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Should there be a romance in the story I'm writing?

I'm 写作 a story and I don't know if I should add a little romance. I feel like it'd be a bit too predictable to do it between to two main characters (the male protagonist is Milo, and Lina isnt a main character but she's still really impotant) but the only other character I could see being with Milo isn't really into romantic relationships. Plus I plan to kill her off. That might work, (especially since I named her after an 日本动漫 character who dies; the main character of the 日本动漫 was in 爱情 with her.)

I still feel like it's predictable though, but what do 你 think. I feel like I'd end up killing off the other person.
 BennieBear27 posted 一年多以前
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Firewriter said:
Well, the 描述 of the story is a little rough, but it sounds like it could be interesting. All stories have a climax and a resolution, and all the events leading up to the climax. (Which could be a lot.) Here is just an idea, 你 could have Milo fall in 爱情 with the character 你 want to kill off. And eventually, when she dies, he gets really really sad and depressed and the other girl helps him 或者 something? Idk. Just an idea, but I hope it helps. I really do think 你 should add some romance.
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posted 一年多以前 
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That's what I would do if I added it
BennieBear27 posted 一年多以前
Nric said:
A romances is often superfluous in stories. I don't think that this necessary.
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That's what I was thinking, too. But it could still work. I wasn't sure so wanted some help.
BennieBear27 posted 一年多以前
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