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posted by cute20k

An idea popped into my head the other 日 and its been playing like a little movie in my head ever since. I really need to know if its any good, 或者 if the idea has already been used. Also I need 建议 for the characters and their names. I also appreciate constructive criticism and grammar and spelling. The names are temporary. I've never written a book that is completely in the present tense so please help me catch any tense mistakes! Um, oh yeah. It doesn't have a 标题 yet so if 你 have any suggestions just let me know!

(: Thanks!
-Carly

The story is jumbled a bit. It is because the characters...

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Anoxia- Ch.3

posted by Percysclique

Chapter 3 – A 心 Beats Faster
    Kaolin ran up the stairs of the dungeon. The guard had been asleep, but he could awake any time. His boots pounded on the stone floor. He prayed for them to be light and soundless.
    Kaolin torn down the corridor, his was 心 beating faster with every step. He knew his way around the castle. He had been here a few times before when he had visited Amorite.
    Kaolin had no idea what he was going to do. If he went 首页 with the jewels, the King would charge him of thievery. If he didn’t pay...

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爱情 kills chapter 8 part2

posted by hannah_vampire

I sat on my bed, All confused it sucked melissa asked me how and I didn't know which is the scary part not knowing I mean I could wake up and some vampire could be sucking my blood dry.

I had to find out more, I just can't stay here thinking all morning. I looked out the window to find Blair leaving for work, I ran downstairs and locked the door.I knew to look in the basement and then check the floorboards and the other room i wasn't allowed in. I spent about 2 hours looking for stuff, Well really anything that could help me and finally I found a box that
had necklaces, dairy's and most of all...

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Thoughtless (found this on a website)

posted by EmoKidSteven

blood fills the faces of my fantasies
no mercy,you're trying to put me down
i can see clearly as you're taking a 摇摆, 秋千 at me
come and i'll push 你 to the ground
what are 你 doing? what do 你 think this is doing to me?
you're taking all my faith
what are 你 leaving me now?!
i will make 你 suffer just like 你 made me suffer
i will watch 你 screaming and begging for forgiveness
all my hate can not be bound
i will not be bound 由 your darkest demons
so try to take my life and put me to the ground
i will follow 你 and torture 你 and i'll watch 你 screaming
look at the bloody faces smiling at you,taking 你 down and making 你 drown
i wanna kill 你 the same way 你 killed me
leaving me thoughtless
你 can try to tell me that i'm worthless
but 你 can not break me down
gonna take 你 down because nothing in this world is going to save me

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Still of the night ch.12

posted by TeamRosalieHale

12: Destination: Unknown

Once upon a time, in Rochester, New York, there lived a simple, silly, disillusioned girl named Rosalie Lillian Hale. For thirteen years, she believed that nothing would ever touch her-that she was invincible to all feeling and thought.
Until one 日 in mid-April while she was stepping on stones on the Genesee River and she 迷失 her balance. Despite knowing how to swim, the sudden fall caused her to panic and eventually drown. Fortunately, a dark haired, green-eyed 天使鸽子 in and pulled her out, then resuscitated her back to life. When she finally came to, she asked...

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Valentines Poem <3<3

posted by ScottishChic

The 日 of love,
Is here again,
This is tough,
From end to end,
A joyus occasion,
Is our salvation,
Without you,
I would be empty,
No one 由 my side,
No one to embrace me when I'm tired,
Stuck within a baracading window,
Wishing oh so much,
That 你 would show,
Just another day,
Where I would have to sit here and say,
Alone again,
Always alone,
Behind these eyes are tears of love,
你 are my one true,
Thank 你 honey,
For being with me,
I 爱情你 so,
Please,
Never ever leave me

由 ScottishChic, dedicated to all whom I 爱情 x

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dragons, werewolves, and imps /part 2/

posted by summerfrogs_bro

imp

One 日 I was walking down the 街, 街道 no one was there. I was scared I just kept walking I looked around the corner I felt a wisp of cold go down my back i looked around again because I knew there was something there I went 首页 and went to bed. I woke up the 下一个 morning I watched the window all morning I didn't care about school I was a loser anyway and the teachers hated me. I swear there was too many things wrong with me to go to school and my name is Raiden I know its so stupid is means thunder god in Japanese I mean it's so stupid but it was my great great great grandfathers name and...

ALL THE SINGER THAT I LIKE!!!!

posted by cristina876

Hello my name is Cristina Xtri ,i am 15 years old and i 爱情 every singer's songs because SONG IS MY LIFE and also if singers wasn't even here exist then there would be no songs and i wouldn't even listen to song but now singers are here my life in on a ROCK AND ROLL!!!! WELL want to say something i 爱情 every singer's songs well they are GREAT for me it is my LIFE!!

SINGERS THAT I KNOW :Katy Perry, Taylor Swift, Nicki Minaj,Justin Bieber, Rihanna, Ariana Grande, Selena Gomez,Jennifer Lopez, well i just 爱情 every singers !!

Well i wish all the singer a big GOOD LUCK!!!! and also i 爱情 every songs well they are great!! 嘿 all the singers make 更多 song for me please want to see 更多 !!! well just 爱情 every singer!!, well my 最喜爱的 song is WORK 由蕾哈娜 and what is yours?

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Mom

posted by Okuni

Just a short one-shot I thought of on the spot...Mother's 日 is coming so I thought, why not? It's not that good, just so 你 know...

I hate her. I really really hate her. Sure she's the woman who gave me my life. Sure she's the woman who raised me all the sixteen years I've been alive since my father left us shortly after my birth. But I cannot bring myself to 爱情 her. What has she ever done that actually made me smile? She has always been a cruel and selfish woman who would do anything to get what she wanted. She would gladly hurt others for her own benefit, even me, her own flesh and blood....

写作 Tips: How to Describe 颜色

posted by Britt601

We've all been there.

We've all seen it (at least once).

Perhaps even committed the "easy" crime.

You know what I'm talking about.

"His cheeks were red with embarrassment."

"Anna checked the balance sheets again, coming to a conclusion the the financials were a deep crimson."

"I stared into his blue eyes as deep as the ocean."

Colors, like anything else, are powerful descriptive pieces. When used as a comparison 或者 a contrast, the reader is painted a picture of the person/object's look and the setting as a whole. It should make the scene come together in a seamless flow.

For example, the "red with...

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Moonwalker The Series

posted by 7seablue7

MOONWALKER THE SERIES

Episode 1~ We meet again, setting hotel in New york (Hilton) 年 1982. Scean1
---------------------------------------------------------------Micheal: well we're here guys...... guys
hey what are yall lookin at?
Marlon: check out theses girls at the pool over
there... (practically drooling)

Michael : all 你 do is watch girls all the time man.. come on.

Jermaine;yeah marlon( laughing) although they cut
Michael: now 你 too Jermaine( annoyed)

Jermaine:Mic 你 can't lie to your self they look good.
Michael:your right.... they do (sighing) we gotta
hurry up and cheek into our rooms so we can get ready...

Hourglass - ch.1

posted by alicia386

Chapter One

Mason Montgomery auditioned 480 girls this week alone to play the part as 夏洛特 in his new movie, Hourglass. Hourglass was all about a woman who could stop time just to be with her love. Each girl he auditioned wasn't giving him what he wanted. All he wanted was a fair-looking girl with pretty eyes and a sensitive 心 but the girls he auditioned were anything but that. He tried being nice and say encouraging things but after the 248th girl he gave that a rest. Now he just 说 what came to mind like "You stink," 或者 "And 你 call yourself an actress? Get it outta here." He had...

My gift chapter4

posted by Kachetes

“why does she live in this side of town when 你 have a hous- joshua was asking but my glare clearly got to him
“look its not like we dont want her in our house ... She IS married and she didnt want financial help from any one.Lupita is a girl thats loud and proud in a way but Marc is a good guy they're happy I just wish they would...”
I stop we stood in front of a small house and it looked like we missed a good party 啤酒 cans and bottles al over the front yard,a few dosen 比萨, 比萨饼 boxes,three 狗 eating the leftovers,and one pretty lady passout on the grass;my aunt Lupita
“do I realy need...

What do 你 think?

posted by harrypotterbest

Should I continue 或者 not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]

For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of 吸血鬼 I had discovered. With all the raving stories of 吸血鬼 I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get 更多 information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...

Try My Life Chapter 6

posted by mitchie19

6. T H E C R U Z F A M I l Y

“Welcome, Mariah.” Aunt Lourdes’ hugged me while the maids took care of my stuff. “Your house is so big,” I complimented. My eye caught on the beautiful carved statue on the corner and the massive staircase.
I waved my black hair on my right shoulder.
The walls were covered in golden rod 壁纸 with a hint of yellow-green vines as the design. “Are 你 hungry? We’re about to eat lunch,” she looked at me.
I pursed my lips. “Um, yes,” considering the fact that I didn’t eat along the long way, made me hungry as I smelled the scent of the food...

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Shade of Grey

posted by Caleigh210

The feeling's unusual as I walk around
The sights are as strange as the sound
It's hard to believe that the beauty around me
Isn't beautiful in reality

How would 你 feel if all 你 know's a lie
That the truth is really hard to come by
When you're told that it's all alright
But all 你 see is the darkness of the night

When 你 realize
That the truth and the lies
Are separated 由 one thin line

Where can I find home
Even though I'm all alone
How can I say the right words
When I can't even 显示 the would
Who I am
Why I stand
That I'm completely 迷失 and I can't
Find my way
In this dreadful shade of grey

Hopelessly...

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Death Targets Ch.6

posted by problematic124

***Please don't copy***
Chapter 6
Death Targets
"From the Predator to the Prey"Aurora questioned 阅读 the note.
As soon as I read this I called them all to my house I also told them about the (bio) dad situation.
"So that's the same the person who turned off the power at Tweety's house" Ariel asked
"Had to be"Fable nodded "who else could it be"
"Should we tell the police"Owen asked
"It's like Gregg 说 we need hard cold facts this can also be counted as a joke"Tweety reminded us
"And it's like the note says he's never been caught before"Gregg told us
"We should fight back"Aurora 说 suddenly
"What!Fight...

The Movie's on part one

posted by lovepop

Everyone was 写作 it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!

Hidden Secret Chapter 5

posted by DxCFan123

I woke up at 5 AM. Not suprising. I went to the bath room and got ready. I grabbed some clothes and put them on. A white short that 说 "WHO CARES?" and black shorts. I put On knee socks with converse. I put my hair in a bun. I grabbed my backpack and glanced at the clock. 7:45?! Holy crap! I ran to school. When I got there, only 5 分钟 left until class. 7:55. Wow. Arent 吸血鬼 suspossed to nbe as fast as a bullet? I walked down the hall nervously. Everyone was staring at me. "How's that?" "Who the heck is she?" I wanted to tell the I was Samantha Fitzpatrick of The FitzPatrick Family...

Speechless Ch. 2

posted by para-scence

I got, yet another, chance of being adopted when I was fourteen. I was in my room, drawing when there was a soft knock at my door. I looked up to see Ms. Bayer smiling sheepishly. I grimaced. That woman can give children nightmares with that smile.

"Hecate, there's someone here to see you." I cocked my head to the side. The only person I was interested in seeing was Officer Truman, and he always just came to my room. I shook my head and returned to my sketch. "Hecate. Get your butt up and go down to the front 台, 办公桌 this instant!" I sighed and got off the bed, and followed Ms. Bayer down to the...