Well, there is certainly room for improvement. Here are some things that 你 should look into.
- Try practicing around with detail and anatomy. Regardless of style, there are always ground rules for both. One thing 你 can do is look at photographs 或者 even other artwork and really study all the different shapes and forms that are used in artwork and how they flow and balance out one another. Tutorials are also a very nice tool that 你 can use to improve. There is a wonderful man on youtobe with the 用户名 markcrilley who does drawing tutorials. He does mostly anime, considering that he's a 日本漫画 artist, but his tutorials are very helpful and easy to understand and a wonderful place to start.
- Lighting. Pay very close attention to color gradient and how the light 来源 affects the hues in the things we see. The best way to study this is in real life. One thing that helps is to stand in dim lighting, study how 你 and the things around 你 look, and gradually 移动 into and study the same things in different light intensities. Pay close attention to the light 来源 and how light hits certain shapes and the form it gives it.
Right now, since your drawing style is fairly simple and a little hard to critique well, I suggest that 你 focus on these things to improve on first. youtobe and deviantART are great places to start at and look for resources to help 你 improve. Don't get discouraged. Remember, practice is the key to everything!
Well... actually balance is.. and numbers... but practice is important, too...
@trainofdoom MAKE IT 8 DAMN YOU! D:< 8!! 8!!! PLEASE, 8!!! DDX @thisperson1212 It really did take some time to write... XD I was also ironically drawing at the time... so it took longer than it should have.... XD
No. But 你 could go for a little 更多 detail. It needs shading and color variations. If 你 haven't already I would advise 你 to take an art course in school. It helps. Practice: 你 will get better.
I would say yes, due to the fact that your picture seems to be off, the hair could use some texture, and I'm not too sure what that black thing in the background is.
你 do choose nice 颜色 though, I will admit that.
Criticism: A guilty habit of mine~.
posted 一年多以前
its ok the black thing in the backround is spiral hill, you'd know what it is if 你 watch nightmare before 圣诞节
u draw beautifully & im honest u need 更多 detail &c im honest (because my mom is an art teacher at my school) my mom reviewed it & 说 u need 更多 detail for example trees she is making an account called ArtTeacher122
posted 一年多以前
can 你 give me the link to the account i might need some help XD