随意问题

I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do 你 Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every 日你 just see the sights,

Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

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随意答案

BlondLionEzel said:

Nice :)

posted 一年多以前

THank 你 :)

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

sieluvzsoul said:

Very good

posted 一年多以前

thanks! :)

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

pokemonfan909 said:

Its nice. Why do 你 think it sucks?

posted 一年多以前

Because I never wrote a song before and I know I suck at it

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

你 don't....

pokemonfan909 posted 一年多以前

misscrazel said:

It's great, if 你 want any tips on songwriting message me. ^-^

posted 一年多以前

Alright will do ^^

16falloutboy posted 一年多以前

True-Finn-Fan said:

i can dig it... 你 know what's so weird? i wrote a song earlier today for a completely different reason and was just thinking "somebodies gonna post something and 显示 me up" XD

coincidences.

posted 一年多以前