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What do 你 think of this poem?

The ocean

He gives me a smile,
he allows me to fly.
I’m flying like a bird,
free and placid.
He gives me a strength,
i give him my mind.
My 心 is full of his thoughts,
full of his brightness,
full of his silence.
But still,he’s like the ocean,
so deep and mysterious,
你 can not find his soul
unless it finds you.
And i’m so 《勇敢传说》 and such a coward
the same time,
i need him 更多 and more,
and i’m scared,
oh i’m scared for he found my soul.
Don’t blind your eyes not to see,
don’t trap your mind not to feel.
Oh, i wish to touch his hair gently,
oh, i wish to calm in his embrace.
I want him to see it in my eyes,
to feel that my 爱情
will never betray him,
and i want him to be what he is already,
himself.

 What do 你 think of this poem?
 irena83 posted 一年多以前
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CB4evaGiggles said:
haha, wow, i think its really good!
=D
great job!
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Thank you. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
torriebee said:
wow thats soo good~ 你 could have a cool slide 显示 while 阅读 this haha
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哈哈 Thanks sweetie. ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
Lovetreehill said:
Great one ! I 爱情 it !
You're a good writer Irena, never give up ;)
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Thank 你 honey. I won't! :*
irena83 posted 一年多以前
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I hope that :)
Lovetreehill posted 一年多以前
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♥ ♥ ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I ♥ It, ...wow....I cant describe my feelings as im reading...Its very good...

-Spi
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Thank 你 so much. ♥
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RavenRox2 said:
that's amazing!! I 爱情 it!! <333
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~ Thank you. ~
irena83 posted 一年多以前
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your welcome!! :]]
RavenRox2 posted 一年多以前
sugarsweet076 said:
i 爱情 it!!! great job!!!
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:) Thanks. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
clanbillr said:
I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!!
Thank 你 for the poem!!!
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 I'm not much of a poet but I like it!! It makes me think how very calm, but with a small ripple and then ruthless the ocean can be!! Thank 你 for the poem!!!
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Aw thank you. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
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Oh yes, the ocean can be calm and ruthless the same time,mysterious.
irena83 posted 一年多以前
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Sure. I will. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
MrOrange16 said:
Its so beautiful! *sniff*
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Thank you. ;)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
heyitssmarsx3 said:
that's an excellent poem, good job!!
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Thank you. ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
gossiprincess said:
waw this is an awsum poem!=D
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jem_ said:
i enjoyed 阅读 it, really raw and lovely :)
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thank you. ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
juicyjossy9 said:
Scared to be scarred... I've been there. Like many of us humans. 你 touched me right on the spot. Don't worry, it does not make me sad. To the contrary, it reminds me what makes my 心 beat, so blindly true and so human to be close to my emotions. Craving to 爱情 and be loved 由 a loved one is ALL THERE IS. Thanks for posting this. 你 make my day. If 你 don't mind, it will now be part of my "Treasures" book. jj9
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Thank 你 so much. ♥ Of course i don't mind,i'm delighted. ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
LunaShay said:
Its....beautiful :') if my 格言 was big enough,i would put this on there!
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哈哈 thanks. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
Pikafan32 said:
Are 你 gonna name all of them 'What do 你 think of this poem?'

No... just kidding

Anyways the real review

It was really good. One of your better works, but not the best. Have 你 ever tried a murder poem, 或者 a happy one. I'm fine with the style 你 have now, but from experience I would have to say that it's easier to write your own genre if 你 try others.

- Re Re
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哈哈 Yes you're right,it is easier to write your own genre. Well who knows, i might try something new. 哈哈
irena83 posted 一年多以前
Mallory101 said:
爱情 it! ♥
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thank you. :)
irena83 posted 一年多以前
gaby124 said:
your poem is so good i can´t find the words to describe it! If ur dream is to be a writer then 你 have a very good chance of being such a wonderful and amazing writer!!! keep on following ur dreams!! : )
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aw thank 你 so much and thanks for the support. ♥
irena83 posted 一年多以前
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