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Can I get an opinion on this?
It's the opening to a 粉丝 fiction I'm rewriting and want to know what people think. This is a different approach then what I was originally going for so I'm conflicted xD Is it lame, flat, boring, does it make 你 want to keep reading? I need to know.
Here's the link: link
Here's the link: link
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