嘿 everyone this is my first 文章 so if its bad plz don't hate and just tell me how I can improve. I'm open to any ideas so please leave a comment.depending on your 评论 will determine if I keep 写作 and sorry about spelling errors if there is any because I am 写作 this all on my iPod and the auto correct is being anoint. well here we go.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I 说 THINK about it". " Okay thank 你 now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the 巢穴, den, 书房 to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's 巢穴, den, 书房 she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did 你 ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He 说 he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for 食物 he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw 分裂, 拆分 log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh 嘿 Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, 嘿 could I talk to 你 for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his 老友记 and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this 问题 and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please 评论 if there is anything I can do to improve I 爱情 hearing from people so please comment.
The air was fresh and crisp in Jasper park and this is were we find Lilly and her mate, Garth having a conversation...
"why not Garth"?"Because Lilly I don't think it's a good idea". "Cmon Garth don't be like that at least think about would ya"? "Fine I'll think about it and I 说 THINK about it". " Okay thank 你 now u should probaly go get some food".
As Garth left the 巢穴, den, 书房 to go look for food, Lilly ran over to Kate and Humphrey's. As she stepped into Kate's 巢穴, den, 书房 she realized that something was different.
"Hey Kate were is Humphrey at"?
"He's out with his pals messin around, did 你 ask him"?
" Ask who what"? Lilly replied.
"Garth did u ask Garth"?
"Oh! yeah I did".
" And what did he say"?
" He 说 he'll think about it, which kinda made me sad".
" it's ok I'll ask Humphrey tonight cheer up Lilly it's a big thing just give Garth a little time to think about it".
"yeah you're right thanks sis".
***GARTH***
While garth was looking for 食物 he saw something out of the corner of his eye flying towards him.
"Lower the boom!"
" what the hell"?
Garth was both amazed and terrified when he saw 分裂, 拆分 log with four wolfs soar over his head. Still dazed Garth made out the four figures that were in a ball on the floor.
"Humphrey just the guy I was looking for "
"Oh 嘿 Barf whatcha up to"?
"nothin mutch just lookin for food, 嘿 could I talk to 你 for a sec"?
"sure go ahead".
"I meant alone."
"o ok, later guys".
Humphrey waved to his 老友记 and followed Garth.
"sooo whatcha wanna talk about"?
"well Lilly asked me this 问题 and I need advice.
"well what did she ask"?
" She wants PUPPIES".
So what'd u think please 评论 if there is anything I can do to improve I 爱情 hearing from people so please comment.
hello this is insider and we are here to talk about your mate cheating on 你 we have asked two peaple if they think this. and they said:
alphakat21: hell no! i trust kate with all my 心 shes shown me nothing but 爱情 since the 日 we met
awwww that is so sweet lets see what the other interview collected
metalwolf116: no with a capital NO! i share complete trust and loyalty kate is my life.
and our last interveiw
katealphawolf: i would never cheat on jon he is the 爱情 of my life!
well it looks like we have three loyal mates. but if 你 think your mate is cheating then contact me for an interveiw.
we will se 你 下一个 time on insider
alphakat21: hell no! i trust kate with all my 心 shes shown me nothing but 爱情 since the 日 we met
awwww that is so sweet lets see what the other interview collected
metalwolf116: no with a capital NO! i share complete trust and loyalty kate is my life.
and our last interveiw
katealphawolf: i would never cheat on jon he is the 爱情 of my life!
well it looks like we have three loyal mates. but if 你 think your mate is cheating then contact me for an interveiw.
we will se 你 下一个 time on insider