随意问题

Do 你 Think She is Good Now?

My Oc Dani was used to be called a Mary Sure for being most perfect, most beautiful, most talented, had a super tragic past, has like E cups x3 always wore slutty clothes x3 but recently I changed her up quite a bit. Now she has C cups, she has her flaws, she isn't the most beautiful but she is still attractive c: to some people x3 not all guys fall for her, she's 更多 of a tomboy! and when she was a Mary Sue she was also a 'tomboy' not really xD didn't seem like it x3 Do 你 think she's better now? x3 Mary Sue Dani is on the left, normal Dani is on the right? x3

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

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BlondLionEzel said:

Yes.

posted 一年多以前

egyptprincess7 said:

Kinda. I don't understand though why having E cups though is a mary sue but okay. What flaws though because if 你 have the standard cutesy type flaws well then 你 didn't do much to her. 你 do need to change the super tragic past part. She still has mary-sue qualities.

posted 一年多以前

Yeah I do like E-Cup breasts

BlondLionEzel posted 一年多以前

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Doesn't have one now what? Explain.

egyptprincess7 posted 一年多以前

Oh she doesn't have a tragic past anymore

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

sieluvzsoul said:

Sure

posted 一年多以前

x-Yumi-x3 said:

posted 一年多以前

misscindyspice said:

Well, she is much better now (not that she was bad before), but I honestly find being a stereotypical "tomboy" character is almost as bad as being a stereotypical girly-girl character, as the whole "Tomboy bad-ass chick who thinks that all girly crap is horrible and needs to die", is pretty overused. If 你 don't make the tomboyishness too overblown, I feel that Dani could be a very good character. :)

posted 一年多以前