Kellan

Hey....did 你 expect that 或者 what? Haha....I did good!! :) Well here is the end of Jacob's POV then Bella's! Enjoy. -Kayla

Chapter 12. (Jacob)

I looked at Edward. He started backing towards the forest. "What's wrong." I asked him whispering. "I was coming to ask 你 because Alice saw her vision blank for the rest of her life. I was wondering if she picked 你 或者 not. And right now she smells like wet dog." I stared at him. "Of course she smells like wet dog. It's because I hugged her." I whispered. "I heard that!" She screamed. Edward's jaw dropped. 'She heard us?' I thought to him. He nodded....

ok so at the time i was 写作 this i had everything planed and prefect to read.now the majority of this is in a note book but i have some really good stuff already typed . so im posting what i have typed and i want your opinion on whats good and bad. thx so much for ur input
oh and 由 the way im 14 so if this is really crappy im sorry and there are a lot of typos like a lot first draft crap 哈哈 well ok so please just read and enjoy

the first 8 chapters are from bellas point of view then right to renesmee she finishes the book/story ok what this story is about is when the Cullen's all move...