回答这一问题

随意 问题

what do 你 think about this?!!!?

 MJangellover posted 一年多以前
next question »

随意 答案

ScottishChic said:
Your poem was amazing, I wish I could write 诗歌 like that!
Good job!!!
select as best answer
posted 一年多以前 
*
thanks Much!!!,god bless 你 !!!!
MJangellover posted 一年多以前
*
You're welcome! :D
ScottishChic posted 一年多以前
MrOrange16 said:
Well, your rhyming scheme seems to lack consistency.
As well as the rythm on each line; too many syllables here, then too little there. It doesn't flow well.
But the words and thought process of the poem was fine.
Overall, though, I thought it was adequate. Could be better, could be worse. I apologize if I'm being too critical.
select as best answer
posted 一年多以前 
next question »