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Chapter Three

All throughout their patrol, it was all James could do to keep his attention (and eyes) on the task at hand. He was still going over the 小时 before patrol in his head, trying to make sense of it. Lily Evans, always the stoic one, afraid? It was hard to get his head around. Lily had always been the one to keep her head in the most panic-worthy of situations – like the time she found out that Remus is a werewolf.

It had been a particularly difficult full moon, the last one of their sixth 年 at Hogwarts. Wolf-Remus had been 更多 vicious than usual and both James and Sirius were sporting various wounds in different stages of blood clotting. They were trying – in vain – to restrain him before he did any 更多 damage to himself, the Shrieking Shack 或者 them, when finally dawn began to break and Remus began the difficult transformation back to his human self. James and Sirius settled down to watch, slightly wary. Sometimes, the aggression didn't quite fade away with the breaking of a new day, and even in his human form Remus would struggle against them, biting and scratching even in his weakened state. So far, tonight had had all the signs of one of those times.
Fifteen 分钟 later, Remus lay in a trembling heap on the ground, human again but not really looking it. 或者 表演 it – sure enough, as soon as James and Sirius, also in their human forms, got close enough, he began to snarl in a threatening manner.
“Relax, mate, it's just us. Moony? It's just us. Prongs and Padfoot.”
Snarl.
“Come on, mate we gotta go. Gotta get 你 up to the hospital wing.” Sirius jumped in. They were sort of circling around Remus, trying to get closer without making him threatened enough to attack – it had been known to happen. James signalled to Sirius, and wordlessly counted to three; on the third they pounced, restraining Remus as best they could, and still he struggled. James raised his eyebrows at Sirius, and he nodded: tonight was an extreme case. Sirius dug out his wand and whispered, “
Stupefy!
James hated having to Stun Remus, but some nights it was a necessity. There was no way they were going to get him up to the hospital wing with him struggling like that... but Madam Pomfrey was probably going to kill them.
They made their slow way to the base of the Whomping Willow, and James reached out his had to press the tiny knob that froze the branches. Usually that was Peter's job, Peter in his tiny 鼠, 大鼠 form... but Peter wasn't around, they hadn't seen him for days. James hoped he hadn't gotten himself into trouble, but he had 更多 important issues at hand. This was always the hardest part, getting an often unconscious Remus through the hole at the base of the 树 and into Hogwarts grounds. This time, however, something was different...
Lily Evans was standing 下一个 to the entrance of the tunnel, waiting with a stretcher and two bottles of water.
“I thought 你 might need these,” she 说 simply when she saw James' dumbfounded expression. “Come on, let's get Remus up to the hospital wing, 你 can stutter out your 问题 later.” She handed the water to the boys and helped them out of the hole before turning to Remus and heaving him out with surprising strength. “Guys, honestly. What's up? Do I look funny? Is something wrong?”
Silence.
“All right, then, why don't 你 help me with this battered werewolf? He needs medical attention, 你 know. As do you,” she added, eyeing the boys' cuts and bruises disapprovingly, and turning her attention back to Remus, now lying on the ground. The boys watched with open amazement as she sighed and levitated him onto the stretcher – apparently her strength wasn't limitless. With a last look over her shoulder, she started to guide the stretcher up to the castle, trusting the boys to follow her.
Finally, James' brain began to work again. “Hey! Evans! Evans, wait up!”
Exasperated sigh. “What now, Potter?”
“You can't just go barging into the 城堡 like that. People will see –“
“Honestly, Potter, here I thought 你 were smart. It's the crack of dawn, for Merlin's sake! And anyway, I cloaked us. 你 two are the only people who can see me 或者 this stretcher.”
“Huh. Guess you're 更多 than just a pretty face, Evans, yeah?”
Sirius walked up behind me. “Prongs, mate, if 你 haven't figured that out yet... you're screwed.” Evans just looked amused.
“Guys? The hospital wing?”
“Oh, right. Lead the way, fair lady!” James 说 with a mock bow, earning him another, equally exasperated sigh.


He smiled as he remembered the day.
“Knut for your thoughts?” Lily asked.
“Huh? Oh, I was just remembering the time 你 found out about Moony's... condition.”
“Oh, 你 mean the time 你 guys were so dumbstruck someone had figured out your great secret that I had to drag poor Remus up to the hospital wing all 由 myself?”
“Yeah, that would be the one.”
“But did 你 honestly think no one would ever figure it out?”
“Um... yes?”
Lily laughed. “Well, you're lucky not everybody is as smart as me, then.”
“That we are. But hey. 你 never did tell us – what tipped 你 off?”
“You mean apart from the fact that a) there's only so many times 你 can visit your sick insert relative here at full moon, b) few normal humans are afraid of full moons and c) 你 call him Moony?”
“... right. So 你 just, what, followed us one beautiful full moon?”
“No, silly. It's not like I'd put myself in the line of 火, 消防 – I watched from the window until I saw a wolf, a 麈, 牡鹿 and a dog disappear through the hole at the base of the Whomping Willow.” When she mentioned the 麈, 牡鹿 and the dog, James' expression froze noticably. Lily continued in an innocent tone, “Does Dumbledore know, 由 the way? That 你 two – and probably Peter too – are illegal Animagi?”
“About that... do 你 think 你 could, maybe, not tell him?”
“Who do 你 think I am, Severus?” James noted the obvious distaste with which she 说 the name of her former best friend and smiled to himself. He almost missed Lily continuing her sentence. “I'm not going to run to Dumbledore. Anyway, that's pretty impressive magic, turning yourself into an Animagus. How in the world did Peter manage?”
“He nearly didn't,” James 说 with a laugh. “The first time he changed, he nearly became a 鼠, 大鼠 forever.”
“McGonagall would probably have been proud,” she said, with just the tiniest hint of sarcasm. “But. My silence has one condition: you'll let me come with 你 on full moons.” All the humour was now gone from her expression.
“Lily, did 你 not listen in third-year Defence Against the Dark Arts? 狼人 are vicious during the full moon. They don't differentiate between friend and foe. Remus would tear 你 limb from limb.”
“But that's just the thing: from what I've seen, 你 guys get pretty torn up too. So what I'm proposing is this: 你 let me wait for 你 outside the passage, so in case 你 need back-up, someone knows where 你 are. So that if... if 你 don't come back at dawn, there'll be someone to alert Dumbledore.”
“Look, Lily, I'm touched that you'd do that for us... but it's too dangerous. What if we can't keep him in the Shack?”
“James, your concern is appreciated and all, but have 你 ever seen me Stun anyone? Not to toot my own horn 或者 anything.”
“Come to think of it... no, I haven't.”
“Well, let's just say 你 don't want me to demonstrate it on you.” She looked him square in the eye. “So. Deal 或者 no deal?”
“I'm going to have to talk it over with Sirius – and Remus is going to be extremely against this idea – but I say deal.”
“It better be.”

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James had been right: Sirius was against the idea because Lily was a girl, and specifically James' all-time dream girl, which was bound to equal distraction, and Remus because he didn't want to risk harming another person. Peter was not present, which was honestly not that surprising – they were seeing less and less of him that year.
“Guys, honestly. I don't know about you, but I'd feel better knowing there was someone that had our back – and Padfoot, before 你 start, it's not just because it's Lily.”
“Really?”
“Yes! Really. And besides, she 说 she'd go to Dumbledore if we didn't let her.”
“She 说 that?” Remus asked, his unwillingness clear in his expression.
“Well... not exactly. Not in those words. But it was very clearly implied.”
“As in...?”
“As in, 'My silence has one condition.'”
“Oh. So we pretty much have no choice?”
“I would say so.”
“Fine. But that doesn't mean I like it. What if she's seen?”
“She won't be – I'll leave her my Cloak.”
“And does she know she'll be left the Cloak?”
“As of right now? Nope.”
“Ah. Well, 你 better go tell her we agreed before we change our minds, Prongs.” James gave them a grateful smile before leaving his old dorm and heading towards the Heads' Quarters, a slight spring in his step.

––––––––

“So they agreed.” Lily stated, a triumphant expression on her face.
“Yeah, but there's one thing: 你 can't be seen.”
“Why?”
“And here I thought 你 were 更多 than just a pretty face...” James teased, earning him a 拍击, smack, 味道 on the arm. “Anyway, don't 你 think people would wonder if they saw 你 sitting out the night 由 the Whomping Willow once a month?”
“You do have a point. But no worries, I can do a decent Disillusionment Charm.”
“Ah, but 你 don't need to,” he 说 mysteriously.
“How else do 你 suggest on making me invisible, then?”
Wordlessly, James pulled the Invisibility 披风, 斗篷 out of his school robes.
“James – is that – an Invisibility Cloak?”
He drew it around himself, leaving only his head visible. “Does this answer your question?”
“It – yes. But is it an actual Invisibility Cloak? Not just a normal 披风, 斗篷 with some charm cast on it? But... however did 你 get it?”
“It's been in family for ages and ages, and it's still going strong – so I guess it must be real, not that I ever thought about it.”
“So I suppose now I know how you've managed all your pranks?”
“Yep.”
“And I'm not supposed to tell anyone?”
“Uh, yeah. 你 understand, right?”
“That the secrets of the almighty Marauders must be kept secret, lest their credibility goes? Yeah, I understand.”
“Awesome.”

–––––––

“All right, all right! Guys. Calm down, okay?” It was the third week of school, and James was trying to calm the Prefects down at their weekly meeting. “We – that is, your amazingly wonderful Head Girl and I –“ Lily smacked his arm for what had to have been the tenth time that week, and it was only Tuesday “– have some news for you.”
A chorus of 'Ooooh's rose up, and James kicked himself for not having worded that better. “Regrettably, not that.” He fully expected another smack, but even Lily seemed to have grown tired of the constant violence. “Yes, well, anyway, my point was this: seeing as 你 all now that dark forces are at work, yadda yadda yadda, there's a war coming and so forth, we've decided that the students – especially the younger ones – need some entertainment in the dark winter months ahead. Which is why... we've decided to hold a Winter Ball – well, that's what it will officially be called. In actual fact, this is how it's going to be: around seven pm on a 日 that is yet to be decided, the entire school will meet in the Great Hall for a feast...” Lily tuned out James' speech – she had no need to listen to him explaining the event they'd planned just last week. She did, however, marvel at how eloquent James seemed to be while addressing the Prefects. They seemed to almost... respect him? No, that wasn't possible. This was James Potter, after all: he may have commanded many things, but respect – unless it was from a fellow prankster – was not often one of those things.
Huh. Maybe he really has changed.
1 being the best 10 the worst
These 图书 are great for summer 阅读 I can honestly say that anyone that reads them will want to read them again.

10. Deacula 由 Bram Stoker
9. The Hobbit 由 Tolken
8. I'm the king of the 城堡 由 Susan Hill
7. 1984 由 George Orwell
6. The secret diary of Adrian 痣, 鼹鼠 由 Sue Townsend
5. Pride and prejudice 由 Jane Austine
4. Jane Eyre 由 夏洛特 Bronte
3. Lord of the Flies 由 William Golding
2. The curious incident of the dog in the nighttime 由 Mark Haddon
1 Rebecca 由 Daphne du Maurier
posted by ejenk1025
Chapter 2

I pull into the driveway of the cafe. I look into my rear view mirror. I look good. (Laugh) I get out of the car then fix my clothes. I'm ready. Just be yourself. Ok. I'm walking in. Don't fall. Don't fall .. He sees me. Just walk up to him.

"Hey."
"Hey. Glad 你 could make it." 说 Lucas
"I'm glad 你 could make it, too."
"Well. I work here so..." 说 Lucas
"You work here? Cool."
"Yeah. This is actually my mom's cafe. Let me introduce you." 说 Lucas
"Oh goody." I 说 nervously

Good impression. Good impression. Good impression.

"Mom, this is Brooke. Brooke, my mom." 说 Lucas
"Pleasure...
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posted by ZekiYuro
Whatever 食物 you're looking for-an all-you-can-eat breakfast,a quick lunch,a romantic dinner-you'll find it in San Francisco.The city is 首页 to over 4500 restaurants and eating places.And they're not only for tourists.On average,San Franciscans eat out 267 times a year.

You can eat 食物 from anywhere in the world,from 阿富汗 to Argentinian,and from Vietnamese to vegetarian.With Mexican fast food,Italian bakeries,hundreds of Thai,Chinese,Vietnamese,and Korean restaurants,and in-and-out Japanese noodle shops,it's possible to eat your way round the world during a single San Francisco weekend....
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Five

Mason met Olivia at his 最喜爱的 restaurant. It was a perfect 日 for a 晚餐 date. The sun was shinny, the clouds were extra white, and the 草 seemed greener then ever. If only she knew that this was a 晚餐 date. He signed the last autograph for today as Olivia sat across from him at their round table. Her hair was curly and in a ponytail. Then she wore a red dress with a thick, black 带, 皮带 in the middle. His 秒 impression of her was still the same, gorgeous. This 日期 was going pretty well but Cassidy dresses better. Mainly because Cassidy is rich but he didn't want to...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Four

Olivia was extra busy today. Today was the first 日 of the movie shoot for Hourglass. Before they could even start recording the movie, the would have to check up on everything. The wardrobe had to perfect. The scenes had to be accurately planned out. Then they had to make sure that all of the camera crew was positioned. Olivia wouldn't be able to receive the permits until tomorrow. So they couldn't start filming until then. She followed closely behind Mason as he did the daily check up.

Mason went straight towards wardrobe and the outfit choices. The outfit for Charlotte's arrival...
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Remembering is just an invention of the mind,
So 你 need not try to remember something,
你 remember it automatically.
Which is the best thing that 你 could have.

The good times that we had...
It is placed in a portion of your mind.
The bad times that we had...
It is placed in the other part of your mind.

你 try to forget all of the bad things that happened,
But it is not possible.
It is stuck in you.
The bad things are painted in ink on your heart.

The good things, 你 try to remember.
And they stay.
They never go.
Never leave you.

Remembering is just an invention of the mind.
And, well...I guess I'm happy for that.
So I can remember every friend I've had,
Every boyfriend,
And all the good times.
Every memory will never leave my heart.
They will never be forsaken.
Never.
posted by Problematic129
*Poem I wrote for a class project on the holocaust.
DON'T COPY*
Different in ways they couldn't control
Killed for reasons we do not know
Ranging from ages young to old
The innocent people were taken from homes
Soulless people did not care
That the Jewish were in despair
Concentration camps ending their screams
Breaking apart their families
Not once did they do anything wrong
They opened their mouths and sang a sad song
Years went 由 and 更多 pain came
Until on one very special day
As one we all saved
The survivors of the Holocaust
posted by hatjune
It is 120 years into the future and the Rights Organization is stronger than ever. They are killing 更多 people than ever and there are only three people that can save the World and they are children. Jordan is a thirteen 年 old witch and is the daughter of the Greek god sun, Apollo. Mark, a fourteen 年 old wizard who is the son of Demeter. And last but not least Ivy is a thirteen 年 old daughter of Ares and a great witch. These three children are the worlds only hope. Read Half and Half, The Begining of the End.
Stan, the young donkey, was wandering sadly around the barn. He seemed hopeless and wounded and had no desire to speak to any of his fellow donkeys; even talking to his father was not appealing to him that exact moment. In fact, he was feeling ashamed of having a donkey father. He was ashamed of being a donkey altogether.
As the moon and stars scattered across the dark, blue sky, Stan decided he no longer to wander. He needed some solution, he needed reassurance, and only his grandfather seemed appropriate for that particular job.
Grandpa Roger was sleeping peacefully in the barn. He had become...
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Bane’s POV

I laid in the grass, watching the clouds. I was beginning to dose off, right before sleep took me, a body pounced on me. I groaned, and looked up. A shaggy haired boy was sitting on my chest, giggling. My best friend, Christian.
    “Get off!” I yelled rolling over. He slid off me.
    “Party pooper,” Christian stuck his tongue out at me. He was so childlike, but that was something I had always loved about him. That’s also why we got along so well. He was hyperactive and loud, while I was cynical and quite.
    I...
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posted by Hades223
CHAPTER 1


Jason Card sat at his 台, 办公桌 in his science classroom bored out of his mind. He hated science. It was his least 最喜爱的 subject. Mainly because it was the last subject of the 日 and 由 that time Jason was usually ready to go home.
Mr. Form droned on and on about chemicals 或者 something. Jason didn’t listen. He just sat at his 台, 办公桌 and drew on some paper. He was a very good drawer.
Jason Card was a fourteen 年 old as of yesterday. His black messy hair never gave in to a brush which usually meant it was mangled and messy and went down to his ears. He was wearing a simple red t-shirt...
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posted by lindizzle215
hi so im a new writer so please tell me if i should contine 写作 this story. Please comment!!!!!
Rated: M


Today my brother Joey and I were going to drive down to the family camp that we help with every 年 and went here when we were kid’s but know were all teenagers so were counselors now. My brother Joey and I drive together every 年 and all of our other brothers drive up in there own cars 或者 the young ones with the others. There was a new guy this 年 his name is Eddie. I think that I will like this kid as I get to know him. I don’t have to share a room because I am the only girl...
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posted by cullens-rule
Chapter 4 Tom

“it would be easier if 你 knew, but I will try to explain, as well as I can, 你 know my name is Tom but my 秒 name is Cullen”
I interrupted him now
“Tom Cullen? Sounds old fashioned”
“It is, any way I’m just seventeen”
He looked away sheepishly like he was lying this made me curious would he really lie about his age.
“my real parents are dead now, they died of an illness I don’t really know much about them”
“I sorry that must be 心 braking”
He looked miserable he looked into my eyes and I could feel his pain, but he carried on
“I take after my father...
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This was my first fanfic, I've been posting this story on my spot, but I want to see what some different 粉丝 think of it.I only have 3 或者 4 who actually read it so I'm not sure....please please comment.I need your opinion and If I'm bad just tell me, kay?

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Painful Memories
Chapter One



I was sitting at my vanity. I started brushing my long golden waves. I was preparing myself. I knew Edward would be 首页 soon. Charlie had Edward leave every night at a certain time. Of course Edward would just go back once Charlie was asleep. He chose to go to...
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posted by e2mma2weasle3
How to Add Emotion to a Story

1.    Understand 密码 或者 Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. 你 could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one 由 cuddling up to the dead body.

2.    Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human 或者 an animal.

3.    Add comedy to the...
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posted by sapherequeen
*Sigh* Okay, this is the first piece of 写作 I will ever share with anyone. Rarely does the idea of a poem ever enter my dark mind. But tonight, just two 分钟 ago, this one came to me, and I had to...write...it...down...


I’m aching here
I’m bleeding there

Pain strikes within
My every move

And there’s
Nothing
I Can
Do
To Make It
Stop

The tears roll down my face
And freeze there quickly
And stay until the time comes
Where they are no longer frozen
And begin to stream down again

My hurt was bottled up
But someone broke the bottle
And now it’s
Everywhere
And there’s nothing
I Can
Do
To Heal Myself

I’m...
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“Look at them, trying to figure it out. Trying to work out why a pure-blood has come to their school, Antiworld, huh? This could be fun”. There was a young man sitting on the 最佳, 返回页首 of a gargoyle wearing a white 衬衫 with a black 涂层, 外套 over it. His eyes where a light green with a black cat eye stroke through it. As the man stood up 你 saw that he had pitch black hair and his skin was white like paper. As 你 closed in on the man’s face 你 saw his eye drop a line of blood down his cheek, as if he was crying blood. The man looked up at the sun covering his face with his hand, he closed his...
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嘿 guys! I just wrote this poem. I haven't written a poem in quite a while, maybe a year, and this one's an attempt to get back on the poem 写作 path. Well hope 你 like it, and please, if possible, add a 评论 saying what 你 think.

Me and Those

Ever noticed that in this life
Everyone wants 你 to do something,
或者 be something
That sometimes 你 don’t want to be?

They are those!
你 know them!
你 probably have those in your house.
They are those who expect 你 to take a path,
Even though,
Sometimes,
你 don’t want to take.

They are those who expect 你 to be great,
Even though,
Sometimes,
你 prefer to be small and humble.

But do 你 think,
For the slightest second,
That they care about that?
They don’t!

They are your parents,
Your grandparents,
Your Uncles and aunts,
That since 你 were born,
Came up with a path for 你 in life.

But know this,
And say it to yourself:
They are those, they matter,
But me is I,
And I’m the main character.
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

She screams every time a police officer 或者 strange nurse touches her. She refuses to hear them out. So, until further notice, she is staying in my apartment.

I glance at the clock in the waiting room. It's past midnight. Wow. Jamie and Ashleigh are asleep on a small green couch, with a receiving blanket draped over them. I pick them both up, since Kayla and I are free to leave, and we all walk outside to my car. Kayla opens the back door, and while I'm strapping the two little girls in, I signal for her to get in on the passenger side.

She's a broken person. 你 only need to look at her...
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posted by livethislifeup
It's harder to forgive than to forget,
vice-versa, either way, it's still a threat,
time passes, memory flashes,
you're rememberin'
thoughts are coming in
no way to escape it, its a no win.
drives 你 insane, 你 try to up your game,
tell yourself they'll regret it and they'll live in shame,
just cause they dragged your name,
across every damn lane,
and 你 got hurt every time, yeah 你 still in pain,
and it ain't the same, 你 all tense around them,
and 更多 anger do 你 gain.
Deep down it's still hurtin' you
like every wound would,
it's like a throbbing cut
that keeps your eyes tight shut,
and 你 sound out...
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