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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started 唱歌 her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I 说 taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be 首页 in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She 说 hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do 你 want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best 老友记 for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do 你 have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness 由 now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see 你 tomorrow.” She 说 hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do 你 want for your birthday 下一个 week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last 年 for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive 音乐会 tickets followed 由 hiring out the cinema on the release 日期 of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing 袍, 礼服 and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are 你 cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started 唱歌 her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I 说 taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be 首页 in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She 说 hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do 你 want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best 老友记 for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do 你 have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness 由 now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see 你 tomorrow.” She 说 hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do 你 want for your birthday 下一个 week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last 年 for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive 音乐会 tickets followed 由 hiring out the cinema on the release 日期 of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing 袍, 礼服 and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are 你 cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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Materials:
Petroleum Jelly
small microwavable bowl (discardable)
Stirrer (discardable spoon 或者 skewer)
Eyeshadow 或者 body shimmer 或者 pigment (the color 你 want your lipgloss)
Lipgloss container w/ lid
Procedure:
1.scoop some petroleum 果冻 in the small microwavable bowl (more petroleum 更多 lipgloss!)
2.Microwave for 5minutes 或者 until completely melted.
3.Take out the melted petroleum 果冻 (carefull it's hot) and scoop in some eyeshadow for color. Put eyeshadow until 你 reach your desired shade.
4.Mix the mixture well. Then carefully pour the mixture into the container.
5.put the lipgloss in the container in the freezer for 15-30 minutes.
Enjoy!!
Tip: To make flavored lipgloss mix in kool-aid to the melted petroleum instead then continue regularly.(careful WILL stain lips)
Petroleum Jelly
small microwavable bowl (discardable)
Stirrer (discardable spoon 或者 skewer)
Eyeshadow 或者 body shimmer 或者 pigment (the color 你 want your lipgloss)
Lipgloss container w/ lid
Procedure:
1.scoop some petroleum 果冻 in the small microwavable bowl (more petroleum 更多 lipgloss!)
2.Microwave for 5minutes 或者 until completely melted.
3.Take out the melted petroleum 果冻 (carefull it's hot) and scoop in some eyeshadow for color. Put eyeshadow until 你 reach your desired shade.
4.Mix the mixture well. Then carefully pour the mixture into the container.
5.put the lipgloss in the container in the freezer for 15-30 minutes.
Enjoy!!
Tip: To make flavored lipgloss mix in kool-aid to the melted petroleum instead then continue regularly.(careful WILL stain lips)
Edwards pov
"Bella family meeting " I 说 while eating my elk.
"okay i am ready are you?"
"yes "
So we so we started to run 或者 race i would say to the family meeting . When we all got there and got seated the meeting started .
Carlise Pov
"thank 你 guys for coming to the meeting , and sorry for interrupted your hunting time . But we have some important news " i said
" what is it Carlise " edward 说 very serious
"Well esmee and i have decied to leave are coven and come back in a 年 或者 so okay and 你 guys can leave if 你 want to . But I am Going to start 由 asking rose and emmett . so what is your desion ."isaid "well rose and i have decideed to go away for a little while and come back when 你 come back ,and we will not be enrolling in forks this year.." emment said
"okay alice ,jasper are 你 leaving 或者 staying" i 说 " well we are staying " alice chimed in.
"Bella family meeting " I 说 while eating my elk.
"okay i am ready are you?"
"yes "
So we so we started to run 或者 race i would say to the family meeting . When we all got there and got seated the meeting started .
Carlise Pov
"thank 你 guys for coming to the meeting , and sorry for interrupted your hunting time . But we have some important news " i said
" what is it Carlise " edward 说 very serious
"Well esmee and i have decied to leave are coven and come back in a 年 或者 so okay and 你 guys can leave if 你 want to . But I am Going to start 由 asking rose and emmett . so what is your desion ."isaid "well rose and i have decideed to go away for a little while and come back when 你 come back ,and we will not be enrolling in forks this year.." emment said
"okay alice ,jasper are 你 leaving 或者 staying" i 说 " well we are staying " alice chimed in.
嘿 ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
consider me warned i have been scorn to breach a life i envisioned for us
i will not mourn anymore. my 心 conflicting a war a rage inside i cant deny what 你 have taken from me im in a blissful state of insanity i will not wake on my own i have 迷失 all my rights to humanity i am so torn.walking away as 你 did i wasnt your equal i felt like a kid i wanted to die right there lay down my tears no longer did i care how could 你 leave did 你 not feel the pull.another of my delusions i am such a fool.why couldnt i be enough.i will always 爱情 you
i will not mourn anymore. my 心 conflicting a war a rage inside i cant deny what 你 have taken from me im in a blissful state of insanity i will not wake on my own i have 迷失 all my rights to humanity i am so torn.walking away as 你 did i wasnt your equal i felt like a kid i wanted to die right there lay down my tears no longer did i care how could 你 leave did 你 not feel the pull.another of my delusions i am such a fool.why couldnt i be enough.i will always 爱情 you