This is coninuing from the last article, i try and keep u all happy 由 doing a little bit off chapter one, this is the third part of chapter one out of 6.
thx for the support, i just started an 小时 以前 and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x
I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, 你 could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria 说 harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet 你 later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an 小时 and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another 床, 床上 beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, 你 have. Why on earth did 你 write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I 爱情 你 and I want 你 to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want 你 to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did 你 do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The 下一个 日 we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become 更多 softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and 吸血鬼 using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is 吸血鬼 can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.
Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy 或者 should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did 你 suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is 由 scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until 你 are free from it, then I have to lick 你 scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.
to be continued.......
thx for the support, i just started an 小时 以前 and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x
I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, 你 could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria 说 harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet 你 later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an 小时 and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another 床, 床上 beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, 你 have. Why on earth did 你 write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I 爱情 你 and I want 你 to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want 你 to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did 你 do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The 下一个 日 we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become 更多 softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and 吸血鬼 using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is 吸血鬼 can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.
Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy 或者 should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did 你 suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is 由 scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until 你 are free from it, then I have to lick 你 scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.
to be continued.......
Edward's Pov.
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? 或者 later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I wake up, finding myself asleep, in ropes, mouth covered. Everyone else is sleeping,
and I can't break myself out of it. Then, Jasper and the man, come in. I pretend to sleep.
"Should we do it now? 或者 later?"
"The killing of Bella? We will wait until she goes through what these guys experienced,
then, we will do them first. Then her."
No. No. NO!!!!! I must get my self out of this! I must find Bella and fast!!
What am I going to do! I can't get myself out!
Rosalie: Uh...
Jasper: Looks like sumbody's up! Can we do it now master? Please!?
Just so I know what to do with the others?
Master: Alright, but just her.
Rosalie: AH Mrjekjsnubgu!!!
NO!!! NOT ROSALIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back 下一个 to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he 说 gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back 下一个 to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he 说 gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
ALICE AND JASPER:
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS 心 《冰雪奇缘》 IN TIME 由 A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS 说 TO BELLA 由 EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
爱情 SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN 由 RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
FOR THE FIRST TIME IN ALMOST A DECADE I FELT HOPE
JASPERS 心 《冰雪奇缘》 IN TIME 由 A SINGLE BITE.
FLYING LIKE A HUMMING BIRDS WINGS (THIS LINE WAS 说 TO BELLA 由 EDWARD -ECLIPSE-)
HOPE, HAPPINESS, KINDNESS, UNDERSTANDING, AND...LOVE
ALL AT ONCE COMING FROM SUCH A SMALL PERSON.
EMOTIONS HE BEARLY RECONIZED.
EMOTIONS HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE.
EMOTIONS THAT WOULD SOON BE HIS WHOLE LIFE.
EMOTINS THAT BELONGED TO ALICE HIS ONE AND ONLY REASON TO LIVE.
爱情 SO STRONG, THEY WOULD KILL. KILL ONCE, TWICE... UNTIL THEY GOT TO THERE OTHER HALF
ALICE ISNT JUST JASPERS LOVE
SHE IS HIS KEY, HIS KEY TO HAPPINESS
THERE SOULS ATACHED FOREVER
THERE SOULS INTERWINED TOGHETHER
THERE SOULS BELONG TO EACH OTHER
SOULMATES FOR THE REST OF INTERNITY
BROUGHT TO HAPPINESS TOGHETHER AND WHEN IT COMES TIME THEY WILL BE TAKEN OUT TOGHETHER
THANX FOR READING
WRITTEN 由 RACHEL KETTLEWELL
TWILIGHT GIRL
For those of 你 who don't know me, 或者 have never read my fanfictions, I'm renesmeblack. I write a story from Renesmee, Jacob, Mine, and occasionally Emmett's POV. Now, I have a ton of bad ideas, and some of the things 你 read from me are crash tests. Thankfully, many of my readers enjoy my fanfictions. The dummy is saved!
My stories are for girls who can't stop 阅读 the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I 爱情 Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. 你 wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, 你 read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few 粉丝 I have, thanks for the support and I'll see 你 in the 阅读 section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
My stories are for girls who can't stop 阅读 the books. It's for girls who'd pester Stephenie Meyer to write a sequel, if they had a chance! I 爱情 Jacob, so that's another reason why girls read my, frankly, ameteur (hope I spelled that right!) writing. 你 wanna know the best part?
Okay, here goes nothing.
IT NEVER ENDS!!!
There. I feel better now. Yup, 你 read correctly. It'll never end until I grow out of the Twilight Stage (like that'll happen.).
For the very few 粉丝 I have, thanks for the support and I'll see 你 in the 阅读 section!
-Thanks!
renesmeblack xoxo
Here's New Moon Confessions. like I 说 before, I don't any of these, I just 发布 them for people's enjoyments.
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice 偷了 my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my 最喜爱的 vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my 狗 after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I 秒 Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please 评论 and rate!
#1
I can hear Edward in my head too!
#2
If Edward dies, I headed off to Volterra.
#3
Alice 偷了 my Porsche.
#4
Jane has my 最喜爱的 vampire power.
#5
I have Edward's soul. *Evil Laugh*
#6
Bella's Epiphany = Stating the obvious.
#7
Edward didn't go to South America. He was visiting me.
#8
I named all of my 狗 after Jacob and his friends.
#9
I skipped all of the chapters without Edward in them.
#10
I 秒 Emmett's vote.
#11
I cut myself in front of Jasper for fun.
#12
If Bella won't marry Edward, I will.
please 评论 and rate!