No
The computer lurched
Stopping in its tracks
Freezing
Making 你 mad
Frustrated
Hitting the keyboard
The computer
Gleams
In all your rage
Choosing
To restart up
But still not letting 你 win
It becomes slow
Making 你 mad
Making 你 angry
Angering you
Making 你 hit it
Making 你 cry
Tears of frustration
The computer lurched
Stopping in it’s tracks
Losing all your information
展示 your life to the world
Letting the world know
Who 你 are
The computer lurched
Embarrassing you
Hurting you
The computer lurched
Freezing up
And denying you
access
The computer lurched
Stopping in its tracks
Freezing
Making 你 mad
Frustrated
Hitting the keyboard
The computer
Gleams
In all your rage
Choosing
To restart up
But still not letting 你 win
It becomes slow
Making 你 mad
Making 你 angry
Angering you
Making 你 hit it
Making 你 cry
Tears of frustration
The computer lurched
Stopping in it’s tracks
Losing all your information
展示 your life to the world
Letting the world know
Who 你 are
The computer lurched
Embarrassing you
Hurting you
The computer lurched
Freezing up
And denying you
access
迷失
ALONE
INSUCURE
BLOOD DRIPPING DOWN MY FACE
BRUISES STINGING MY TRANSLUCENT BODY
DEATH CALLING ME
爱情 DETACHING FROM ME
MY 心 BEING RIPPED FROM MY BODY
MY MUCSLES HURTING
A SICK FEELING IN MY STOMACH
IN THE FETAL POSISTION
TEARS ESCAPING MY EYES
MUSCLES TENSE
BARE FOOTED
SCABS BREAKING
ROOTS STABBING MY BODY
GLASS BROKEN
A PICTURE ON THE FLOOR
REMINDING ME OF MEMORYS
OF A FOREST
OF OUR OLD LIFE
WHEN 你 LOVED ME
GRABBING A 刀
DRAWING BLOOD
FROM MY FACE
MY LIFE FLASHING BEFORE ME
THE PAIN OF EVERY SAD MOMENT
MADE ME MAKE MY DISSISION
I DREW THE 刀 TO MY NECK
SLIT MY FLOAT
AND WATCHED THE BLOOD POOL AROUND ME
LIFE DRAWING OUT OF MY EYES
MY SOUL
RISING FROM MY BODY
GOD EMBRACING ME
THE LOOK IN YOUR EYES
WHEN 你 FOUND ME
I WAS 迷失
ALONE
INSUCURE
BLOOD DRIPPING DOWN MY FACE
BRUISES STINGING MY TRANSLUCENT BODY
DEATH CALLING ME
爱情 DETACHING FROM ME
MY 心 BEING RIPPED FROM MY BODY
MY MUCSLES HURTING
A SICK FEELING IN MY STOMACH
IN THE FETAL POSISTION
TEARS ESCAPING MY EYES
MUSCLES TENSE
BARE FOOTED
SCABS BREAKING
ROOTS STABBING MY BODY
GLASS BROKEN
A PICTURE ON THE FLOOR
REMINDING ME OF MEMORYS
OF A FOREST
OF OUR OLD LIFE
WHEN 你 LOVED ME
GRABBING A 刀
DRAWING BLOOD
FROM MY FACE
MY LIFE FLASHING BEFORE ME
THE PAIN OF EVERY SAD MOMENT
MADE ME MAKE MY DISSISION
I DREW THE 刀 TO MY NECK
SLIT MY FLOAT
AND WATCHED THE BLOOD POOL AROUND ME
LIFE DRAWING OUT OF MY EYES
MY SOUL
RISING FROM MY BODY
GOD EMBRACING ME
THE LOOK IN YOUR EYES
WHEN 你 FOUND ME
I WAS 迷失
FALLING
1000 POUNDS CRUSHING ME
HOLDING ME DOWN
SUFFICATING ME
EMPTYNESS
DROWNING ME
FEAR
COVERING ME
LONLYNESS
HURTING ME
HOW CAN I SURVEVE
LIFE LEAVING MY BODY
ENVY
SWALLOWING ME
WHY
WHY DID 你 DO IT
HOW COULD 你
LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME
LOOK
LOOK AT YOUR DAMAGE
PLEASE
PLEASE BABY
HOW COULD 你 DO THIS TO ME
AFTER EVERYTHING I DID FOR 你
HOW COULD 你 CHEAT
HOW COULD 你
BABY WHY
WHY DID 你 LEAVE ME?
BABY WHY
你 KILLED ME
你 STUFFED MY BODY INTO THE COFFIN
IT'S YOUR FAULT
你 HAVE TO LIVE WITH MY PAIN
MY SORROW
WHY DID 你 LEAVE ME?
1000 POUNDS CRUSHING ME
HOLDING ME DOWN
SUFFICATING ME
EMPTYNESS
DROWNING ME
FEAR
COVERING ME
LONLYNESS
HURTING ME
HOW CAN I SURVEVE
LIFE LEAVING MY BODY
ENVY
SWALLOWING ME
WHY
WHY DID 你 DO IT
HOW COULD 你
LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO ME
LOOK
LOOK AT YOUR DAMAGE
PLEASE
PLEASE BABY
HOW COULD 你 DO THIS TO ME
AFTER EVERYTHING I DID FOR 你
HOW COULD 你 CHEAT
HOW COULD 你
BABY WHY
WHY DID 你 LEAVE ME?
BABY WHY
你 KILLED ME
你 STUFFED MY BODY INTO THE COFFIN
IT'S YOUR FAULT
你 HAVE TO LIVE WITH MY PAIN
MY SORROW
WHY DID 你 LEAVE ME?
its still about me exept for last 2
lines
srry
bout the crazinessssssssssssssssssss
its just me
agsin feedback makes me happy
my feelings
my thoughts
my mind
is me
the fake smile
pasted on my face
is not what I feel
my fake joy
my fake assurance
I feel dead inside
cuts on my arm
ooze
but they don't
let out my
feelings
I have fake excuses
Today the fake
becomes real
Today I become me
Today i hide nothing
Today I die
Today I end my life
lines
srry
bout the crazinessssssssssssssssssss
its just me
agsin feedback makes me happy
my feelings
my thoughts
my mind
is me
the fake smile
pasted on my face
is not what I feel
my fake joy
my fake assurance
I feel dead inside
cuts on my arm
ooze
but they don't
let out my
feelings
I have fake excuses
Today the fake
becomes real
Today I become me
Today i hide nothing
Today I die
Today I end my life
like all my 写作 feedback
apretiated
this is from long 以前 since then ive stopped this type of 诗歌 but im goin to strt with
it
again
ok hope
u
enjoy
it
ashes to ashes
falling
covering
filling gaps
玫瑰 to 玫瑰
breaking hearts
bringing 爱情
tearing 你 appart
life to death
the time your full
the time your right
your golden time
爱情 to hatred
pulling 你
apart
killing 你
forcing 你
to be
mean
forcing 你
to be
like
me
apretiated
this is from long 以前 since then ive stopped this type of 诗歌 but im goin to strt with
it
again
ok hope
u
enjoy
it
ashes to ashes
falling
covering
filling gaps
玫瑰 to 玫瑰
breaking hearts
bringing 爱情
tearing 你 appart
life to death
the time your full
the time your right
your golden time
爱情 to hatred
pulling 你
apart
killing 你
forcing 你
to be
mean
forcing 你
to be
like
me
心 break
你 know
i 爱情 你
你 know
why cant 你 see it
why cant 你 see that i want 你
why can't 你 see your ripping me apart
why
my 心 is torn i 爱情 你
but 你 don't see
i sitting here hoping 你 read it
i 爱情 你
everytime i read your response i smile
everytime i see your pic my 心 jumps
your perfect
your my baby
but 你 dont see it
i 爱情 你
but i dont want to ruin our friendship
why cant 你 tell me 你 爱情 me to
cuzz baby im waiting
and baby im impatient
你 found your lover
i dont want to hurt 你
i don't want to make 你 choose
but ive been waiting
and im torn
im waiting
and here ill wait till 你 爱情 me back
cuz your the one i want
oceans seperate us
but I 爱情 你 still
Why cant 你 爱情 me back
你 know
i 爱情 你
你 know
why cant 你 see it
why cant 你 see that i want 你
why can't 你 see your ripping me apart
why
my 心 is torn i 爱情 你
but 你 don't see
i sitting here hoping 你 read it
i 爱情 你
everytime i read your response i smile
everytime i see your pic my 心 jumps
your perfect
your my baby
but 你 dont see it
i 爱情 你
but i dont want to ruin our friendship
why cant 你 tell me 你 爱情 me to
cuzz baby im waiting
and baby im impatient
你 found your lover
i dont want to hurt 你
i don't want to make 你 choose
but ive been waiting
and im torn
im waiting
and here ill wait till 你 爱情 me back
cuz your the one i want
oceans seperate us
but I 爱情 你 still
Why cant 你 爱情 me back