 if anyone notices it =3

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''Oi, 你 guys! What are 你 doin'?!'' screamed a brown haired boy from the street.
''Mind your own business and go back under your momma's skirt, 或者 you'll get some too!'' replied the tallest boy on playground, probably the leader of the rest 4 boys.
5 of them were teasing one small boy, taking away from him candies and ruining his game on playground. The brown haired boy frowned with his black eyes and started walking towards them.
''You scum really have guts! 5 tall 狗 on 1 small...
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posted by dragonsmemory
The Eden Chronicles is the 幻想 series I am currently working on. As the series is in progress, I decided to add a club here, allowing you, Reader, to tell me your thoughts.
In 写作 the series, I decided to document the entire history of Eden. I called this place Eden because it is where the spirits of dead 动物 and plants are taken. No humanspirit has ever been pure enough to come here. Eden is a true paradise.
The first book, A Little Bit 更多 Than Love, takes place toward the end of Eden's history. Later in the series, I hope to explain the past. Once I get caught up, I will then...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 3: Here It Goes Again.
Roxana woke up one night to hear a loud howl outside her window, she slided herself out of 床, 床上 with her covers wrapped around her, she walked toward the window and saw a somewhat a large white 狼 outside, watching her then it turned its head to hear other 狼 howling, the white 狼 runs off to follow the howl, Roxana felt like she knew that 狼 for a long time, Roxana walked back to her 床, 床上 and lies down, but she couldn't sleep, she kept tossing and turning but she couldn't sleep, she sat up, grab her wallet and pull out a 照片 of a beautiful, pale-skinned,...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter 1: Don't Change Me.
A young and beautiful succubus named Roxana opened her green eyes as she sees the sun flooded her dark room with lights from her windows, she sat up in her twin bed, the mattress was tan and her covers were 浓情巧克力 brown color, she pulled herself out of the 床, 床上 and throws on her black tank top, then she slipped on her jeans on her long and beautiful legs, Roxana then walked in her bathroom and brushed her long red hair slowly as she stares at herself in the mirrior, she put her brush on the sink and walked outside, as she walks, she turns around as she feels like...
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We were builders. We were builders, fighters, scholars, but 更多 importantly, friends. When the Government took all our rights away, our food, money, our culture, we allied ourselves against it. But they had a machine. A machine that could sail the seas and air. It was called, The Oppresive. The Oppresive forced us underground, making us creatures of the very soil they walk on. But it is time for our revolution. We have a great machine, bigger than the Oppresive, and stronger than it. It will trample them like a boy tramples grass. No resistance at all, we are sure of it. We are ready. We have...
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posted by DarrenGruch
Ever since my family died down to be just me.... I`ve been alone since they died in a car accident. I got out fine (only with cuts and a migrane), but they died. I now live with my grandpa... but he doesn't get me..... I cut my self, dresss diffrently, and never really talk.

4 days after the funeral for my family.... I became Emo. But the 日 my Family died, something changed within me..... something good went rotten.
My Grandpa see's it, but ignores my pain and anger... only if that drunk driver that hit us was sober and never... spun out of control. Some 日 I hope his 心 gives out and he dies in jail.

Does any one feel the same?
posted by noahnstar1616
"Are okay, V?" Francine was checking me for bruises.

"I'm fine."

"We're so telling the principal." Zoey grabbed my arm.

"No, it's okay. She didn't hurt me." I rubbed my arm where Mercury dug her nails in. She didn't leave permanent marks.

"What happened?" They both waited for my response.

I told them how Mercury knew that I felt something when Cameron was visiting me in the hospital. How she knew I was trying to get him back. How I saw her eyes glowing red, like a sea witch's eyes when angry.

"You know what this means, right?" Francine and I waited for Zoey's answer. "That Mercury is the sea witch...
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