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Okay., so I was asked to review this story but I don't have much to say.

Except the beginning..
Wait at the beginning, I was hating it already.

Kate cheats on Humphrey for Garth, AGAIN..

This happens in so many stories, sense I'm here to be honest, I'll come out and say it.

I FUCKIN HATE ALL OF THEM!!

Every time Kate cheats, my remaining respect of these stories just keeps growing thinner.

She's my 最喜爱的 character.. So why dose she have to fuckin cheat!?
She's not fuckin Kristen Stewert, 或者 Paris Hilton!!
I actually RESPECT Kate, unlike those two.

This is why I retired from this genre in the first...

Tommy Lee drank a glass of water and set it on the 表 in the cafeteria.
Lily heard footsteps of giants bom! bom! bom! bom! bom! Stinky: Ohhh nooo. Humphrey blocked the mouth and the Stinky Claudette, Kate blocked the mouth Runt Tommy Lee and Daria stopped up the mouths of their four children. The tiranosaures-Rex looked at the cafeteria. Tommy Lee whispered tans do 移动 the T-Rex looks away ok. Tony is on the outside it is on the head of the T-Rex and booomm !!!!!!!!!!!! the head of the T-Rex has exploded. Tommy Lee: Thank 你 !!! Tony: There in nothing.
3 分钟 later ... They surrounded...

CHAPTER 1
The Beginning Of Pain

It was a silent dark night. As a mother 狼 and her young pups travel down a path. "Mom! I'm tried! Are we there yet?" Asked a little black and grey/white 狼 pup."No Shadow Honey, But we are getting close." Muffled The Mother Wolf. She was carrying the other pup. "Mommy! I'm sleepy" 说 the 小狗 who was a She-pup. "Now Jessica,you know we can't stop yet. Not till we get to your aunts pack." 说 the mother. "But mom! Can we please take a break! my paws are starting to hurt!" Whined Shadow. The mother 狼 sighed then sat Jessica down. "Ok Sweetheart. We...

Hi guys, There is my new series “Runt's story”, View my first story before if 你 don't know what's happen. It's the 下一个 of “Young Love” 由 Kitsune32, is located after the story and before the weeding of the pups. It's about the life with Magril and Runt and the other pups. It look like an small story. The story is written in a POV style just for your pleasure


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"Aww, come on, Runt! We were only teasing," 说 Claudette. "I don't care!" Runt hated always being teased 由 his siblings about being only younger 由 two minutes. Hated it. This time he was done with it.

So, in response to this time, he ran away up into the forest until he got tired, then climbed up the closest tree. He waited there, expecting his brother and sister to follow. Typical. They didn't. "Great. Now i'm lost." He 说 as he saw a bunch of caribou run through the forest, going the opposite direction from where he came, smothering his scent trail. Not that he even had much of a...