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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. 由 no means am I forcing 你 to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless 你 truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before 你 start posting. It can be as little as a bio, 或者 as big as an entire 文章 series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no 更多 than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he 或者 she is in, can pull out another trick out of his 或者 her hat.
4. If 你 absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his 或者 her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely 随意 and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when 你 have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the 下一个 日 you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own 或者 is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the 最近的 outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, 或者 claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If 你 must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, 或者 so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if 你 do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot 或者 stabbed in the heart, then pop up 分钟 later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull 或者 flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to 或者 dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to 或者 dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created 由 you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing 或者 potential character is a Mary Sue, 或者 if 你 suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, 你 can take link. If 你 want, 你 can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case 你 were curious, which 你 probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all 你 want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, 由 no means do 你 have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
"Or what, sissy? 你 gonna stop me and the gang from messin' up the kid's face here?" The three other boys smirked as they knew they had the number advantage. But the girl also gave a tiny smirk. "Yeah, I think I will."

The pack laughed.

"You-you've got to be kidding! Hahaha!" Billy managed to get out as he laughed. "You and what army? Ahahahaha!" But she continued to give them a smirk. "Well..."

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As if on cue, a blur rushed out from behind a bush, its target Billy. Before he could even register what the blur was, the boy slammed his elbow into Billy's face, sending him to the dirt. The...
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If 你 missed out..and I know the last one was "part 4" but I meant "part 3"

"Ahem.." A voice broke the vampire from his feeding and he turned with a annoyed look. "Damian, would 你 please stop harassing my sister..?"
~~~

I felt my breath hitch, and a huge lump of razors stuck in my throat, and I fought forcefully to fight back tears. "D..ante..?"
"Blade.." He narrowed his gaze and gave a me soft smile.
"Yo..di..d.." I couldn't push it out. My brother made his way between me and Damian and gave a me a hug.

Was he this strong.. .before.. he di..left?

"It's a long story, Kiddo, but I'm back now,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Eachen Story ( ee-kin ) (( i changed his name shhhh))

Villian Name: Vile

Age: 19

Appearance: dirty blonde hair and green eyes.

Relations: Lucas Story is his younger brother.

Powers/Skills: he has viles that he keeps with him that give him strength and power. Depending on his intake of the substance the 更多 power he gains. Combat skills.

Personality: he is very self centered and only benefits himself, though he secretley has a 心 he tries to take over that feeling 由 greed and power.

Villian suit: he wears army paint on his cheeks and has a black hooded jacket, with black pants and combat...
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posted by SilverWings13
The sun had set and the lights replaced its rays. Yellow, red, blue, green lit up the night, causing the twinkling stars the young man was so acquainted with to sink away. Along with them went the average civilians of the city, and out came the nocturnal creatures of the night.
Declan ducked into an alley as a police car sped past, sirens wailing. He sighed as it passed and disappeared around the corner, the siren fading away. He laid his head back against the brick 墙 and closed his tired eyes. The click of approaching heels made him snap back to attention and instinctively turned invisible....
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Tyler looked up, from the sleeping Becca in his arms, to a blonde boy with peircing blue eyes. A quick glance around the room reviled that everyone-Aryess, Willow, Lyss, and Vaxley -was asleep. "Shit.." Ty muttered gazing back at the the monster, who's stare made him shiver.

"Hey, Ter-" the firecaster started.
"I need Becca." Terror stated sternly. Defince struck Ty.
"Sorry, b-"
"Now." Blue eyes were narrowed and his lips were pursed in a small frown.
"Do 你 ever smile, Terror?"
The remark left the blonde unphased; a small curve pulled at his lips but quickly vanished as he took a step forward...
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posted by Blitz359
Yeah, I wrote part of this at 2 AM. Sue me. :P

"Hit the deck!"

The 4 teens leap behind a fallen 树 as the 墙 of the factory blew apart to smithereens. Rubble flies all over, but as the dust clears, the group dash into the newly created entrance and head for the nearest flight of stairs.

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Peering through the leaves of the bush, Richi could see a part of the factory's large amount of security patrolling around the perimeter. Watchtowers with spotlights circled around the darkness surrounding the factory, and the beeps of sentries echoed into the blonde's ears.

"What, is this...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
"I'll be fine 你 guys can go now." Ashley told the girls, as they walked into the kitchen.
"Actually Canary told us to keep an eye on 你 till your brother comes home." Aryess said, taking a 座位 at the counter. Ashley open the refrigerator and took out a bowl of ice cream.
"You guys want any?" Ashley asked, waving a spoon at them both with a smirk on her face.
"Sure."
Ashley returned to the refrigerator and took out two 更多 bowls of ice cream. She give both girls a spoon each and handed them the ice cream when she hear someone call Akash's name.
Melody walked in the 厨房 with a shoulder bag...
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posted by Blitz359
 Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
Meh. Found on internet. Thought I should share.
So yeah, I'm not dead. Been really busy.

The phone rang for what seemed like the millionth time. Its ringtone sang out in the darkness of the room, and the phone clattered against the dusty wooden 桌上, 桌面 as it vibrated.
Hey, it's Richi. The phone sounded out as the call went to voicemail. I'm not available right now, but leave a message and I'll get back to 你 ASAP.

"Rich!" the voice yelled as the message was recorded. "I know 你 can hear me! Where are you?! Why haven't 你 called back?! Please, the three of us are worried. Come back already. We're sorry."

Message recorded. 你 have 30...
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posted by SilverWings13
There was too much water. Surrounding her, soaking her. In her mouth, in her nose. Don't breath, don't breath. She tried not to follow the instinct to 吞, 燕子 a breath, but somehow the liquid forced its way inside. Too much water filling her lungs.
Too much red. The water was painted in it. There was a certain glow coming from some artificial source, but also a swirl of a seperate contamination. Too tired, too much blood escaping from the 斯莱什 in her leg. Aryess had failed the mission of keeping the 船, 小船 safe. The bomb had exploded, blowing a hole in the hull. The water heater had barely protected...
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posted by SilverWings13
Billionaires, business men, women dressed in lovely dresses. Champagne glasses, sparkling lights, and of course, the treasures of the evening. The precious jewelry and glittering gems. They were the most expensive objects in the room, even 更多 than the yacht the auction was taking place on. And for that reason, the blonde and her partner had been assigned tonight's security detail. It also helped that their teammate's father owned the ship and was hosting the event.
Her stormy grey eyes rested on the glistening blue brooch. An aquamarine rose ready to become the prize of the lucky bidder tonight....
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posted by Gunfire
 Natasha
Natasha
Name: Natasha
Age: 17
Gender: famale
Clotes: she always wereas milaty gear, 或者 a unifom, unless she needs to sneak somwere in.
Apareance: long hiar, color of it can difre frome were she is ansingd and wat her mison is, narmal body.
Personalaty: paronoid, does not trust easy, hates pepol using weald to opres others, always helps her comrades.
Skilles: sniper, exeled marxman, tactisan, field commander, knowes all kinds of martial ards, abel to use al kinds of wapons, extrodanry soldier.
wapons: an AK 74, a Dragonov, pistols, grenades, knives.

background:
(( i am lazy so i just put it this way))
- she...
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"Shit, shit shit!" he thought as he threw the batter into the pan and looked at the clock. "Only an hour!?" He hissed, shoving the heart-shaped raw cake into the oven. Tyler turned to the 厨房 and stared in horror. Flour powered every cranny of the room, egg shells cluttered the floor, the sugar bag was tumped over, so was the cooking oil but it was spilling on the floor. The 火, 消防 caster groaned. He still had to dethorn the dazzling red roses, clean, 淋浴 and get dressed!


In a hurry he sped over to the 玫瑰 and stared at them, a million thorns decorated each of the twelve flowers. How...
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His eye's narrowed into her's. A lively 火, 消防 was sparked once again, and it settled right in her eyes lapping around.

It only ignited when rage pulsed through her veins, and Mrs.Blade has a lot rage.

The two were at a stand still, who would make the 下一个 move, he spoke with poison dripping off his words,"Ahh, and yet you're right once again, let me correct myself for all I do in your eyes are wrong."

Her lips curved into a frown even more,"How dare you! Assume I think I'm right all the time! I do not! You're the one who knows everything! Mr.I-Can't-Even-Tell-My-Wife-My-Real-Name!"

Ice met fire,"You...
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The 标题 says it all.
And no, I'm not leaving. That's not to say that I'm not pissed off at all 你 people. And I'm warning 你 now, 你 might hate this. 你 might get offended, 你 might hate me, but I don't give a flying Grayson about that. 你 guys have taught me just how stupid online drama is, and just how important it is NOT to let yourself get affected 由 it. So flame me all 你 want. I just need to rant.
Seriously, when did all this shit start happening? First our lovely Esmerelda decides to "leave forever" (anyone wanna count the number of times he's 说 that? Good. I didn't think...
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posted by BloodyMascara_
So,



*Shrugs* Cheer, cry, be happy, sad, angry, dunno.
Too much drama, feelings feelings feelings, this is all gonna be fluff, so if 你 need the point of this article, skip to the bottom.

爱情 你 guys, really do, but this drama is toooooo much.

So, me and my OC's are going on a... vacation.

你 can still post on my wall, IM, 收件箱 me, ect.

Just takin' a break from the club.

And if I'm a depressed 情绪硬核 faggot to you, not your fault. Stuff has happened, I should be fine in a bit.

Anyways,

Fly on~
-Raven, gone.
 Depends.
Depends.
This is a conversation that me and Fin had a few months 以前 on meebo. We didn’t post it until now because of spoilers, but now we can! Enjoy our randomness! PS Kir is Fin's creator aka robinluv14, Rae is Aisling's creator aka rachele_X, and the rest 你 know. Well, Nick is Tesla. 你 might not know that.

*Kir has entered*
*Rae has entered*
Fin: 你 smell funny.
Nikita: I do not smell funny.
Fin: Smell like polish sausages.
Nikita: That is racism
Ash: lol!
Kenzie: BICHES
.Ash: We're FUCKED
Nick: No we're not fucked that's the problem I WANT SEX, DAMMIT
Ash: 你 ALWAYS want sex
Nick: Whatever *pulls off...
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posted by Mclovin_69
He store at the screen in front of him deep in thought as he looked at the young couple walk through the eighty first level, they were getting close, too close for his comfort. “ I thought 你 说 你 separated them…” he muttered sitting in his chair, the familiar man behind him looked down “ she escaped im sorry I failed 你 master “ he muttered, “ sorry? Im done with that word! 你 have failed me too many times! “ he shouted making the man behind him flinch slightly. He had a low growl and rasp in his tone “ I guess its time I do this myself since 你 are so incapable….”...
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posted by AugmentBoyYJ
 Felicity
Felicity
Name: Felicity Hunter

Hero Name: Kindle

Age: 15

Appearance: she has long straight blackish brown hair with deep maroon brownish eyes. Hair is usually up in a ponytail 或者 bun.

Powers/Skills: she has the ability to work with any sort of metal, she often can create many inventions 或者 gadgets and start gears 或者 open metal 或者 electronic doors with the point of her finger, she can crush metal 由 touch 或者 from afar etc. She has the ability to fly a helicopter to get others to places they need to be. She can tap into radio communication.

Relations: she was one of Willows best 老友记 growing up until she...
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Name: Damian Hellsing

Nickname: D

Alias: None

Occupation: Vampire Hunter

Race: Vampire

Age: 160 years old, but, in what he calls, "human years" he's 18.

Personality: He's looks at humans as nothing lesser than him. He will not take a human's life unless forced to, 或者 if they're just being stubborn. *COUGH COUGH* What?
He's kinda a tease, but is 更多 often serious. He does have a soft spot for some people but usually does not 显示 it, of course.

Appearance: He has lengthy black hair with burning red eyes. His skin, unlike what most stereotypes believe, is not super pale, it's a light color with a hint...
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posted by Blitz359
They left as the sun set in the horizon. Careful not to wake the others, Richi, Aryess, Nic, and Alek quietly left the hotel to finish the long adventure. Traveling across half of the city, none of them spoke a word the whole way through. Finally reaching the Itexicon building, Nic led them into the building from the rooftop. "You'd think they'd have better security..." muttered Richi, obviously suspicious of how easy it was to enter. After finding the stairs down, the 4 carefully climbed down the steps, floor 由 floor, until they stopped at the 10th floor, where the stairs were barricaded....
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