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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started 唱歌 her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I 说 taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be 首页 in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She 说 hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do 你 want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best 老友记 for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do 你 have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness 由 now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see 你 tomorrow.” She 说 hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do 你 want for your birthday 下一个 week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last 年 for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive 音乐会 tickets followed 由 hiring out the cinema on the release 日期 of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing 袍, 礼服 and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are 你 cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started 唱歌 her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I 说 taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be 首页 in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She 说 hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do 你 want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best 老友记 for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do 你 have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness 由 now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see 你 tomorrow.” She 说 hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do 你 want for your birthday 下一个 week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last 年 for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive 音乐会 tickets followed 由 hiring out the cinema on the release 日期 of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing 袍, 礼服 and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are 你 cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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part 2 the cullens. like always it was a rainy 日 in forks. bella and edward were on they way to bella's 首页 but all of a sudin bella was in need of a human momment.they stoped 由 the 晚餐 close to to were they were going after bella came out two men came in.edward could read what they were thinking.he new them some how but he had no clue who they were.all he new was he had to get bella away from them. we'll come back later wisper edward so low that only bella could here what he said.he had to leave. this is were the story begins.
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