Problem is it doesn't look like a 比萨, 比萨饼 but I guess it's better than your first attempt. Although why not 你 focus on the regular types of 比萨, 比萨饼 to get the hang of it? Then why 你 have have that down then venture out.
My 5 年 old nephew has made better pizzas than that.
Just look at that shit, everything is piled on too high, the cheese is a garnish and not a base, the crust looks store bought, and there is no sauce. It's not even a pizza, this looks like the kind of 沙锅, 砂锅 bullshit my white 屁股 sister would bring to thanksgiving.
