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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. 由 no means am I forcing 你 to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless 你 truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before 你 start posting. It can be as little as a bio, 或者 as big as an entire 文章 series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no 更多 than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he 或者 she is in, can pull out another trick out of his 或者 her hat.
4. If 你 absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his 或者 her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely 随意 and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when 你 have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the 下一个 日 you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own 或者 is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the 最近的 outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, 或者 claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If 你 must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, 或者 so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if 你 do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot 或者 stabbed in the heart, then pop up 分钟 later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull 或者 flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to 或者 dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to 或者 dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created 由 you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing 或者 potential character is a Mary Sue, 或者 if 你 suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, 你 can take link. If 你 want, 你 can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case 你 were curious, which 你 probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all 你 want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, 由 no means do 你 have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by CoaxochYJ
I AM LAZY! SO WHAT!? I JUST GOT CRP CERTIFIED! CUT ME SOME FLIPPIN SLACK!

Mel screamed from her room, Fang knocked on the door.
"Mel?" He asked.
"WHAT IS IT!?" She screamed. Fang opened the door and walked in. He raised an eyebrow.
"Its...... a pancake...." He 说 as he took it off her face. Mel stared at it. She had no idea why she screamed.
"A-a pancake?" She stuttered.
"Wow. Either your running a severe fever, 或者 this thing is still warm...." He shivered and droppped it back onto her bed. She stared at it. She did a lot of staring these days.
"How the hell did a pancake get into my face?" She...
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posted by Obscurity98
 what she looks like
what she looks like
Name: Harley Mei Kent McKenzie

Alias:none

Age: 19, will no longer age physically (like superboy)

Status: Ally

Species: Demoness, and still earth's creation

Powers now: Can control Shadows, can open gates to Hell, Still has the element control. Flight.(due to wings/black). Immortal. Can look into other's souls. Can take the life of another my touching their heart. Voice sounds like a siren (the mythical creatures)
Can teleport. Knows all languages. Stronger than b4. same skills as b4.

Appearance: Can alter it if she pleases. But mostly black 或者 red eyes. Black hair like always but can be either long...
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posted by -BelovedRobin
What is there to say? Other then the fact I'm leaving, for reason all too obvious. This is club ain't nothin' but drama that I don't need 或者 want. I would say 更多 but what's the point? Robin_Love and The_Writer will only read what they want to read, so why should I give them my words?

This club was cool for the most part: meet chill as fuck people, crack a few jokes and read pretty damn good stories. Although I manage to keep my sanity because of these positive traits, I can't look over the negative attributes anymore.

I will still be on 潮流粉丝俱乐部 but I am cutting ties with this club. Therefore,...
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posted by InfinityYJ
This is my new one-shot, 评论 appreciated.
I'm on a writer's block with Last Hero... it'll be up soon... i think... just... read this instead.


To wake up confused, was not surprising. I was often woken up confused, but usually made assessment of the situation very quickly-- captured 由 Joker, being held for ransom, in the infirmary because a villain (namely Chelsea) had shot me, 或者 broken a limb, 或者 ruptured something and made me internally bleed. But this, this was very strange. I was in a room full of mirrors, literally, made of mirrors. There were five mirrors surrounding me, no visible...
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posted by Red_HoodYJ
Red 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 was on patrol with Batgirl. It was unusual, yes, but they worked surprisingly well together. As they were going through an alley, this is what Aeronwen heard:
“Hey I just met you~ And this is crazy! But here’s my number, so call me maybe~” Batgirl started 唱歌 under her breath. Aeronwen froze.
“For the 爱情 of-!” She exclaimed, turning on the red head.
“Barbara, I will kill you. Don’t tempt me” Red 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 growled, pointing a finger at her companion. They continued down the alley. Red 兜帽, 罩, 发动机罩 saw a shadow pass over and brought out her knife. Batgirl brought out a bat-a-rang...
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Daily Episode

日 Fifty:



Static Shock Episode Three: "The Breed"
Link: link

Summary: Derek Barnett, one of the most 流行的 jocks at school, asks Virgil for help for tutoring. After one of their sessions, he begins to head home, when it is revealed that he is a Bang Baby, and turns into a mass of ionic energy. He is picked up off the streets after accidentally blowing up things and running, terrified and confused, from citizens and the police.
posted by Robin_Love
Something to....IDK. Enjoy it....please



Footsteps sounded behind her. Not a surprise. They always did. Things always happened to her. She pulled the gun from it's 皮套 and cocked it. She was ready for the attack. The turmoil inside.
Do 你 know what it's like
When you're scared to see yourself
Do 你 know what it's like
When 你 wish 你 were someone else
Who didn't need your help to get by
Do 你 know what it's like
To wanna surrender

She looked around, waiting. Flashes of 图片 passed through her mind. Her sister, her family, people she had seen on the street. People better than her in every...
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Name: Delilah Oceaniana Warner

Alias: Nymph

Age: 17

Human Height: 5'7
Siren height/length: 7'6

Appearance: blue hair, green eyes, purple and blue tail, fair skin

Status:she's not a good friend of the team..if they have something thats useful to her, she'll pair with them , if not she's against them. Kinda like 蝙蝠侠 and Catwoman

Abilities/Powers: Has the siren song, that lures men and any other being to her. Breathes underwater. Beautiful voice. can jump to great heights out of water. Speaks to marine animals. Can 移动 the water she's touching. Swims at speeds at alarming rate. Fangs.
Magic spells...
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Previously on Red Revenge...


"All units, murder suspect on fifth and third proceeding north on foot. Pursuing. Require backup. Suspect is heavily armed and protected. Female, mid-twenties. White hair, black clothes, sword and possible body armor." the radio crackled. 

"She cut them in three pieces and set 火, 消防 to their car." Revenge replied, and swung off.

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"I assume 你 did your homework?" Revenge asked.

"Yes." Rose replied, untying her snow-white hair from its ponytail. She was dressed simply. White tank top, skinny jeans, white eyepatch. Her hair hung loosely behind her. 

"As far...
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Artemis panicked as she hung up the phone. If 你 Luke found her like this he'd be mad...She helped her unconscious mother out of the closet to her bed. She made her way to the 厨房 where, where they kept the first-aid kit. She began rushing to clean up the small, but numerous cuts. Several bruises were exposed on her 下一个 and midriff, from being chocked and kicked at.
Someone knocked on the door. Artemis looked up. "crap..." She muttered to herself. And before she could respond the door opened and Luke walked in.
"Arty. 你 ha-" Luke stopped, looking at her. Noticing all her injuries....
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posted by InfinityYJ
“Rachel?”
“No.”
“Linda?”
“No.”
“Judy? Joyce? Louise?”
“No. No. No.”
Fin squinted. “Wait.. 你 don’t have a middle name! Goddamn it!”
Aisling laughed at her stupidity, and after a moment Fin joined in. The two were sitting on an extra cot in the area above the shop, where Aisling had been living the past few months. They had caught up on everything a few hours back, and were now talking randomly at each other.
Just like old times... The thought flashed through Fin’s mind, making her smile waver a little, but she dismissed it. I will fix this. It’s not over yet.
“How...
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posted by NekoTheif
Bonnie frowned into her cereal angry with life it's self. "Whats the matter?" Matthew asked as he bit into his 烤面包, 吐司 "Momma's gonna have a baby they got back from the doctor yesterday 说 I was gonna have a little brother" Bonnie sighed "I don't see the problem" Matthew shrugged "Your a boy I wouldn't expect 你 to" she rolled her eyes.

"umm what's that suppose to mean?" he blinked confused at her 酸, 酸奶 mood "I don't want a little brother they have me they don't need another kid" she snapped "I sense worry in your voice" Matthew answered plainly "My first parents had a baby 3 months before...
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posted by Robin_Love
Made this for fun and I don't care about time lines so just enjoy. :)



His hand moved back and forth the paper with ease. The colored pencil in his hand lightly touched the paper. His ears twitched and he sighed. He looked out the corner of his eye at the shadow looming over him. Spiked hair, messy, on the smaller side. He looked back to his paper deciding it was now 或者 never. He took hold of his notebook and smacked the person in the face with it. A familiar screech sound.
“What the heck was that for?!” Wally asked, holding his bleeding nose.
Aroan looked at his drawing.
“You got blood on...
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posted by Obscurity98
Harley growled as she walked through the Zeta. Silver looked up at her, "Hey Har. Everything, okay?” Harley only scowled at her, “Does it look like everything is okay? Does it!?” Silver stared at her, unsure in whether she should answer 或者 not.
Harley walked past crumpling a paper in her hands. And an unlucky Burke waved as she pasted the couch, “Hey...” Harley cut him off with a death glare. Burke stopped speaking. Silver watched her friend walk to Skylar’s room. Harley created a large thorn and then stuck the paper onto the door like a tack. Silver and Burke flinched as Harley...
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posted by BladeYJ
THIS GOES FOR TYLER AND SILVERWINGS!! Please 评论 if it sucks 或者 not!

He went out for awhile.. it was getting late and he needed to get back to the cave to see her.
Tyler walked down he dark streets, looking at the glistening pavement.
Rain started falling from the sky like little bullets of water.
He heard a russle and looked down a nearby alley. He saw a couple talking. He focused, trying to lsiten to the murmurs.
Her voice sounded oddly familiar. He only made out parts of what she said.
"No.. I..boyfriend.."
His voice chimed in.
"I.. first.. please?"
Tyler looked up, and noticed the...
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posted by EndgameYJ
((I was to lazy to switch accounts))
Here. I made a Fin/Bruce bonding fic one-shot thing, so.... >.<
Just read and tell me what 你 think.
I DON’T KNOW WHAT WAS WRONG WITH ME, I JUST KINDA SCREWED THE 标题 UP.


Tears flooded down her eyes, crystal blue and wide in shock. She looked down at her chest and felt the world slow to a near stop as a 金牌 flash entered her back and came out as a bullet. It trailed red and that soon became the only color Fin could see-- red. The red of her own blood seeping down the the front of her dress. The red that stained the snow below her feet, that coated...
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posted by SilverWings13
The clang of forks and knives was the only sound to fill the silence. The four of them sat together, eating a normal dinner. Like a family.
The hot-head, blind telepath, winged girl, and energy manipulator. All under the age of 18. The most normal family 你 could think of.
None of them pretended the fifth place was supposed to be empty. Their knife-wielder, ex-thief and ex-conn. Youngest. Smartest. The first to grow out of the squad. Of the Double Helex.
Each teenager glanced at the empty 座位 multiple times. But neither had the insensibility to say anything, to call each other out. Not until...
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Static Shock Test




Prologue:


"Sharon! For the last time, I am not eating yo' egg smoothies!"

"Son, eat your breakfast."

"Breakfast?! 你 call this breakfast?" the teen asked, indicating his plate. "I call it a smoothie! And Sharon should've added strawberries! And a glass."

"You know that is exactly how momma used to cook them!"

"Strange. I don't remember having to eat her's with a spoon!"

"Son, just eat. The school bus'll be here any minute."

"Yes, pops." the boy 说 dejectedly.

The strife over breakfast between Sharon and Virgil Hawkins was not uncommon in the Hawkins household. The fifteen 年 old...
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posted by InfinityYJ
A/N: I AM SO SORRY! I've just been lazy. Sorry if this chapter sucks, I didn't really feel like 写作 the fight scene, which could be a problem because this whole freakin' fiction is a giant battle. *bangs head on desk* ARGH! Well, tell me what 你 think.

”Because now 你 get to die again.”
Fin growled furiously as Blade charged her again with her combat knife. This battle wasn’t getting any better, considering it’d been an 小时 and no one had made any progress. They’d started with hand-to-hand, Fin dodging her every move. She’d been forced into a defensive, considering how it was...
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posted by InfinityYJ
 Endgame
Endgame
So what if I'm late?! SCREW YOU!!!
I'm sorry, I didn't mean that...
Tell me in the 评论 who 你 would rather have roleplaying on here. Because I will roleplay as one of these three.
I'd prefer one of the girls... :3
but it's 你 choice!

Name: Carrie Hudnall
Alias: Endgame
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Occupation: Meta-Human Hero
Appearance: tan skin, dark brown eyes, short, pixie-cut black hair, thin, average height
Abilities/Powers: can see how someone dies and when they die, sees through hearing (which is superhuman), hand-to-hand and katanas
Personality: a little clueless and dumb, not to mention shy,...
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