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The Moment I Saw 你
The Moment I Saw 你
New fic. Modern AU. Pretty self-explanatory from the beginning.
密码: arthur, guinevere, fanfiction
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The Moment I Saw 你
New fic. Modern AU. Pretty self-explanatory from the beginning.
密码: arthur, guinevere, fanfiction
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And chapter 2 is up.
Ch1: I don't remember last time I giggled so much while reading .. It was so sweet and (almost) unrealistic, but it's them so it felt right. The transition from "he's crazy" to "yes", just talking, it was perfect. I must admit, in some RL I cannot imagine this happening, because I am more like Gwen's last sentence "he stabs me in my sleep"..
Ch2: Arthur, always so sweet and charming. I adore them when they get jelous. Adorable! And even though they got married in an instant, I love how they are taking time with everything else. Somehow, makes it more special.
This is definitely a special story, Kim. I really like how you made it a mix of a "regular" story and Gwen's POV. very interesting!
You'll find out more about Gwen's job in chapter four.
Husband: What's the neighbors' dog's name? Tito?
Me: Cricket.
Husband: Oh.
Generally, it's a Latino first name or nickname. The Michael, Tito, Jermaine, Jackie, Marlon, and Michael mentioned in the story are referring to the Jackson 5, in case anyone doesn't know. Of course, they aren't Latino, but one of them was called Tito (his real name is Tariano).
I've never heard of Jackson 5. But then of course, my music range is very limited to punk and rock.
Surely you've heard of Michael Jackson, though, right? It was him and 4 of his brothers when he was a kid. *goes off to YouTube to find videos with which to spam Joppa*
Jelous Arthur, my favorite. But who wouldn't be in his spot. They're both really adorable with the jelousy. Gwaine is charming as always. It is sk easy to imagine his and Gwen's relationship.
I always enjoy reading about Lancelot getting turned down! Arthur was really cute with his offer. I cannot wait to see Elyan's reaction.
Ch10: Oh, the inner struggle. Loved it! It was so real and so devastating. And my heart breaks for Arthur. As bad it is for her, it is for him as well, maybe even more, because he thinks she doesn't love him.
Btw, those cupcakes were brilliant!
Ch11: Their talk was so sad.. I loved how jelous she got over Sophia. And I am really happy she was wrong about Elyan, he's an awesome brother. They should have had that talk long time ago, but it's never too late. And now she's finally admitted her feelings to herself, it was perfect!
This final chapter was very good, Uther's acceptance to the marriage priceless.
And this was lovely. I loved the idea of wedding reception with everyone there. And their little special private moments. Thank you for Uther finally seeing some sense.
And this was a wonderful story, Kim. You made something quite unrealistic into the most beautiful and well, realistic story. *not very good with words late at night but I adored the story*
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