my little buttercup!!!

that was just to get your attention, i want to know if 你 would read this, i am not done yet, this is just a snippet of it, but please tell me if 你 would read the whole thing.

Daniel was walking 首页 from school one day. He looked over and saw a new girl he had never seen before. She seemed lonely. He walked over to her. “Hi.” He said. The girl looked up and saw him. “Hi.” She said. “I’m Daniel.” He says as he sits down 下一个 to her. “I’m Miya.” She says.
“Are 你 new here?” he asks. “Yeah.” Says Miya, smiling. Daniel smiles. “I have to get home.” Says Miya as she stands up. “Oh, well let me walk 你 home.” He says. “You don’t have to do that.” She says to him. “But I want to.” Says Daniel. “No.” says Miya. She runs away. Daniel follows her. “Miya, Miya wait!” he yelled. She stopped in the middle of a crosswalk. “What do 你 want?” she asks. Daniel catches up. “Please let me take 你 home.” He says. “No!” says Miya. Then, they hear the screeching of tires. Daniel looks over and sees a car speeding towards them. Miya screams. Daniel knew he had to do something. He pushed Miya out of the way. Then, the car rams into Daniel. “Daniel!” screams Miya. People who saw what happened rushed over. But it was Miya who got to his side first. “I’m so sorry.” She says as she puts him in her arms. “Somebody call an ambulance!” yells Miya. One of the people takes out their cell phone and dial 911. Miya cries with Daniel in her arms. Then, she realizes he is not breathing. She sets him down on the pavement. “I’m sorry, Daniel.” She says. She turns around and walks away. That was the end of Daniel.