hello people

Remember when i asked for help with lyrics? well i came up with a song and i want your opinion on it please!
Ready? here it is:

My bloods pouring to the ground
And 你 dont even care.
I look at 你 pleading
And 你 just walk away.
你 ripped out my 心 and soul
burned them to ash.
Now 你 say your sorry?
你 say 你 want me back?

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
你 were the best thing in my life
Then 你 turned and walked away
你 说 你 loved me,
And still 你 walked away

你 made me hate my life
Made me hate myself.
Youve driven me to all the things
I swore i wouldnt touch.
Im not some punching bag
For 你 to pound.
Im my own person
Not just someone in the crowd.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
你 were the best thing in my life
Then 你 turned and walked away
你 说 你 loved me,
And still 你 walked away

Im not afraid 或者 你 anymore.
Im gonna make my stand
Stick up for myself.
Im gonna make my stand
你 cant hurt me anymore.

Get the hell away from me
Youve hurt me
Get out of my life
Youve scarred me
你 were the best thing in my life
Then 你 turned and walked away
你 说 你 loved me,
And still 你 walked away

你 说 你 loved me,
And still 你 walked away