Grassclan The Evening Patrol, Part 1

orkneymatrix posted on Feb 23, 2010 at 05:32PM
Pebblepaw, Sorrelpaw and Lilypaw were going on the evening patrol with Cloudtail and Leafpetal. Pebblepaw spotted a vole and couldn't resist chasing it. Despite Rainthistle warning her apprentice to be careful during a patrol, he pounced, but made too much noise so the vole ran. He chased after it, but eventually lost it. He turned to face the patrol again, but they had gone. He called for them "Sorrelpaw? Lilypaw!" he yelled but there was no answer.
He found his way back to the path, but there was still no trace of the rest of the patrol. He tried to sniff them out, but he couldn't smell a GrassClan scent. It smelled like another Clan. He was confused and scared, until he decided to try and find his way back to camp. But which way? Deciding, one way was as good as another, he decided which way he would try. But before he even took a step, there was a rustle in the branches.
"Wh-who's there?" Pebblepaw wanted to be brave. But he also wanted to run. A twig snapped and Pebblepaw tried to back away slowly. "Who are you?" he was terrified, but now the only give away was his fear scent.
There was a final snarl before he legged it. He didn't even notice where he was.
This was ShadowClan territory.
last edited on Feb 24, 2010 at 05:08PM

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一年多以前 orkneymatrix said…
comment if u want a part 2
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一年多以前 Lolidragon said…
crying
it was so good it brought me to tears...
一年多以前 orkneymatrix said…
thx
一年多以前 CHIHUAHUA said…
big smile
It so good!
一年多以前 Spottedshadow03 said…
big smile
its so cool!
一年多以前 MsIloveJustin said…
I want to do patrol
一年多以前 orkneymatrix said…
You'll get a chance when you're made an apprentice, Firekit, be patient!
一年多以前 ScottishChic said…
Awesome!!!
I'm sorry Pebblepaw!!!!!
一年多以前 StichxAngel4eva said…
laugh
lol!
一年多以前 YugiMuto said…
big smile
very good!
一年多以前 Mistyflower said…
big smile
woah, cool!
一年多以前 faizul1971 said…
crying
awwwww!
一年多以前 funkyrach01 said…
big smile
That was really good :-)
一年多以前 h2o-clewis said…
smile
realy good!and it is awsome :)
一年多以前 l3371 said…
big smile
Cute story...^^