马达加斯加的企鹅 Article: can 你 feel the 爱情 tonight

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posted by anna447

s:I can see whats happening
k:what?
s:and it an't hard to see
r:what?
s:they'll fall in 爱情 and heres the bottem line our team is down to three
k and r:oh
s:the sweet coress of twilight theres mige eveywere and with all this romintice admisphire desisters in the air
(seane change to forist seance)
bager sisters:can 你 feel the 爱情 tonight the peace the evening brings the world for once in perfet harmeny with all its liveing things
p:so many things to tell her but how to make her see the trouth about my past?inpossable she'd turn away from me
m:he's holding back he's hiding but what I can't deside why won't he be the privete I know he is the privete I see inside
bs:can 你 feel the 爱情 tonight the peace the evening brings the world for once in perfet harmeny with all its liveing things...can 你 feel the 爱情 tonight 你 needn't look too far stealing though the nights oncertentes 爱情 is were they are(privete and marlene hug)
s:*hings privete's first medel*and if he falls in 爱情 tonight it can be asomed
k:his sodier days with us are history
s,k and r:in short privete is doomed
(they cry)

MsKowalski99 likes this

yokaisummoner XD Nice try. Although, there were alots of mispellings, I'm sure reader's get the idea you're trying to write. I suggest you write first on Microsoft Word & use the Spell Checker next time. Also, I think the pairing, Marlene X Private, are slightly odd since Private is still pretty young (just by how naive & innocent he acts compared to Marlene, in the series), but that's my opinion. (^_^) Keep Trying, You'll Get Better.

SandMCLASSIFIED Nice....I like it...Only 1 thng....I'm a SKILENE-ER.....sry.....I stilll lke the idea 4 the stry thpugh so....godd job!