Darkhorn's A Stalker

Chris kept cheering. Eventually, he went to a Mobian store and bought a rug, a bed, wallpaper, a refrigerator, food, a TV, and a 任天堂 64. They were all very cheap, and either way, Chris had a lot of rings with him. He carried them all back to his home, one 由 one. Eventually, he got in his 床, 床上 and fell asleep. MEANWHILE, AT THE LOOP WHERE MADJIN WAS LAYING.... A smirk spread across Madjin's face He opened his eyes. They were glowing red. His hands started glowing. He blinked and his eyes stopped glowing. He slowly stood back up and chuckled. He slowly walked away. He saw a circular peice...

Chris held the gun up and shot. It hit a buzzbomber. Chris felt a tingling feeling in his stomach and chuckled. "MUAHAHAHA." He ran around, firing everywhere, hitting badniks, knocking down hills, and making loops collapse. "BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!" He shouted, running along. "This is SO COOL!" he shouted. About an 小时 had passed, and Green 爬坡道, 小山 Zone had been torn apart and filled with smoke and ruins and now looked like piles of blocks and dirt and scrap metal. He ran away, but then ran into a blue hedgehog. "Did 你 do this?!" It said. "Ummmm..... 你 DIDN'T SEE ME AND I WASN'T HERE!" Chris...

{this fanfic has pretty much no plot they just go save a bunnie my god!}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-18 BEFORE 阅读 THIS

so this was heaven a land of clouds a land of hope and dreams "wat the hell" 说 misery just waking up "this is heaven" asks rane also waking up "i gess so" i 说 and i stood up the clouds were quite fluffy and jumpy then misery took a handful of clouds and puts them in her mouth so i slap her hand and say "wat the heck u dont just go around eating stuff" i say "mmmmm tastes like 饼干 yummy" she says with her mouth full
"come on lets go we have a mission guy" rane says getting...

First off...This is just an opinion. >:/ Don't bash me just because your character is a Gary-Stu 或者 Mary-Sue. That is YOUR fault for designing your character that way.

Now, there are many Gary-Stus and Mary-Sues EVERYWHERE. If 你 don't know the whole issue, here's some 问题 I will answer;

What is a Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu?
A Mary-Sue/Gary-Stu is a character that has many abilities, has no flaws, AND everybody loves them. The real name for these types of characters are a godmodder. A Mary-Sue is a female godmodder, and a Gary-Stu is a male.

Why are they bad?
They are unoriginal, overdone, and...

Demons,Soldiers,Helicopters,Jets,Tanks,A burning City,A Lightning Demon,And Typhoon's Group.

That's just GRRREEEAATTT isn't it?

Typhoon,Slahsing Demons left from right,Running across the Hellish City,Then he jumped and kicked down another Demon and slashed it's head off.

Haze,Being the Swords man he is,Cut down every last Demon he saw,He chopped off the legs of the one in front of him,and Stabbed his face.

Nocturn,With his Shotgun,Walked down the street,And continued to shoot down every Demon,He put a shot gun up to a Demon's face and shot it clean off.

Mother,Being the most Ferocious,Ripping apart...

As the 狐狸 noisily sloshed through the muck and rain,he thought of where he was going.The Science Centre,which was almost abandoned,except for the mad scientist he worked for.It had been closed down not even a 月 ago,still in good shape,which is why Dr. 雀, 芬奇 inhabits it.Dr. 雀, 芬奇 was claimed to be the most insane man in the world, but the 狐狸 wouldn't believe it.Never.
He knew he was close.He could already see the very 最佳, 返回页首 of the centre,a dark,metallic dome.The young 狐狸 knew his mentor was working on a secret project,because even he wasn't allowed to see it.He had only caught glimpses...

Freedom fighters Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the 狼 set off to find Robotnik at Knothole and disable his bots which will ensure safety to all animals.
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Jaxik the Panda and Lellian the 狼 were walking through their village. "It's clean." Jaxik said. He was searching for Robotnik's badniks. "You sure?" Lellian asked. "Pff... No." Jaxik said. "When can we EVER be sure?" Lellian worried. She took a 刀 out. "SHOW YOURSELVES!" she yelled. "The whole village is empty, it seems." Jaxik said. "Robuttnik is definitely up to something." Lellian turned her head back to Jaxik. "Uh, WHAT did you...

Character Chart
Character's full name: Ningizzida the Hedgehog.
Reason 或者 meaning of name: Named after the Assirian god of snakes and serpents, unknown why.
Character's nickname: Giz.
Reason for nickname: One of his alleys started calling him that for awhile, but it never
really stuck. Ningizzida prefers his whole name.
Birth date: Unknown.

Physical appearance
Age: Ancient.
How old does he/she appear: 18-22.
Weight: Around 85 lbs.
Height: 3"8
Body build: Slender, sleek, and built for speed and agility over power. Has well develouped
calf muscles.
Shape of face: n/a
Eye color: Blood red, with...

Bullet found himself dozzing off while he worked on the shack for Maiyumi. 'Why am i even doing this for?' He thought. 'i barely even like her! i guess snice Bloosom will being staying here too i might aas well do the best i can for her at least.' Izzy climbed up to the roof where Bullet was. "hey how's it hanging?" she asked. "okay iguess. i had to work like this when i was eight for my first gruadian and i hated him 更多 then i hate Maiyumi." Bullet repeiled. "Why do 你 hate her anyways?" Izzy asked. Bullet put down the hammer and took the nails out of his mouth. "Well i kinda like her but...

Midnight was snoozing her life away in her 哥特式 style castle. It was decorated with tons of things that she liked, and they definetly were not gothic! She quietly snored like a angel, and her petite hands tapped on her paper. Her butler, John Vezun Cuando, looked at her. He had her 茶 with sugar all prepared for her, and he thought his efforts were for naught. The perfect 茶 time, ruined beyond imagination. John was a male 貂, 水貂 who had a silvery white pelt and wore a butler's attire with a red carnation in his upper pocket. The serene but friendly butler spoke in a formidable British accent,...

Most stories are always based around the hero 或者 the villain,but what of the unlikely,ladies and gentlemen,I give 你 bronko the cat.

-Bronko:ZzzZzzZzz...
-Bronko's mother:WAKE UP BITCH!
-Bronko:Mom...
-Bronko's mother:You slept it,you are late for school.
-Bronko:...ugh.
-Bronko's mother:*Slaps him*GET DRESSED NOW!

After a getting dressed,bronko headed off to crystal city high school.he is in 10th grade.he is the unlikely target to most school bullies because hes a 粉丝 of the hero of crystal city:MTL.

-Bronko:*Jumps off the bus*oy..
-Marty:Morning bronko.
-Bronko:Morning marty.

This is marty the edchinda,a...

“… There might have been a time when 你 actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want 你 to become something that 你 don’t want to be.” – Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do 你 remember the first time 你 ever drew your 粉丝 character? When 你 created him/her, 你 had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that 粉丝 characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories...

(It ended up cutting off the post, so I'm just going post it in the form of a article.)


One cold night during the winter, Your FC is traveling across what seems to be a endless road on foot. Your FC feels like He/She has been traveling for days and as a result they feel tired, cold, hungry, and absolutely LOST. When he/she was beginning to give up hope, a strange silhouette shrouded 由 fog forms in the distance.


He/She ran toward the silhouette and encountered a giant iron gate with a small town behind it. Happy that He/She found a shelter to stay at for the night, Your FC proceeds to try to...