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What do 你 think about my story? is there anything I should change? Here's the link: link
 misscrazel posted 一年多以前
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dqwert said:
wonderful!!!!!!!!
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Thanks!
misscrazel posted 一年多以前
EgoMouse said:
One thing I hate about 阅读 fiction, is when there's too many mystical creatures and not knowing much about it. Then whenever the name comes up, it flies pass the mind because of the lack of connection.
Anyhow, its only a prologue. I would probably provide some reference sheets to go along with it so there's a sense of connection. Unless 你 want viewers to imagine how the characters look. I'm not that type though. I would completely pass 阅读 it.
Otherwise, I like the writing.
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There are two other parts in the prologue to explain all that and I'll try to add 更多 in that part too.
misscrazel posted 一年多以前
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