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this is my poem called hope uncharted...hope u like! *it's emo/goth...kinda'*

hope, for me, is a place uncharted
and extreamly over grown.
the world, it has chilled me,
《冰雪奇缘》 my very soul.

my little hope bird, it is gone
forbidden and forwarned.
all my faith and trust,
it flew away in the storm.

the fire, it can not warm me,
i do not feel the cold,
the sun doesn't shine,
my 心 is numb.

and this is why,
my hope bird has died.
because the world has chilled me,
my 心 can not ache,
nor can it brake.

the lie of a life
i'm suppose to live,
but, no one can give
an explination.
so i ask, Why?

why do we need
to belong in a group?
why can't i be me?

so this is why
hope for me is a place uncharted,
and my hope bird is gone.
i hope 你 understand...
 this is my poem called hope uncharted...hope u like! *it's emo/goth...kinda'*
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thanks 2 anyone who reads it!!!
zutaradragon posted 一年多以前
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heaps good :)
Cantwait4book5 posted 一年多以前
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
NICE!
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 NICE!
posted 一年多以前 
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thanks!!!
zutaradragon posted 一年多以前
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OMFG that is the best and most beautiful poe ive ever read! and i 爱情 poems!
JBluv4ever3 posted 一年多以前
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it almost made me cry:'(
JBluv4ever3 posted 一年多以前
LuvWeezy7 said:
I'd say that this poem can reach out to all kinds of people. I don't think that it is emo/goth because I am neither and I connected with this poem very well.

I like how it is written out and i 爱情 the little hope bird. :)
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i completly agree with u i can connect with that as well!:')
JBluv4ever3 posted 一年多以前
K5-HOWL said:
awesome!
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 awesome!
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Shadow5772 said:
Beautiful. :')
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sashlow said:
its great
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rosie23 said:
爱情 it!
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