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I wrote some songs! please tell me what 你 think! there are 4!

True Friends
Boys may come and go.
But best 老友记 always show,
they 爱情 you!
Boys may leave your side.
But best 老友记 are forever.

Chorus:
True friends.
Are there till the end.
True friends.
Always make 你 smile.
Tell me you'll be my true friend.
Forever.
Tell me you'll always be there for me.

Best 老友记 there.
When 你 need a shoulder to cry on.
They aren't pretend.
I know i'll always have one.

(chorus)

I have a true friend.
And she has me.
I know she'll be there.
When im on my knees,
and crying.
Everyone knows,
that shes the best.
I'll never forget.
that shes my bff.

(instrumental)

(chorus)


Burn
What?
What am i supposed to do?
When you're the one that did it?
I know we used to be best friends.
All of us.
But what happened between us?
A couple stupid sentences.
And this is what happens.

Chorus:
But your gonna be the one to fight.
Cause im not staying here all night.
Discussing our friendship.
And how its over.
Does this even matter to you?
Cause im not the one who 说 who cares.
I am the one who tried to blow out.
All the fires that 你 just burned with.
Cause i am not the one who 说 whatever.
Oh, 你 think your so clever?
Huh?

Well, lets not fight forever.
I think its done.
But thats exactly what 你 说 before.
But now your changing around all my words.
I cant believe 你 even had the nerve to do that.
Well, i guess 你 did.

(chorus)

WHY?
Why do i try so hard to forgive you?
And why?
Why do i always get stabbed in the back 由 my best friends?
This is exactly how it ends!

(chorusx2)

Three words(duet)
Girl: I can see it in your eyes.
Something's wrong.
There's no disguise.
Is there something on your mind?
Let it out.
你 dont have to tell me twice.
你 were up all last night.
What were 你 thinking about?
Tell me. Trust me.

Both: Chorus
Cause those three words.
Are not enough.
To 显示 our love.
I 爱情 you. I miss you. I want you. I need you.

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 mrscullen43299 posted 一年多以前
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Sutelc22 said:
great job.i appreciate songwriting because i write songs myself.
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posted 一年多以前 
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thanks for the support.
mrscullen43299 posted 一年多以前
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I 爱情 IT
Heritage112 posted 一年多以前
Kibahina96 said:
The song is really sweet but sounds 更多 like a poem.
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posted 一年多以前 
pikakel19 said:
I think the songs are great i just wish i could hear it

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posted 一年多以前 
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