So I wrote this song for my girlfriend and I'll give it to her on our 2 months anniversary.. so please tell me what 你 think of it

Our Love

你 have a smile that takes me to another world
It leaves me speechless, without saying a word
你 have flawless eyes, they're like a gift from Lord

I can't live without you
Cuz you're my heartbeat
If 你 wanna set 下一个 to me
There's a wide open seat
If 你 wanna take it
Just come and make it
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our 爱情 at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably 你 don't know that 你 mean
The whole world to me

and if I had a 星, 星级 for everytime 你 made me smile
I would be holding the night sky in my hand
We'll just forget our tears, and walk that mile

I can't sing without
Cuz you're my melody
I can't survive without you
Cuz you're my remedy
Don't leave me alone
Cuz it won't be
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our 爱情 at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably 你 don't know that 你 mean
The whole world to me

(Bridge):
When 你 need me I'll be there
Just to 显示 how much I care
When 你 cry I'll wipe your tear
When 你 scream I'll fight your fears

(Chorus):
This is our 爱情 at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably 你 don't know that 你 mean
The whole world to me