Anyone interested in helping a budding author?

Hello!! I'm 写作 a book on wattpad and I wanted to know if any of 你 would like to read and critique/leave 评论 on it. I 上传 a chapter a 日 and there are currently 10. If you're looking for a good read about a girl in the afterlife, please check it out!! :D
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Thanks!!
note: please please dont plagiarize because you'll be removed from wattpad for copyright infringement hehe :3 爱情 你 all mwah :*